[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
Sheesh Dani messed up & she made a misteak if she could take them back I'm sure she would. The ppl around her gets on my nerves & they dnt understand shit. :S & as 4 Michael *Middle finger his ass.* :P haha can't wait 4 more.
Author's Response:
Lol! I honestly love all of the reactions I get from this story! XD "Middle finger his ass" lol! I think we all wanna do that right now :P
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
Michael is such a fucking dick oh my god, forreal. He is just like my ex-boyfriend, my ex was bipolar, and when he's angry, he's dangerous. After the things that he would do. He wouldn't give a single fuck about me. Then afterwards like not even a half hour later. He'd be all I'm sorry this and that it's cause I'm bipolar etc etc.
Dani really needs help, I actually really wanna be in this . Haha, like to be Dani's guidance to escapism and relief from everything.
Author's Response:
:'( At ;east he's your ex now though. I feel awful that all of this happens to you :(
Date: Dec 22, 2012 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
Michael and his friends are so damn ingnorant and do I sense Michael still caring a little for her? I love it can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Maybe a little :3
Yay! Glad you're intrigued! Hopefully I'll update soon! :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2012 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
Michael so wrong for that and Dani should had known better. Great story. :)
Author's Response:
I agree with everything you said in that sentence. Both of them made mistakes.
Thanks a lot! It feels good to know that you think so :DD
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2012 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ok i think this is the first time ive said it but michaels a DICK!!! Like a MAJOR dick!
(kinda like the monster pic....hehehehe xD)
wow this is all so terrible for Dani....
more intense emotion? Girl i know u can pull that off, go ahead! ;)
<3
Author's Response:
Lol! Omg EXACTLY like the pic ;)
Haha, I'll try my best! :) I just felt like I really lost the connecttuion with all of the emotion that got people hooked at the beginning, so I'm going to try adn focus more on that :)
<33
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2012 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww I'm feeling so bad for Dani!! Michael is an asshole! Then again, Dani should've known better than to give herself to him like that again. I thought she would've learned her lesson. However, I understand that she was yearning for human contact or somethin like that haha. Poor one! Anyway, I love this a lot! Much love <33
Author's Response:
Agreed, both of them were in the wrong. Haha "yearning for human contact" lol! yeah, I guess you could say that ;)
Thank you! I'm glad you love it! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2012 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
Dani's and my reaction to the message that Michael sent :
http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mf3gkvVEmZ1qfzzzr.gif
What I and possibly Dani want to do to Rose (Dani wants to do this to Michael)
http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mf39ztGKiY1qggtaq.gif
&
http://gifsoup.com/download.php?id=3994087&d=animatedgifs1&n=this-is-sparta&s=o
Author's Response:
Omg lol! The first one is so funny! Haha! XD I loved it!
And the other two, girl, you got it spot on ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2012 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
This was just....girrrrrl ;)
however i know its not good so this is a guilty pleasure ;) hehehe
<3
Author's Response:
Lol! It woulda been a nice scene if they weren't under the circumstances that they're in ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2012 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 11
NOOOO Michael!! Dani don't deserve that! You aint right. :(
I'm hoping something happens and he he changes his mind.
Author's Response:
:( Michael's just seriously out to get her, and he's going to extremes to hurt her even more...
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2012 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
i knw it i just knew it he laid her & played her.
he is an asshole 4 using her like this he will regret 4 doing this.
& i can't believe she fell 4 him to. gees dani but i knw cause mike is sexy but still not gona fall back into his tricks ugh.anyway can't wait 4 more!
Author's Response:
I love how strongly you feel about this. Whenever I read your reviews I can feel the anger there! Love it! <3
Lol! I love how in the middle of this little rant its like "i understand because Mike IS sexy but...." lol! that made me smile! :DDD
But I agree with you. He is sexy, it would be hard not to resist him... ;D
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2012 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
RAPE! I don't know what to call it..this has happened to me before, what Michael did to Dani in this chapter, has happened to me. .___. With my ex boyfriend. Ya know my soon-to-be-boyfriend, Mr. Michael Jaaaaackson. lol. We almost fucked :o If only I didn't have to leave! Lmao. He's acting all weird now o.o like..more protective of me. Like..he doesn't want me to go out all late with anybody..just him.
But, KEEP GOING! I was DYING, without this story! <3
Author's Response:
:'( I'm sorry that that's happened to you! That's awful! At least you're away from it now though :)
omg dude, seriously?! haha sounds like you were so close yet so far away ;) Aww protective guys are so cute :) <3
I'll definitely keep going! I'll try and update more often :) Glad you're liking it so much!
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2012 10:12 am Title: Chapter 10
Ohhhhhhh!!!!!! Hahahahahaha best line EVERRRRR!!!!!!
do u love me?
yes
take your clothes off!
Omg thts amazing lmao
anyway wow this is interesting
<3
Author's Response:
lol! That's how you pick up chicks, gotta be direct ;)
omg, lol no! jk jk haha!
Oh it'll get plenty interesting very soon >:D
Author's Response:
lol! That's how you pick up chicks, gotta be direct ;)
omg, lol no! jk jk haha!
Oh it'll get plenty interesting very soon >:D
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2012 10:08 am Title: Chapter 9
Haha mike breaking the window lol can just imagine it
ooooh romance in the air ;)
<3
Author's Response:
lol! Oh yeah, nothing says romance like smashing her window ;) lmao! If I was Dani I'd be like, "I'll go out with you once you fix my window..."
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2012 10:06 am Title: Chapter 8
Wooooow that was a rather heate arguement haha love it
<3
Author's Response:
:) Glad you do! :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh shit!
continue continue!!Author's Response:
Hehe I will! XD