[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2011 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Are you going to be updating soon??? I really miss this story :(
xoxo
Author's Response:
I will be!! VERY soon! i'm actually writing as we speak. school and work has been hectic but i will have something updated before the end of this week =))))
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2011 12:04 am Title: Chapter 1
this is a wonderful story... i wish you could update more often...
Author's Response:
i will soon!!!! THANKS so much!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2011 02:25 am Title: Chapter 61
Aww amazing job :) i absolutly adore this story like everytime i read it, it just makes me happy!
Author's Response:
Yayyy!!!! LOL glad you enjoyed it!
i hope to be updating really, really soon so stay tuned!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2011 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 61
I love this chapter, sooooooo sweet!!! And his birthday presents lol. I know that he felt bad celebrating birthdays, but as soon as the presents are in the picture he’s like a kid in the candy store haha…….
I just love those two together so in love with each other, and it’s good to see them finally healing from that loss, but I guess one more obstacle is on the way “Melissa”. Michael is always too good to people, and people always use him to their advantages. Didn’t he learn the lesson before with Tatiana? Can’t he read the girls facial expression “I want you bad right here and right now!!!”? LOL I just hope whatever trouble Melissa brings in the future, Vanessa would not step aside, like she did when Tatiana kissed him, and made them suffer!!!
Also I was wondering if Michael could not hold his liquor for real. lol
Great chapter as always Mariah!!!! I’m really thankful to you for writing this beautiful story girl!!! :) And I would like to finish my review with “can’t wait for your next update”, but I know that school starts soon and you will be really busy. So as I said before, take your time with the next update!!! I will be happy just knowing that this amazing story is still running :) your dedicated reader Oksana!
Lots of MJ hugs & kisses
P.S. Happy Birthday Michael!!! <3
Author's Response:
AWWWW!!! Thank you sooooooo much for being so sweet Oskana!!! that really just made my day!
i have been working my butt off like crazy with school and work and everything. but i really do hope to be updating this story soon. there's still so much left that i want to write!!
i PROMISE i will finish!!! lol but again, thank you for being so understanding!! you're AWESOME.
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2011 12:19 am Title: Chapter 61
Ugh @ Melissa. Melissa from the Glenda tapes? If so, omgggg. Stay away from Vanessa's man! Loved the update though. Perfect ending to my weekend =) .
Oh, and I am sooo happy that they're on the right track again.
Author's Response:
LOL!!!!! oh, the infamous Glenda tapes. Hmmmmmm...i don't wanna say lol. we'll just say there's a reason why i'm mentioning her in the story (evil i know LOL).
glad you enjoyed it!! i hope to be updating as soon as i get the time!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2011 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 61
Loved it!!! Plzz update!!
Author's Response:
i wil!! as soon as i can!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2011 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 61
Loved the update liberiangirl. Brought a lot of smiles to my face. I needed that. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
=)))))
sooooo glad you liked it. hope to be updating soon!!
thanks again!!
Date: Aug 28, 2011 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 61
This was a sweet chapter. Nessa is slowly getting me back to liking her again. As for this Melissa chick, she better say that mantra over and over again. She better stay her ass professional! Otherwise I wouldn't even be mad about Vanessa having to whoop her ass. And honestly, Michael needs to start being more assertive around these women. Let it be known its a strictly professional relationship and that he's not a single man. His nonchalant attitude and passive aggressive "I don't wanna hurt nobody" attitude is irritating. Honestly, these two can't take anymore mishaps. Nothing. They barely made it out of the abortion situation, the Tatiana thing, just a lot and they aren't even married. If something happens this time, they're gonna be done. That Melissa chick better stay her clumsy ass in her lane.
Author's Response:
they have been through A LOT--and Michael should have learned his lesson by now. hopefully this won't be another bump in their relationship. but i have to give them major kudos for making it through all that they have been through.
I know it's been a while since i last updated, but it's only because of school and work. i really REALLY wanna update as soon as possible though. just have to find the time.
but thanks for being a loyal reader and i hope you stay tuned!!
