Reviewer: cat105 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2020 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I’m really impressed with how you capture Micheal’s feelings through the way you word his dialogue. Also, great conversation skills. I really felt like the conversation between Micheal and his mother flowed really well, and actually read like a real conversation. Good job!

Reviewer: nalwenda Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2019 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi there!

 

I don't know if you're active on MJFiction at all anmore, but I just wanted to let you know that this story, after allll these years and after reading sooooo many fanfics, this is definitely one of my very few favorite ones! The characters and the story is just described so realistic! Are you planning on continuing the story?

 

Either way, I just wanted to recommend you uploading this story on Wattpad, which is now THE place to be for MJ fanfic. I'm sure you will get a LOT of (new) readers on that platform, and even if you're not continuing the story, you should definitely upload what you have here on there! I'm sure sooooo many people will love and appreciate your story!

 

Take care xxx

Reviewer: LilyJean Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I remember reading this story many many years ago. I'm so happy I finally found it once again. I love this so much.

Reviewer: Friidum Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2018 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very descriptive writing.

Reviewer: sec1978 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2018 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 75

Love this story. Wish she finished it.

Reviewer: angieskylar Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2017 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 13

YES FINALLY THANK YOU

Reviewer: angieskylar Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2017 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh my god when Janet came in lol