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Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2012 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

damn... no next button :(  please update soon.



Author's Response:

Just did!

=)



Author's Response:

Just did!

=)

Reviewer: Speechless Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2012 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 67

AHHHHHH HOW COULD U STOP THERE? *faints* omg that was so freaking hot =O  They have like the most amazing sex ever and you write these scenes soooo well. They are just so good together, I love how they interact with eachother. amazing amazing amazing chapter. Your writing is incredibbllle !!!!!!!!!! Im so hooked that on this story I almost squealed when I saw you updated lmao.

Michael waking up to his love packing her suitcases and revealing to him that shes coming with to Tokyo <33333 awww. I loved that part. Now that shes going with him I really hope Michael can open up to her about his problems. He cant hide it forever. Vanessa already knows so he should be truthfull with her and let her help him.

I just LOVE that Michael is going to take her as his date at the party they threw him. and That dress is gorgeous. she is going to be turning heads when she get there hehe ;D and Michael is going to be drooling thinking about another quicky =P...the flowers and the note he gave her is so sweet too. I luv that he signs his name as "stinky' too lol that is thee cutest nickname ever ^_^

lovely chapter =)



Author's Response:

LOL!!! i HAD to stop there lol. Thank you soooo much for all of your nice compliments! I really do appreciate them. i'm so happy you're enjoying my story--and i hope to keep you "hooked" as long as possible LOL.

Oh--and i love the nickname "Stinky" too. it's endearing in a weird kind of way haha.

thanks again for your lovely reviews and stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2012 11:35 am Title: Chapter 67

This was a great chapter. I hope Nessa will be able to help him.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thank you for reading and reviewing! I truly appreciate it!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2012 07:09 am Title: Chapter 67

Ps ur response to my chpater 66 review was sweet

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2012 07:07 am Title: Chapter 67

Aww beautiful chapter:) yeah mike is def doing drugs, im happy nessa came along to help him!

Author's Response:

Aww thanks!! 

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2012 04:52 am Title: Chapter 67

Oh my god .... I never knew Mikey could get down like that!!!!! Please update ASAP!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL!!! Mike is a BEAST! lmao

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2012 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 66

Oh lordy, i knew a fight like this was bound to happen. Its always war with the two of them, they have been going back and forth ever since the whole abortion drama. Its crazy, Im happy he fired the maid and hah I can never get over the fact that her name was zelda ha i knew she wanted michael, you could feel it and tell. Luckly he got rid of her after that because it was really uncalled for. It was kind of strange that they didnt reach out to each other for a bit but i guess the break was needed and wow was he on drugs? He was acting really strange, it was probably drugs. Hopifully he and her work it out but theres no right way to go about their life style because he cant change whom he is and it sucks to because she has sacrified a lot for him and that isnt fair on her part because shes not his puppy, shes his best friend and girlfriend/fiance (kinda) ha omg its been a year? Dangg hha girl you know ive been following this story from the start Im so happy I did and will contiune to! Great job:)

Author's Response:

HA! we've come a looooooong way, huh? lol Michael and Vanessa are a MAJOR work in progress--but as long as they're both willing to work on their relationship, things should be good. it's when they don't want to fight to be together anymore that it'll become a problem. i think the abortion thing put a huge dent in their relationship that they might not ever be able to truly "fix". yeeesh, they give me a headache sometimes LOL

so glad you've been around from the beginning! and you always leave the best reviews! so thank you for being so awesome!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2012 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 65

Damnnnn a day that was soo good went to so bad almost instantly :( wowizers! Cnt wait for more

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 09:51 am Title: Chapter 66

wow and what a journey it's been, man are you sure this is your first fan fic? lol i became so addicted to this, i actually made myself late for work the other day just to find out what happened after a cliff hanger chapter! i really enjoyed reading this so much, please don't wait too long before updating again soon! i've saved it to favourites because now it is! keep up the awesome work and i really hope where the story leads you to, that michael and vanessa can be happy together for all time! amazing story, thankyou! xoxox juls



Author's Response:

LOL! aww thank you! and yes--it is my first fan fic! LOL and it's been so much fun writing this. i'm not even 100% sure myself where this story is headed but i do know that i will finish it! 

so glad that you've been enjoying it! stay tuned dear!

