[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2011 02:52 am Title: Chapter 64
I still really love this story & glad you're continuing it. Your writing is superb. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! So glad that you are!!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2011 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am DYIIINGGG for an update girl, this is my FAVORITE story on ths whole damn site, I mean no other story can compare to this, I hope you update soon <3
This story is just AMAZNG, your a Phenomenal writer ! :D <33
Author's Response:
Oh WOW! Thank you so much for that! I really, REALLY appreciate it!
I try to update as quickly as I can. Right now, I have a little break so I'll be doing as much writing as I can.
Thank you again! And stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2011 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 63
Haha quickies in the elevator xD priceless, idk whats going on with them. I hope they can work their issues out and decide were they are going to take this relationshop
Author's Response:
LOL! Yeah, they do need to get it together. But I'm sure once the tour is over they'll be able to focus more on them and their relationship. Because right now, the tour is slowly but surely trying to tear them apart =/
Thank you for reading! Stay tuned love!
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2011 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 63
You have me as a faithful reader LOL...I'm hooked and I'm not letting go!
Now regarding the story, Key is hilarious. She's awesome. I felt bad for Vanessa when Michael told her to wait on the kids but that's what she gets for ending the baby's life. I understand Michael, I wouldn't want to rush into that yet if I were him. He's being smart. Not sure if he's being smart about rushing to make more music but we'll see how that goes....and I'm so happy not to see Melissa in this chapter. She had me worried on the last one.
Great job, girl. Looking forward to read the next one chapter. xoxo
Author's Response:
Awww yay! I'm glad! lol
I'm sure Michael is still somewhat hurt from what Vanessa did and is being super-protective of himself about getting married and having children. He just doesn't want to be hurt--and he still needs time for Vanessa to show him that she won't.
And Melissa was in this chapter! LOL...but she didn't make a big appearance. Hopefully she just stays in the backdrop and doesn't become an issue. She needs to learn restraint LOL
Thank you so much for your kind comments! Stay tuned for more!
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2011 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 63
I didn’t expect the update so soon lol
I don’t know how you do it. But every time you make me guess of what might happen next. And when I seem to figure it out, you make a twist to the story. That’s a talent girl! This story has so many chapters already, but every new update is like a new start! I love this story so much, and I started rereading it again lol.
I am totally on Vanessa’s side right now. The most important person in her life makes her happy and miserable at the same time. I was about to jump into the story, and slap the hell out of Michael for hurting my girl lol. I probably would never be able to figure out, how the guys manage to do the complete opposite of what the woman want. I always make fun of my hubby when he says “you are never completely satisfied when I do things my way” for what I say “darling, I understand that God made males the way, that they use only one hemisphere of their brains when thinking or doing something. But if you learn how to use the both of them, you will get everything right” LOL…after which he gets angry, and I have to apologize LOL….. Ok, back to story. After Vanessa left the tour, I thought that Michael would miss her like crazy, and would like to start a family right away! I really feel bad for Vanessa. Poor girl doesn’t have a family, a career that would bring her a sense of accomplishment in her life, just a boyfriend who decided to put everything on hold for God knows how long. Plus he lets the other women lust after him, and they just assume he is not taken! Vanessa never wanted not to marry him, she just wasn’t ready to be a mother at the moment. And now her best friend getting married, glowing with happiness, and that’s after just 4 month of relationship! So how long does Michael need to be a 100% sure she’s the one, because the way he acted makes me think he doubts. So what does she have to do right now? Just wait when a prince charming will change his mind? Nuh….she should make him beg her!.... I just wonder, what would Michael do if Vanessa got pregnant again after that steamy session in the elevator? lol. He would probably want to get married right away. And that would be funny if she would refuse him for a while….Ok, ok I stop, I’m not the writer lol. I just can’t help it, you make me wonder of what will happen next! But write the way you wish, because it’s going to be awesome anyway lol ….
P.S. I hope Mike and Vanessa will make it, it would be a huge disappointment if they wouldn’t, especially after what they have gone through…..Now I will not be able to wait for your winter break so you can write more!!! Great writing girl! You know i love it sooo much!! :) <33
Author's Response:
HA! Girl, thank you for all of the lovely compliments! I really do appreciate them! Like I've said before, the story seems to write itself--even I don't know what to expect sometimes!
