Date: Jul 12, 2011 06:51 am Title: Chapter 55
YES! YES! YES!!!!! THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN LIVING FOR! FINALLY TATI MIGHT GET SOME ANSWERS!
I know what Michael is trying to do, but I really hope poor tati doesn't fall for it, she deserves so much better than that.
Author's Response:
HAHAHA!! I knew you'd might enjoy that lol. And i agree--Tatiana deserves a lot better. Michael better not pull her into his drama.
Date: Jul 12, 2011 04:03 am Title: Chapter 55
OMG... revenge with Tatiana? Oh hell no! this is bad, really really really bad! I knew his reaction was going to be bad, and in a way, im glad that he kicked her out. She needed to be shunned for a while for taking a precious life away from him. He didnt even know he was having a child, and i knew that hurt him. But revenge with Tati? I dont know about that. Maybe he will come to his senses and realize that this isnt what needs to happen!
Love this story. It was an excellent update!! :)
Author's Response:
Oh, i hope he comes to his senses too!! Revenge is NEVER a good way to go--especially after all that they've been through. no more drama please!! lol
glad you enjoyed it!! hope you stay tuned!!
Date: Jul 12, 2011 03:45 am Title: Chapter 55
Smh. Well I can't say I blame Michael.for being hurt or angry. Vanessa was a complete dumb ass for what she did and I still don't feel sorry for her.. however, regardless of the trifling shit she did, she has NEVER cheated on him. If he dies anything with Tatiana, she needs to be done with Michael..period. He better not cheat on her. Regardless of how hurt and angry he is, I think they can work through this. Hell does Vanessa even know about that visit from Diana awhile ago?? This is the wrong way to go about it Michael. If his lil narrow ass does some fucked up shit, he will lose Vanessa for GOOD. And bony desperate ass Thumbtzen is NOT worth it. Think Michael!!!
Author's Response:
HAHA!!! Yes--THINK MICHAEL!!! lol he's living in his anger which is not good and revenge is childish. i never understood why people who claim to love each other play games like that to hurt each other. they need to be fixing the situation--not making it worse. but he hasn't done anything YET--so let's see if he comes to his senses.
thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2011 03:30 am Title: Chapter 55
Lol my other review was lame.
Wow this truly was a powerful chapter. I totally understand that why michael reacted that way, he had every right to be angry and upset. I love key! Man everyone needs a true friend like that, that will always help you out but tell you the truth with no sugar coating. Aww his mom is adorable she always was looking out for him and i respect her so much for that. I know itll take a while for thngs to get better with him & nessa but im hoping things will be okay. Omg i cant believe hes going back to tatiana, michael please oh please dont do something stupid! Oh lord, cant wait for the next part:))! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Yeah Key is awesome. She's brutally honest, but that's exactly what Vanessa needs in her life. And Mama Katherine and Michael seem so much alike so she KNOWS when he's hurting--that's her baby lol.
Michael needs to stop for a second and be rational about the whole situation. Why make a bad situation worse?? But then again-- men are a trip!! LOL
thanks for reading and always leaving GREAT reviews!! lol stay tuned!
Date: Jul 12, 2011 02:57 am Title: Chapter 55
This was so good. I felt for Michael, his pain and anger. I'm glad Vanessa got everything out and I'm happy she has a friend like Key who understands her. I feel sorry for Vanessa now. She seems so lost most of the times I hope one day Michael can forgive her shes in love with that man. Michael is confused, hurt and angry. when you feel all those at once the results of your actions are not good.hopefully Michael wont take his revenge rush to far. but then again Vanessa did push him to the edge.but Vanessa is still very much in his heart. He needs to to remember that
Bless mama Katherine lol, all she wants to do is help her baby. keep on praying Kat.
Author's Response:
YES! i agree with everything you've said. Vanessa is a tad bit lost and continues to make terrible decisions, but she's learning. it'll only make her a strong person in the end--hopefully. and Michael needs to be more rational in his thinking right now. He loves that girl no matter what--and he knows deep down inside he doesn't want to hurt her like that. But, a man's anger is nothing to underestimate so idk--we will see.