Reviewer: Speechless Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2011 08:58 am Title: Chapter 66

Yesss Michael! So glad he fired that witch. But this last line of hers

"He was going to be sorry he got rid of her. That was for sure." 

Oh my god! What is this crazy fool going to do now. =O (idk but something tells me shes going to the tabloids or something and make up stuff) she better not! But I cant think anything else worse than that...or is there? Im really curious to see what shes about to do. And she wants him? Ew disgusting! I need Vanessa to beat her ass if she ever comes near Michael again.

That was so sad seeing Michael coming in that house like that. :( What is he using? He needs her badly.. she needs to take care of him and watch out for him. I cant believe thay have stopped talking for that long! Im glad Michael came to her though. She needs to go to Tokyo with him. He cant go there by himself. He needs someone too look after him and moniter him with whatever hes using. They need eachother <3

You are such an amazing writer. Thank u so much for another wonderfull chapter. I am on the edge of my seat now. Anxious to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much! That Zelda character is something else i tell you LOL. i have a feeling that's not the last of her either--but we'll see!

thank you for reading and leaving wonderful comments! stay tuned!

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2011 03:40 am Title: Chapter 66

Ugh sorry for the run on sentences in my other review down below. Leaving reviews frm a phone is not the business.

Happy New Year!

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2011 03:36 am Title: Chapter 66

"Zelda, I hate to do this but I have to let you go.You crossed the line of professionalism and I won' t stand for it"

Owww thats sexy! I love Mike being all boss!

I just love Key. They have the best relationship in this story.

I want to be pissed at Michael for his lil tirade but honestly I' m afraid for him.

Hey so it' s almost a year since I joined. Cool. Your story was the reason I signed up.I remember saying "I have to The ride has been thrilling!

Author's Response:

LOL!! Angry/forceful Michael IS sexy! and that's so awesome that my story made you sign up! i'm so glad you're still around, too! time has FLOWN!

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2011 01:19 am Title: Chapter 66

Hey girl :)


I’m so sorry I haven’t left my reviews on the previous two chapters, but I was very busy, and tomorrow we are leaving for the New Year’s Eve to the ski resort. So I promise to read and leave my reviews when I come back on Monday :)


P.S. I wish you a Happy New Year, and may you dreams come true!!!! :) <3 ya! xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey! No problem at all! i def understand! Hope you enjoyed your trip and had an awesome New Year! thanks so much and i look forward to hearing from you!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 66

Wow.. just wow. Well I'm glad he fired that crazy ass maid. Good riddance and she better stay her ass away from him AND Vanessa. As for Michael.. wow. He must've been under the influence to say some garbage like that. Was he drunk or high? Hmm. Maybe both. SMH. I hope Vanessa tells him about himself once he's fully sobered up. He needs a huge slice of humble pie, I'd tell his ass off. I'm sorry. And I don't think she's going to Japan with him either. And even worse, I fear if she doesn't, he's gonna get closer to that Melissa girl. BUT.. this could easliy be a two way street. Vanessa is a pretty girl. There could easliy be another man come into the picture.. hmm. That would certainly make things interesting. Let's see how he'd deal with her having male friends and men fawning over her. 



Author's Response:

Ha! That is very true! Michael is probably more jealous than Vanessa so another man entering the picture would def cause some issues. And i agree--Vanessa should tell Michael about himself. she's one of the few people that will let him know the truth 100%. but we'll see what happens!

thanks for reading! stayed tuned for more dra-ma! lol

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2011 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 66

oh boy i hope mike is ok him n nessa need to get it together

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