Date: Aug 15, 2011 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 60
My poor Michael. Tabloids were so mean to him. And Smh @ Vanessa's jealousy. Girl bye. Ask questions before you assume ish. I wonder how she'll react if she finds out about Diana and Mike from last time.. AND about Tatiana visiting Neverland. Mike has definitely kept some things from her. I wonder is Mike gonna fire Frank. Something is gonna happen.
Author's Response:
Oh gosh--let's pray she NEVER finds out about Diana and Michael--OR him and Tatiana. i'm sure she won't like that one bit. she's got to get over her jealousy issue though. he's Michael Jackson---there's MILLIONS of women who want to be with him--and she's going to have to learn to live with it.
LOL anyways--thanks for reading! and stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2011 12:15 am Title: Chapter 59
YEY!!! The things are getting better between those two!!! But still, even in all that improvement in their relationship, Michael is a little bit distant with Vanessa. He was not that ecstatic of Vanessa going with him on tour this time! I’m not saying that he was not glad, because the picture that I got, he was!!! But I truly miss those two being just CRAZY ABOUT EACH OTHER, and happy, and a little bit childish :) Also, I must say that I really Looooooooove this story during Michael being on tour!!! I guess Michael is awfully SEXY during those years, and especially the Bad tour!!!!!! LOL
So Mike gets a little jealous watching Vanessa being with kids so natural too! huh? Lol. Vanessa is totally ready to be a mommy, but Michael not just yet, there is still a lot of unspoken stuff. BTW, since Vanessa is back on the tour. What happened to the guy that Vanessa has been kissing with? Is he still on the tour? It is going to be awkward. Right? I just love possessive, and jealous Mike!!!
Beautiful chapter as usual!!! Always waiting for more!!! :) <3!!!Oksana ;)
Author's Response:
LOL!!! You brought up some good points lol. as far as i remember, the backup dancer that Vanessa kissed IS still on tour soooo--that could be drama in the future.
as far as having kids, i think they're both getting closer to ready--more so than they were before. they both still have some emotional things to work on, but all in all i think they'd be good parents.
and YES girl!!! Michael is ESPECIALLY GORGEOUS during those Bad Tour years!! maybe that's the reason why i just LOVE writing about him during this time lol.
thanks for reading!! and for your awesome reviews! stay tuned!!
Date: Aug 13, 2011 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 57
I'm so glad Michael and Vanessa made up. Hopefully they'll be able to work through their problems, and get some things back to the way they were before the chaos.
Date: Aug 13, 2011 10:59 am Title: Chapter 59
Awww. This was so sweet :) And the whole idea of her not having to hide who she is while on tour is great, I think it'll make a world of difference! And "I feel closer to ready..." that was amazing. Closer to having some babies! YAY!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! YES! closer to having some babiessss!! lol
thanks for reading girl! stay tuned for plenty more!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2011 10:35 am Title: Chapter 59
Awww...soooo sweet.
I'm happy that they're getting closure & starting to move on. Aw, I loved this update!
Author's Response:
Yay!! Glad you enjoyed reading it. I surely enjoy writing about them when they're like this than when they're fighting lol.
Thanks for reading dear!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2011 09:31 am Title: Chapter 59
Aww that was simply beautiful! Haha is the maids name really zelda? Hah that was a video game i played when i was a kid. Ha im happy she decided to go on tour with him and doesnt have to do the bs of being his main assistants, assistant. Now she can just be herself. The child hospital visit was adorable! I absolutly lovee this! Cnt wait to read more
Author's Response:
LOL!! Yup--that's her name. and i remember that video game!! lol
Thanks for reading and always leaving GREAT reviews!!! Stay tuned!
Date: Aug 13, 2011 07:42 am Title: Chapter 59
There's still alot of emotional healing to do, they're together, that's all that counts.
Great update.....always waiting for more!!
Author's Response:
True!!
Thanks for reading!!! And stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2011 04:58 am Title: Chapter 59
I am glad that the both of them are starting to heal, as always i must say.......... PLZZZ UPDATE!!!!! ASAP!!1
Date: Aug 10, 2011 02:11 am Title: Chapter 58
Thats my girl Vanessa with that determination thing again. I startiing to love her again. For a moment I thought Michael was just afraid of being back with Vanessa. Some parts of their relationship still seems awkward but they both know that have something worth fighting for. I love Michael but his taste in decor *giggles* a bit tacky? but oh so Michael *blushes*. I was scared for Vanessa and that haircut for a min. we all know how Michael digs the long hair.