Vanessa and Michael...*sigh* these two just can not get on the same page! lol One wants to get married, the other doesn't. One wants to move in together, the other doesn't. They take two steps forward and end up taking five steps back.
But they want to be together--they both can agree to that. And I think as long as they know that, marriage will come eventually. But who knows, they might decide to just elope out of the blue LOL. Idek! Guess we'll just have to see!
Thank you as always for reading! Stay tuned!
Date: Nov 29, 2011 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 63
Mann... I just don't know anymore. I'm not feeling it with these two anymore. I don't think they're gonna get married. Ever. Vanessa sounds unsure and is annoying as hell with all this crying. This Melissa chick is irrtating. I'm losing faith more and more in these two. *sighs* Seems like the only time they're truly on the same page is when sex is involved. This is not gonna last.
Author's Response:
Awww man--i understand where you're coming from though. It seems like they're both all over the place with their thoughts and their emotions. It's hard to keep up with. But every relationship has its ups and downs. And with all of the "downs" they've been having lately--they can only go up!
Guess we'll just have to see! Hope you're still sticking around for the ride! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2011 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 63
*swoon* I love me some Michael and Vanessa. They're fantastic I think Vanessa needs to focus on their relationship now and focus on the positive. I know it'll be tough but they can make it I'm sure.
So happy for Key I like her too. I know she going to tease Vanessa when she and Michael arrive at the dinner table looking freshly fucked.
I see you Melissa, play it cool play it cool. Just be his friend. Is that possible though?lol
Author's Response:
LOL!! "freshly fucked"!! and you KNOW Key will be the one to point it out, too! I'm glad you're still pulling for Vanessa and Michael. Relationships aren't easy--especially with somebody of Michael's calibur.
And idk about this whole Melissa thing. They both better just "play it cool" lol...we do NOT need another Tatiana situation.
Anyway, thank you sooooo much for reading! Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2011 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 62
Hey girl :) You are back!!! YEY!! I couldn’t believe my eyes when I have seen your update! There are not that much of good stories left on this site, as all of them have ended about the same time.
Great update as always! I don’t blame Vanessa for leaving the tour. Women are fragile, and get very frustrated during the stressful times. So she really needs some rest, and time to miss Michael more. Distance makes the heart fonder, and the love stronger! But Michael really needs her now! …..God I love this story so much!!! As I understand, since the shows have been rescheduled for the next year, that will delay Michael’s plans for starting a family. And this Melissa thing? I hope Michael will not do the same thing he did with Tatiana. There is not such a thing as male and female friendship. And usually one of such a friends interested in more ways than the other, but too afraid to admit their real feelings. But I understand that you brought Melissa for the story purpose :) Michael seems to be piling up more, and more explanations, and excuses to do in the future. I still remember that picture frame that Tatiana had given him, that kiss with Diana, and Zelda LOL
I am so happy that you continuo this amazing story girl!!! But school is very important, and I’m assuming that you going to have more time to write at your winter break. Right?
Once again, AMAZING story girl!!!! Always waiting for more! <3 ya! Your dedicated reader Oksana :)
Author's Response:
HEY!!! Thank you soooo much! I'm glad you're still around to read!
Girl, you are reading my mind! I don't blame Vanessa for leaving the tour either. That's gotta be difficult for somebody--especially when they're looking for stability in their life. It's like Michael wants to keep her so close so that she has no choice but to love him--but sometimes you can grow apart even when you are nearby. So I think missing each other a little bit might not be so bad. It'll also give them time to get their heads together about what they want their next step to be.
And idk what's going to happen with this Melissa thing honestly. She's trying to stay professional and do her job but her mystery seems to be intriguing Michael more. He knows better but he better start acting like it because, like you said, he's just piling on stuff that he's going to have to explain to Vanessa later. And I'm sure she won't be happy about it.
Our winter break from school is coming up soon and I'm sure I'll do a ton of writing then. Thank you as always for being so sweet!