thanks for reading and stay tuned dear!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2011 01:10 am Title: Chapter 55
Ohhh God, I even don’t know where to start. I was waiting for that moment of truth, but didn’t know that it would be so cruel and harsh. First of all Vanessa should have phrased about being pregnant little be differently. She didn’t lie!!!! First she thought she was pregnant, and then she had that bleeding, and thought it was just late period!!!! I know that Vanessa telling Mike that baby was sick was stupid. But he didn’t know that her LIFE was in danger too, because he didn’t know all of that medical stuff. For a man to have child is not a big problem, one can even have a surrogate for it, but a true love is once, maximum twice in a lifetime. And the way he kicked her out on the street was way too cruel, he could have at least get her a ticket back to California. If she was a total liar she wouldn’t tell him the truth, and no one would ever found out. Bitter truth is always better then a sweet lie!!!!! And now he wants a REVANGE??? So childish Mike!!!! He even didn’t let her explain everything fully; he should have talked to her after his anger subsided!!! And now Tatiana??? She is the only reason they got where they got!!!! She is the only reason they lost the baby!!!! How many single girls do the abortion when they find out, because they are at loss? And technically they were not together then!!! And he is thinking about revenge? So stupid Mike to involve someone who destroyed their happiness!!! I hope he is going to regret it even more then Vanessa regretted her abortion!!!!! And if he is going to have anything with Tatiana he doesn’t deserve Vanessa. I wouldn’t take him back even he is the most famous entertainer in the world!!!! Because that’s called cheating!!! Uggggh… I would strangle that bitch Tatiana with my bare hands lol………… I’m just glad that Vanessa has such good friend!!!......... Please write another chapter ASAP, don’t let us hanging for too long. Just please!!!! Amazing job on this chapter!!! <3<3!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Poor Tatiana getting sucked back into all of the DRAMA smh. Yeah, Michael's in revenge mode which is not mature and it's not fair because, like you said, Vanessa didn't get the chance to FULLY explain the situation. it was hard enough for her to get out the bit that she did say and he wasn't really willing to hear anything more. She definitely should've fought to stay and talk it over with him, but Michael was only going to listen to so much--especially after he heard that she killed his baby. That's gotta be the most painful thing to hear from somebody you loved and trusted with all of your heart. Maybe down the road he'll be able to see and understand her side of the story, but right now--Mike's only seeing red.
THANKS so much for reading and leaving AWESOME feedback!! you guys are what keeps this story going so--thank you!!
Date: Jul 12, 2011 01:03 am Title: Chapter 55
damn mike to wrongs dont make a right i guess he just gone have to learn like vanessa did
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2011 12:39 am Title: Chapter 55
Oo Liberian girl. That was poetic justice. Vanessa got what she deserved. Poor Michael.
That first part of the update was powerful girl. Big ups on drawing me into the emotion of the moment.
I felt Michael’s loneliness, hurt, and isolation in that first part. Great job.
But girl, why ya gotta make Michael the bad guy now? I’m happy with Vanessa in that role.
I mean, chamone girl. That’s waaay over the top. I wouldn’t even say Vanessa deserves what it seems Michael has up his sleeve.
She does deserve some kinda punishment. But I dunno about... Hmm…We’ll see. I do love me some drama girl.
But don’t leave us hanging too long. Great update.
Author's Response:
HA!! i know, i know LOL. But Michael hasn't done anything wrong YET--so we'll see what happens!!
thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2011 12:15 am Title: Chapter 55
Oh my goodness...Mike...please don't make an already ugly situation uglier. Stay away from Tat, tell her to go home now! Hurting Vanessa back is extremely childish, and it may feel better at the moment, but once that crap's all over with, he'll feel regretful. Don't do it, Mike. Think!
I hope that they can work out their problems. Its clear that they need each other.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2011 01:14 am Title: Chapter 54
Aww...I'm still waiting for an update! Can't wait until the next chapter! Please continue!
Author's Response:
Sorry it took me so long lol. i was going through a "real life" break up, which is making it even MORE difficult to write what Vanessa and Michael are going through at the moment. but i WILL get through!! lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2011 07:31 am Title: Chapter 54
Oh no you didn't leave us hanging like this girl! Oo, I can't stand Vanessa's lying, baby-killing a$$. Now I gotta wait a whole nother however long before you update till Michael dumps her retarted a$$. Great update girl. Vanessa's a bitch though. I hope she...Oo, I can't stand her stupid a$$. Killing my baby's baby without even giving him any options. That's some selfish b!tch sh!t. I'm still quite upset about her bullsh!t. I hope Michael kicks her to the curb.
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!!! you know you ALWAYS crack me up with your reviews. can't say that i don't agree with you on some of the things you're saying though. Vanessa was VERY selfish and i think we all know Michael is going to have a hard time forgiving that.
glad you're still reading dear. stay tuned!!
Date: Jul 01, 2011 11:54 am Title: Chapter 54
Oh shiiiiiitt...It's about to go down :O
Author's Response:
that is an understatement LOL.
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2011 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg...girl, why you gotta scare me so? Its not right to leave us hanging on the edge! You gotta update soon, boo. I'm like...nervous as hell now. Mike's nervous...Vanessa's nervous. This is just not good. & Vanessa got her nerve to be making Mike all self-conscious. She's supposed to be the one lifting his spirits, making him feel good & loved, and putting him to sleep (that's the really fun part). I can't wait for an update - this will be interesting to say the least.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2011 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 54
Omg superrr cliff hanger! Wow im happy she'll finally own up and tell him. Omg cnt wait for the next chpaterrr pleaseeee update soon
Author's Response:
LOL!! i know!! i had to to do it!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2011 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 54
awww why would you stop there!!!!! update tmrw or tonight plzzz!!!!
Author's Response:
SORRY!!! lol