Date: Aug 28, 2011 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 61
have a bad feeling about that melissa character. keep going please
Author's Response:
uh oh!!! LOL i will soon!!! promise!!
Date: Aug 17, 2011 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 60
Wow, that last part was just beautiful. I love love loved this chapter. *happy sigh*
Author's Response:
Awwww!! THANKS!!! glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2011 03:45 am Title: Chapter 60
Heeyyyy! Great chapter!
I'm a little disappointed in Vanessa's jealousy - omg that girl was about to lose it for no reason. She can't be jumping to conclusions like that.
LOL @ the little boy in the park. They lucky he ain't get his voice back & start screaming. At least they had a wonderful time. I love that they got to enjoy a semi-normal outdoor experience together.
Author's Response:
LOL! yeah Vanessa jumped the gun on that one. but luckily they talked it out before she lost it completely. so i guess that's a tiny step forward--right?? lol
thanks so much dear! and thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2011 03:40 am Title: Chapter 60
Loved it!!! Plzz update asap!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks!!!
Date: Aug 15, 2011 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 60
This made me sad. The media didn't even try. They constantly bullied this man. They were vultures.Some people have Michael all wrong weak should never be a word associated with him. I don't think no one could take what he's been through. Which is why as a fan I would always stick up for this man. even if he probably would want us to ignore it lol. His chicken scratch is sooo cute <3.
Jerry made that lil boys dream come true. I can just imagine him saying "Ma, I just saw Michael Jackson at the park"...she be like "uh-huh I just saw Eddie Murphy at the grocery story..get in here and pick up these toys"
Ooooh Michael. If Vanessa freaked out that bad about z phone convo with Diana. Imagine how she is going to reacted when she finds out you and Tati are friends.Yikes! Michael can hand that pink slip to Frank right now. calling Nessa a bitch anit right. and Sheryl that bird can keep on giving nasty glances but she better not try to step out of line.
*ooh liberian sorry for the long review lol*
Author's Response:
i LOVE long reviews!!! don't worry LOL.
i definitely agree that "weak" is not a word that should be associated with Michael--in any way, shape or form. it takes a hell of a person to deal with the crap he put up with. if anything, he might've been a little bit naive in thinking the media would ever understand him and change their ways.
i think he eventually realized that and that's why he stopped doing so many interviews. ppl were going to twist whatever it was that he said anyway--so what was the point?
i'll defend Michael to the GRAVE! lol really though.
thanks for reading love!! and stay tuned for more!
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2011 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 60
Aww i love it :) i really love chapters based around them because its cute and like other people always seem to distrub them lol but i love this amazing story! Great job :) cnt wait for more
Author's Response:
Haha!! that is true--ppl are ALWAYS interupting them it seems. that's life with Michael though i guess.
thanks so much!! and thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2011 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 60
YEY, a new chapter so fast!! You getting inspired girl, huh?
Beautiful chapter!!! That’s what I was talking about. Michael and Vanessa being just happy and childish together!!! As for the disguise, the next time he should pick something that brings less attraction. I would definitely get suspicious if I saw a beautiful girl kissing ugly guy with goatee and rotten teeth LOL….. Also, about the Diana thing. Mike, after seeing Vanessa so angry and upset would probably be frightened to ever mention that woman’s name ever, not to mention the kiss.
BTW, I just found out that a new Michael’s single was released just a couple months ago, and the name of it “Behind the Mask” : ) I just can’t believe that it was unreleased for 25 years!!! The song and the music are so catchy!!! :) <33
Author's Response:
LOL!!! "inspired" is the word!
LOL at Michael's "disguises". he's got some of the best make-up people in the business on his team and he still finds the most hideous and obvious things to disguise himself in LOL.
And girl, YES!! i looooooooooove "Behind the Mask". it's one of my favorites from the "Michael" CD. and it is where i got the title of this story from. it fit so perfectly!!
thanks for your awesome reviews!! stay tuned!