Author's Response:
LOL!! Yes---Vanessa's soooo determined to make Michael believe in them again. i think their relationship will continue to feel a bit awkward until their both able to let go of the past and go on with their relationship. they definitely are going to have to fight for it though--this will hardly be the end of their problems i'm sure.
thanks for reading dear!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2011 12:16 am Title: Chapter 58
I'm happy that they've made up, but I too am having mixed emotions. I kinda feel like the tension/awkwardness will never die down betwen those two. I want it to...but I gotta be realistic about it. I guess ill just have to wait and see! Anyways, great add. I really want them to get back to where they were before all of this drama.
Author's Response:
Very true. They're both going to have to work at it. conquer their fears and demons about being together and just--start over. if they can do that, hopefully the awkwardness will dissipate.
thanks for reading dear! and stay tuned!!
Date: Aug 08, 2011 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 58
:D Daaaaaaaayuuuum, girl!!! That's all I can manage right now. I think my brain just exploded. Lol.
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!!!! So hilarious!!! Hot and heavy, huh??? lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2011 08:34 am Title: Chapter 58
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! PLZZZ UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!
Date: Aug 08, 2011 06:01 am Title: Chapter 58
So so happy they are back together. No possibly way they could sleep in separate rooms. They love each other too much. That was hot
Oh ya, it's time to show that maid the door,Vanessa should suggest that to Michael.
Great chapter....always waiting for more
Author's Response:
LOL!! Yeah, Zelda's a creep lol.
thanks dear!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2011 04:44 am Title: Chapter 58
Aww this was amazing. Its nice that they are trying to rebuild and had a lil date together that was really cute. Hah i love the way both of them couldnt avoid their desires and finally gave in. Its kinda like they are walking on egg shells about their relationship because michael is hiding stuff from her he should tell her & nessa is still trying to convince him that she loves him the way he wants to be loved. This is very intense, ive been addicted to this story since it first came out and i still am haha love it
Author's Response:
LOL!! glad you're still enjoying it!
Mike and Vanessa have a ways to go with trying to rebuild everything. but i think it's good they're taking it slow and trying to start over. but like you said--they couldn't avoid their desires for each other for long--especially if they're sleeping in the same bed! kudos to Vanessa though for not starting it--that was ALL Michael lol.
thanks for still reading!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2011 04:43 am Title: Chapter 58
OMG……girl, what are you doing to me? I was already in bed ready to sleep and I saw on my blackberry that you updated!!! I couldn’t sleep after I read the chapter, so I grabbed my computer, and here I am wide awake in the middle of the night writing a review with hundreds of thought running through my head LOL
I have to say that I had mixed emotions. First, about the tension between those two. It is really hard for me to understand when people say ‘’ have to wait to be intimate again”, because they are no virgins no more lol. I could understand Vanessa, because the forbidden fruit is always more desirable! Especially after watching the Come Together video lol
Right now I can see Vanessa on a straighter path then Michael, because she values right now what she ones had, and wants to gain everything back again. She is stronger woman right now!!! She has his love, but she doesn’t have his complete trust just yet. But Vanessa does everything she can to gain it back……. Michael on the other hand, loves her too. But still unwilling to open up to her, and the only thing he does is just waiting for Vanessa to fix everything up. ……. Also about Zelda, that woman is creepy, wondering in the hallway in the middle of the night???? How did she know he was sleeping??? Just hated the way she talked to Vanessa, to the woman he was (is?) engaged like she was some groupie trying to snick in to Mr. Jackson’s bed!!!
I’m sorry to hear you had difficult times, but I’m glad you getting better!!! I know you have really strong personality, especially when you write a story like this!!! ……..The school starts soon, but I wouldn’t mind to wait even a month or so in between the updates, just to have your wonderful story still going LOL. Plus it is still has a lot of potential, like fixing the relationship, tour, baby making and Zelda lol. I guess, I just got too attached to this story and don’t want to let go just yet!!!!! But you are the author, and I can understand that the school is very important, and it is hard to concentrate on one thing or the other. So if you decide to finish it soon, I guess I will be rereading it later, just love it too much!!!! Thank you once again for this beautiful story!!! I’m off to bed now lol. Your dedicated reader Oksana ;)
Author's Response:
LOL!!! girl, you crack me up!!
it's true Vanessa is seemingly on a "straighter path" with Michael right now, than he is himself. I think in his mind, they're past all of that and he doesn't need to bring it up. but what he fails to realize is that he is basically doing the same thing Vanessa did to him.
and Zelda....*shivers* she gives me the creeps!! lol idk what's going to happen with her--but she's a little too nosey for my liking.
it's funny because i said i was going to finish this story last year before i went back to school--and here i am STILL writing it LOL. idk what's going to happen honestly. i'd like to finish it soon because i know this school year will be hectic--but i might just have to put it on hold for a while and come back to it. but like i said in the very beginning--i WILL finish this story. it's a MUST!! so don't worry--i might be sticking around longer than i expected lol.
thanks so much for your kind words! they truly do mean a lot. stay tuned!!