Date: Aug 08, 2011 04:17 am Title: Chapter 58
Mm.. good chapter. I still feel like Vanessa shoulda kept her ass in that bedroom. I feel like she's not letting Michael come to her, open back up to her. He's still hurting and all her trifling ass cares about is getting a nut/having sex. SMH. Maybe I'm just still upset with her but I still feel like she's tryna force her way back in and make the relationship how it used to be, and right now it's not there yet. It needs time and lots of nurturing. Falling back into the same routine of sex isn't gonna change anything, and I bet the next thing her ass is gonna try to do is get pregnant again. Ugh. Yeah, I still don't like her again yet. LOL. I actually am ready to see her reaction about Tatiana visiting Neverland. I bet that'll simmer her ass down.
Author's Response:
HA!! lol yeah, maybe Vanessa was little "forward" in her advances--but i don't think it was to just "get a nut" lol. that's her MAN and she doesn't want to lose him. sure, it takes time to get back to that point, but she also knows she has to do a little more work to make Michael believe in them as a couple again. that's why she's so bold--plus, that's just her personality, i'm afraid lol.
Besides, Michael finally initiated the sex--not Vanessa.
Who knows? maybe you'll come back around to her lol. and if not, hey--we all have our own opinions and feelings =)))
thanks for reading dear! stay tuned for more!
Date: Aug 08, 2011 04:03 am Title: Chapter 58
oh i feel cheated how u just gone stop there lol love this
Author's Response:
LOL!!!! i had to do it lol. thanks for reading!!
Date: Aug 08, 2011 04:03 am Title: Chapter 58
oh i feel cheated how u just gone stop there lol love this
Date: Aug 06, 2011 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 57
Determinated. Thats what Vanessa was and she fiinally got her man back. I agree with Michael they should wait on the love making.
I needed to read this. this has inspired me to do something about my personal problems. thanks Liberian.
Author's Response:
oh wow!! it's so good to hear that anything you write has touched a person--ESPECIALLY if it inspires them to do something. sooooo glad i could do that for you! i hope that you're able to work out whatever it is love.
thank YOU.
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2011 03:11 am Title: Chapter 57
Okay, good. We have a resolution & Nessa & Mike are back together! I'm so happy about that. They really do need each other.
I can understand Mike wanting to wait a little while to fully rekindle the flame.
& I can also understand him for still being upset/disappointed about Vanessa aborting their baby without discussing it with him first. He is completely entitled to feeling all of those emotions. I'm just happy that they're working towards working it out.
Author's Response:
Yes. FINALLY they're both acting like adults. let's hope they continue on that streak lol.
Date: Aug 04, 2011 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 57
I'm glad they talked but Vanessa still ain't on my good side. Her ass deserves to feel bad every time she sees Michael interact with kids. Hmph. I still don't think I want her to have his baby.. not until I feel she's worthy. And I hope Michael makes her ass wait a lil longer before they have sex again.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! still mad at Vanessa, huh? well, what she did was pretty rotten so i do understand. she's going to have to work for it for sure. and i think that whole abortion ordeal messed with both of their heads a lot, so regardless their relationship is going to be different now.
glad you're still reading! thanks and stay tuned!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 57
YES! finally, the big make-up! i hope this means all is is well for M&V now. love this story so much, update soooon!!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!!! THANKS!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 11:46 am Title: Chapter 57
Yey girl, you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I missed this story!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved this chapter so much!!!!!!!!!!! You sure know how to create the magic in the story!!! I’m glad they talked. And their little make out session was sooooooooon long overdue. It was sweet, sexy, and very sensual. But I’m glad they didn’t go all the way through lol. They really need to build their relationship again. And when the time is right, when they make love, it is probably going to be similar to their first time!!
Also, Mike always demands Vanessa to trust him, believe him, and tell the truth. But right now he has more secrets in his closet then Vanessa. I’m still a little angry with Mike that he Invited Tatiana to Neverland to spend a time, and being granted the right to be the first woman walking the land, enjoying herself within his presence!!! Plus, the kiss with Diana!! He got engaged to Vanessa keeping that kiss a secret. And his reasons were? Not to make her worry? Not to make her jealous? Not to make her disappointed? Yes, this sort of lie is smaller comparing to what Vanessa did. But at the end the lie is a lie, no matter is it small or big. He wants her to trust him, but does the opposite himself!!!
I hope they will be able to heal together. Because at the end, all that matter are three magical words “I love you”!!!
Girl, you doing amazing with this story!!!!! It is absolutely one of my favorites!!! And I hope everything is ok with you, because I’m really missing you and your beautiful story!!! :) <3!!!
Author's Response:
So much TRUTH in what you just wrote!! Michael is kind of a hypocrite. he wants Vanessa to be open and honest and he has YET to come out about his secrets. Maybe in his head, those incidents weren't big deals so there's no need to tell Vanessa. but i'm sure Vanessa would want to know those things. but like you said--he's not going to tell her just to avoid drama.
but if he doesn't come out about it--i'm sure the truth will find a way to come out. sure, it's not a big deal now--but when she finds out he's been keeping it from her, it could become a HUGE issue.
And girl, thanks soooooo much!! everything is just fine with me. had a difficult time these past couple of months but i'm in a MUCH better place now. i go back to school in a month or so, so i REALLY want to finish this story soon. it's just going to be hard letting go of these characters!!! lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 11:41 am Title: Chapter 57
Awww thank you janet! Im happy they were finally able to come together and fix things. They really needed it! Now they can start to rebuild. Cnt wait for the next part :) amazing job!
Author's Response:
Yes!! Big ups to Janet for being the nosey little sister and putting them back in the same place lol.
Thanks sooooo much!!! Stay tuned love!
Date: Aug 04, 2011 10:53 am Title: Chapter 57
YEAH! He had BETTER take her back! Lmao. And I think it's so sweet how he wanted to wait to have sex. I loved this chapter :) Great update!
Author's Response:
LOL!! Mike's a stubborn one, huh? But his love for Vanessa is too strong to hold off. Hopefully he doesn't hold off on the sex for too long though LOL.
thanks for reading dear!! stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 05:18 am Title: Chapter 57
awwww how sweet!!! plzzz update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
=)))))
Date: Aug 04, 2011 04:42 am Title: Chapter 57
So glad they are together again. There's alot of healing to do . She was determined and broke through that wall to get him back.
Always loving this story!! More please!
Author's Response:
Yes!! Vanessa was VERY determined to get her man back. now they've got to work together to get back to where they were and even better.
Glad you're enjoying the story!! Thanks for reading!
Date: Aug 04, 2011 04:25 am Title: Chapter 57
I'm glad mike forgave her it was strtin to piss me off cuz its lik she forgave him evb if her's was a bigger mistake love is forgivness
Author's Response:
EXACTLY. love is forgiveness.
glad you're still reading and enjoying!! thanks for the feedback!!
Date: Aug 04, 2011 04:24 am Title: Chapter 57
I'm glad mike forgave her it was strtin to piss me off cuz its lik she forgave him evb if her's was a bigger mistake love is forgivness
Date: Jul 28, 2011 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
AWWE! AWESOME! LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Awww!! THANKS!!