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2011 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi honey, I don't know why I never read your story before because is amazing. You are a very good writer. I started to read your story last night and I couldn't put it down. I'm adding it to my favorites. Looking forward to read more.
P.S. I was so angry when I read that Vanessa got rid of the baby but I'm glad they are working it out. I hope Melissa doesn't become a problem now that she is leaving and will Michael tell her about him bringing Tatiana to Neverland? You got me hooked. LOL
Author's Response:
Hey! Thank you! I am always soooo happy when new ppl find my story! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Michael seems to be putting off telling Vanessa anything that might cause an argument or a fight after all they've been through. But he better hope it doesn't hit the fan before he gets to tell her himself LOL.
Thanks again for reading! Always feel free to comment and let me know what you think!
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 62
I couldn't believe it when I saw this story on the first page. I'm so glad your back. Hope your doing well.
Oh Michael. I loves that he's so dedicated to his career and puts in 200%the all the time. I just wish he was more health concerned about himself.
Oh..boy Melissa getting addicted to Michael already..I don't blame her but she needs to chill and so does Michael. He always tryin to figure out people lol.
Author's Response:
LOL!! Thank you! I'm so glad to be back honestly. I LOVE writing this story!
It's really sad the way Michael sometimes disregards his health. I think he was like that in real life as well. That became really evident with all of the trial stuff--which was really, REALLY sad. But i guess I'm trying to make this story as close to real as possible so I think it's important to address issues like this.
And Melissa AND Michael both better be careful! lol Idk what Vanessa would do if another Tatiana situation erupts.
Thank you so much fo reading! Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 62
Ou lordy! Girll I was thinking about this story because I was looking thru my favorites and I saw it and i was like wow she hasnt updated in a while! :( so i am very pleased that you got to! & aww Its sad when they start fighting & woah melissa came out of no where lol i was wondering why she was in the last chapter. & omg :( i cnt believe he was acting like that :( i hope he gets some help. Well done
Author's Response:
LOL! I know it took me forever and a day to update--life has been crazy hectic lately. But I love writing this story so I had to come back to it.
I'm so glad you're still around to read! Thank you so much dear!
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 62
Im so glad that you are continuing this story! I missed it soo much <3
Great chapter!! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'll keep writing until it's done!
Thank you for reading!
Date: Nov 26, 2011 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 62
Wow.. Dammit Nessa coulda kept her ass with him just a lil longer. Now I'm not sayin she has to give her up life for Michael, but there is definitely needing to be some give and take. And quite frankly, I think she can be a lil more flexible than what she's being. I understand being homesick and all but damn. Michael is sick and needs her more than ever. Passing out.. smh. I just don't know. And I don't trust this clumsy Melissa ho at all. She's gonna be another Tatiana or something. Michael needs to make his intentions clear. If he wants to be her friend fine, but that is IT. Not a damn thing else. They don't need anything else happening or they will NOT make it. Period. And is Vanessa having mood swings or was she really just ready to go home? I don't know. Either way, she's gonna have to learn now what his life is really like if she plans to marry him. She kinda got on my nerves in this update. All that damn crying and whining.
Author's Response:
LOL!! I hear you girl!! Vanessa is--all OVER the place as we all know by now. And she's a big crier too lol. But I think there's some substance to all of her whining. I mean, who wants to give up their entire life to basically be someone else's pet. Not saying that Michael's treating her that way but it must be frustrating to love somebody so large that you have no choice but to give up who your are.
And idk about Melissa yet either honey! lol. She seems to be trying to stay professional but idk if she can resist the "magic" of Michael. But we'll see!
Thanks for still sticking around and reading! I really do appreciate it!
Date: Nov 26, 2011 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 62
Welcome back great update
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2011 09:57 am Title: Chapter 61
Hey girl :) I’m glad to hear that you going to update soon! I missed this story sooooooo much! I hope everything is good with school and work! <3
Author's Response:
Hey! soooooo SORRY i haven't been updating like i've been wanting to. Good news is that we have a little break coming up from school and i plan on getting a lot of this story done! thanks for being such a loyal reader and thank you even more for being patient with me!