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Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 66

Update ASA!!!!

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 30

although i've only got to chapter 30 so far, i'm totally in love with this story so much! i'm so excited about reading the rest of this, i really hope michael and vanessa will stay together and get married and have babies, they really deserve each other! this is totally epic, please never stop writing!



Author's Response:

awww thank you so much!! so glad you are enjoying it! always feel free to comment and let me know what you think!

Reviewer: Speechless Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2011 09:41 am Title: Chapter 65

Oh my wow! I almost squealed when I saw that u updated. :D thank u for the quick update <3 It was a great one :) although I would like to slap three people in this story right now. Zelda for one!! What a messsy rat! -___- Im still surprised she wasnt fired on the instant when Vanessa told her what that trick did hmphh which is why Michael would be the second person I slap!! -___- his crazy ass acting all nonchalant about it wth? She ratted u out u fool! And this would be the second time Vanessa warned you about stupid Zelda. Lastly I would like to slap Vanessa for leaving again :( noooo she shouldnt go they need to sit down and talk about it and I dont think she should be mad about the Tatiana sitation either since absolutely nothing happened and it was in the past and happened in the time in the life where SHE hurt him badly. Also, I am a believer in the 'you dont have to tell ur spouse everythaang' :P dang especially since what happened with Tatiana was a bunch of nothing and its in the past. Which brings me too the Diana situation. Should he really tell? I dont think so...Him and Diana squashed whatever they had and they are on good terms.

also I loved the part with the children. that was sooo cute <3 I laughed out loud when Michael through the icecream at Vanessa haha. Exactly something Michael would do :)

(ps. Glad u liked my last comment! Long comments are so easy to make when the story is awesome as urs :))



Author's Response:

LOL! aww that's really sweet! Zelda is a little rat for what she did--and then she tried to play all innocent on top of that smh. Michael was pretty asshole-ish in this chapter, huh? lol but i think the fight between Michael and Vanessa was a little deeper than Tatiana. She's just what brought up all of these other underlying feelings that Vanessa's had built up. and now it's all "hitting the fan" unfortunately. 

and i agree--i don't think couples have to tell each other everything--especially if it's not important or dire for the other to know. but i guess Michael could've at least mentioned it because now it looks like he was trying to hide it from her. sooo, who knows--maybe he will tell her about Diana...or maybe he won't lol.

thank you again for reading! stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2011 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 65

Zelda is such a bitch!



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LOL!!!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2011 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 65

Wow.. I KNEW it! It was bound to happen. I jut knew it. And I have to say, I'm absolutely pissed at Michael. There's no if, ands or buts about it. He handled the situation beyond poorly, and that nosy ass maid needs to be fired. And the maybe comment shoulda got his narrow ass SLAPPED. Period. I don't blame Vanessa for leaving. At all. For once, I'm not mad at her. Michael is a damn fool. He needs to realize in the end, Vanessa can get somebody else. Somebody who would love her for the woman she is. He can't though. It would be much harder. Like she said, the glitz and glamor she wasnt in it for that. He's just a man, and that's what she saw him as. I say Vanessa needs to go on about her business. Let his ass come crawling back to her for a change. That shit was out of order.. This fool really said maybe?! Smdh!!

Author's Response:

HA! i couldn't agree more! Michael was pretty much being a jerk with his little comment. i'm surprised Vanessa didn't slap him lol. but i'm sure she'll make him crawl back to her and beg for her forgiveness--because she sure as hell won't be crawling to him!

thank you again for reading! i appreciate your reviews every time!

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2011 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 65

Damn so bitch is always ruining something. The maid really! Out of everybody.



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!! 

Reviewer: Michael_Is_Forever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2011 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 65

OHMYGOD ..

ooooh, i cannot get enough of this story, ugh ! <33 AMAZING, BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO :D oooohh girl . .  love how you just word everything, and how you lay it all out, you are a such a good writer, this shoud be the #1 story on the site, seriously. 

 

Can't wait for next chapter ! <33 :D



Author's Response:

Awwww! Thank you soooooo much! that is the sweetest comment EVER lol. 

thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2011 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 65

Oh lord not again..... Please update ASAP!!!!

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2011 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 64

He was beautiful. The most beautiful man ever, inside and outside.



Author's Response:

So very true!!

Reviewer: Speechless Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2011 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 64

K. I thought I was done but Im not (hate that I cant go back and edit lol)

I forgot to mention how much I love Vanessa best friend Key. <3 She is so funny and I love their friendship. I realy love her attitued and how she just tell it like it is lol. So happy that shes getting married too. I hope it wont affect Vanessa and Michael too much tho. Who knew she was going to get married b4 Mike and Nessa? I surely didnt see that one coming lol. and what if she becomes pregnant b4 them too. :(. That would be crazy!

Oh and they are sooo bad for doing it in the elivator :O!! I was so afraid they were gonna get caught. Good to see that Vanessa staying a little longer too. Loved that <3

 Ok im done! Excited for whats next :D



Author's Response:

LOL!!! i LOVE long reviews! lol THANK YOU soooooo much for your kind comments--I really do appreciate them! And always feel free to comment--i love reading them!

thanks for reading and stay tuned for more!

xoxo

Reviewer: Speechless Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2011 11:59 am Title: Chapter 64

OH MY GOD THIS STORY IS SOOOOOO FREAKING GOOD!!!! <333 I was having a BALL readiing this for the past few days! I swear I did not want this too end. Ughhh u are an amazing writer girl. Thank u so much for sharing and writing this amazing story. Michael and Vanessa 4ever <3 :'D Really, I LOVE them both and the way u write Mike in this story is him to a T imo. I feel you captured the REAL Michael and what he was like with women and etc. I can imagining all of this happening IRL with thim and u touched on so much real issues that was going on with him, it made it sooo much better. Sometimes I want to strangle Vanessa and sometimes I want to strangle Michael. THey can be so stubborn sometimes but I love them both and how u write them in this story. They are so meant for eacother. Its sooo fun to read. And girlll their love sessions *fans self* Every single one of them was sooooooooooooo beyond amazing. I seriosly at times wish I was Vaness haha ;P OK so Im rambling too much but I really cant wait to see what happens next.And Im so curious on how far u going to take this story and what other real life subjects ur gonna touch on involving Michael in this. Great story. Btw I cant wait til they get married and I hope they have lots of babies.  <3

 

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2011 08:50 am Title: Chapter 64

Awwwwwwww Lovely job:) i love chapters like this you devote to them and them just hanging out and being together:)

Author's Response:

Aww thank you!! So glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2011 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 64

A cute love chapter for Mike and Vanessa. How come I feel something is about to go down. We' ll see..lol

Happy Holidays

Author's Response:

LOL! seems like everybody is getting that feeling lmao. 

and thank you! HAPPY HOLIDAYS to you also!!!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2011 11:58 am Title: Chapter 64

Please update NOW!! Best chapter.EVER!!!

Author's Response:

Hahaha!! Update comingggg!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2011 09:50 am Title: Chapter 64

This was actually a sweet chapter. I will admit though that I'm holding my breath waiting for the other shoe to drop. Something tells me Vanessa is gonna find out about Tatiana being at Neverland or something.. Hmm. Idk. This was just too nice.. Lol. I'm nervous.

Author's Response:

LOL!!! I guess that's how their relationship goes, huh? Up and down, up and down. LOL--but idk, we'll see!

thanks for reading! stay tuned!

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