[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2011 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 56
Im hoping itll let me leave a proper review now. Lol im happy michael didnt become a full blown dick and do something with tatiana. I like them as friends hah but only friends :) i wonder how long itll be before he decides to talk to nessa again. Cnt wait for the next partt
Author's Response:
LOL!!! i wonder why it wouldn't let you leave a review?? weird lol.
but anyway--i'm glad Michael didn't do anything either. that would've been a whole new level of mess to clean up with Vanessa. glad he thought about it. now let's hope he stops being a baby and FINALLY talks to her.
thanks for still reading dear!!! stay tuned for more!!
Date: Jul 21, 2011 08:30 am Title: Chapter 56
Good chapter. Im glad Tatiana is going to move on.... thats some awesome news! But i dont like that creepy ass housekeeper. She gives me the creeps. Poor Michaels all creeped out too. Something needs to be done with her!
Wonderful update.... cant wait for more from you! :)
Author's Response:
LOL!! yeah--i've got a feeling she's going to be trouble. but Michael's got a good intuition too so maybe he'll get rid of her before she does anything crazy.
THANKS for still reading!!! stay tuned!!
Date: Jul 21, 2011 06:23 am Title: Chapter 56
Oh my. Oh, my my my, :(
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2011 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 56
So Mike told Tati the truth, but this heffa is not truly facing the facts - she still thinks that one day they could be more...ughhh...he just cannot be friends with her. He's smarter than that. Come on...
& ignoring Vanessa is bad. He needs to talk to her, let her do most of the talking since she's the one who needs to explain.
Author's Response:
Ha!! I agree though. Michael and Tatiana might need to put their friendship on the back-burner for a while if he wants to keep a relationship with Vanessa.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2011 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 56
LOVED IT!!! UPDATE TMRW
Date: Jul 20, 2011 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 56
OMG I'm so glad nothing happened between them. But come on Mike, go to Vanessa.....It's not easy to forgive, but you love her and she certainly does love you!
I hope when he goes up to his room and he thinks right
Why do I have a feeling we haven't seen the end of Tatianna!!???
Can't wait till Mike goes to Vanessa and forgives her, I HOPE
Keep loving this story more and more...
Author's Response:
Yay!! Glad you're still enjoying it!!
thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2011 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 56
Now I hate Tatiana even more!!! LOL. The woman is selfish, and being “friends” with Michael is not what she wants! Is he that stupid??? I know that in my previous review I told if Mike would make something stupid with Tatiana than he really didn’t deserve Vanessa. But for some odd reason, after reading this chapter I wished something happened between those two, and Mike’s stubborn little ass being guilty!!! That would make them a little bit closer to even! I don’t want to delve on old stuff, but if I remember correctly Tatiana gave him a framed picture of both of them as a sign of their friendship. Does he still have it?
Also, I really hate when girls beg too much. And that is what Vanessa has been doing for weeks now. Girl don’t fall too low and learn how to keep the head high!!! Mike should grow up and act like a man, at least she deserved a conversation. Vanessa has been honest with him, while Mike kept secrets like a kiss with Diana, or that little gift of Tatiana I’m assuming he still has. I guess Mike’s revenge plan would work. Inviting the woman that destroyed their relationship into his house for the first time, and taking her to the Ferris Wheel? I really do want Vanessa to find out about that one too!!! So who is going to spill the bins? Zelda? Great chapter as always, I’m losing my mind over here thinking what will happen next LOL….. can’t wait for mooooooore!!! :) <3!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!!! you're getting ahead of ME!! lol
I think more than anything, Michael just wanted to "clear the air" with Tatiana. But he did invite her over with intentions of doing more than that to get back at Vanessa. But he didn't, thankfully, because he thought about the consequences of that--something that both Michael and Vanessa need to learn to start doing.
And Tatiana seems like she just wanted closure. But she's still stuck in "fan girl" mode--she thinks Michael is a god or something and she's willing to do almost anything to be near him. He's aware of that and knew she'd be an easy call--that's why he invited her over. But now that he's pretty much come clean, maybe she truly does understand her place with him.
BUT...lol--the wheels in the back of her head are still turning trying to figure out how to be with him. Soooo--i don't know!! lol it's complicated i guess.
there's a lot of cleaning up to do--on both parts.
thanks for reading!!! and thanks for leaving the BEST reviews!!! i appreciate it!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2011 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 56
that's right! go head girl, get your closure, keep a small flame of hope, but MOVE ON! This was EXACTLY what was needed, LiberianGirl, thank you thank you thank you! I'm glad Michael did the right thing, so Tati gets it and she's gone! I do hope they can actually really be friends because I think Tati cud make a good friend for him. Great great chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL!! i'm glad you enjoyed it. i feel like in this story--and somewhat in real life--Michael felt bad for the way he handled the Tatiana situation. And perhaps, if he was single and was at a different point in his life, he might've been able to feel something more for Tatiana. But Vanessa's already got a hold of his heart--even if he is livid with her at the moment.
Maybe they'll be friends down the road...maybe not. But we'll see!!
thanks for reading and commenting!!
Date: Jul 20, 2011 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 56
Smh. Well at least he told bony's ass the truth, but he can't be friends with her. She acts too much like a damn fan girl. And for that ugly ass named woman Zelda, I have a feeling she's gonna run her damn mouth. Michael and Vanessa need to talk. I hope he tells her he called that bony ass girl over too. They need to get it together or leave it alone. For good.
Author's Response:
Right!! I have a bad feeling about Zelda, too. but it seems like Michael does too so maybe he'll keep his eye on her.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2011 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 56
Oh thank you love
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2011 04:02 am Title: Chapter 55
omg great chapter!!! I just wanna say I agree with martovska's review so much they are so right! Michael is making a big mistake & I hope he realizes it before the love is ruined forever because if he does do anything with tatiana vanessa has every right not to forgive him! because although she has made mistakes in her life the poor girl has been through so much & was so honest with michael I don't think he's being fair to her at all! Anyways I love your story! can't wait for a new update!!
Author's Response:
i agree also!! he shouldn't be acting on his anger like that. Even though she did do an AWFUL thing, at least she told him at some point. he should give her credit for that at least. but he's not hearing any of that right now. he's just hurt. hopefully he doesn't make things worse and gives him and Vanessa another shot. we'll see!!
thanks for reading dear!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2011 12:38 am Title: Chapter 55
Aw hun, I'm sorry that you're dealing with a real life break up - they always suck, but yes, you will make it through it.
This story is a really creative outlet for you to cope with the break up, no lie. Its a nice way to vent. Anyhow, I know you'll be just fine =)
Author's Response:
Awww thanks dear!! And YES--it does help to cope when i'm writing this story. just trying not to mix MY emotions into it is the hard part lol. it'll be fine...and i will FINISH this story if it kills meeeee!!! lol
Date: Jul 12, 2011 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1
You have to update soon..asap..place..this is so good lyke soap. Operas ....Yuk tatiana...y not lisa
Date: Jul 12, 2011 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh no Michael!!! Revenge with Tatiana? He'll regret it, I know he will. He's so hurt and angry right now, he's not in his right mind.
He has to fix things fast with Vanessa before there's more damage.
Great update my friend, always looking for more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2011 06:52 am Title: Chapter 55
Noooooo Michael, What The Fuck are YOU Doing!!!!!!!!
OMG please tell me you are going to be updating soon :D
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!!!