[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2012 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh this is good I will continue to read this.
Author's Response:
XD Yay! Glad you think so!
Okay, this has nothing to do with the story, but everytime I see your Penname I think of Meryl Streep because your Penname reminds me of the movie 'The Devil Wears Prada' and then I think of Maryl Streep. Anyway, just had to say that. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2012 10:06 am Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha I love the humour you add :') -
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You're a cheerleader... it's what you do... I thought to myself as I plastered on a fake smile.
"I'm so glad that I can always count on you," I said to her as I tried to sound like I cared.
"
Lool XD
But OMG WHAT happened omfg I'm dying here. I hope we don't have to wait much longer. ;)
Great chapter. :D , <33
Author's Response:
Haha yay! Glad I succeeded on humour there! :D
Oh you'll see, and you won't be waiting too much longer. Bits and pieces of the whole story will start to come together.
Thank you! :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2012 01:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for updating AHHHH u must tell us what happened between them!! Lol I really like this though! 😝
L.O.V.E
Author's Response:
He he it's coming! XD Thanks for still reading it!
Love you <3 :*
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just LOVE the way you write!
Its kinda like the way I write, and I LOVE the way I write.. x)
But yeah, it really leaving me wanting more, and kinda wishing you had wrote a little bit more. And I understand your handling a couple of other stories, ithink? But maybe just a smidge more, thats a little more satisfying. But really, other than that, I cant really find anything else wrong with you writing. THe story is GOOD, you writing is GOOD and I love it, I I hope that next time we get more out of the chapter. I love the start. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Haha hey! I like the way I write too! XD lmao! We're such narcissists :P
Haha yeah I am juggling a few other stories, but that's no excuse for me to rip off the chapter for this one. I usually go for a minimum of 1000 words per chapter, maybe I should try for 1300 or 1500 minimum? I'll try that for the next chapter! :D
Thank you so much for the suggestions! It helps so much you have no idea! :D
Date: Oct 13, 2012 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Could u read my story "My professor, Mr Jackson please. Tell me if i should delete it
Author's Response:
Should you delete your story?! Well, do you like it? If you said yes, then don't delete your story. It's that simple. I really don't think anyone should ever give up and delete their stories (but that would make me a bit of a hypocrite because I've deleted 3 of my stories before), but you'd regret it afterwards. I did.
Yeah sure I'll check it out! :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Dang it. We'll never get to figure out, will we? And did you email me the next chapter to our story? I could've deleted it on accident.
Author's Response:
Yeah I did actually. It was a couple weeks ago. I also answered your brainstorming question. Did those e-mails not send? I'll send you the chapter I wrote to you again! :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another chapter...I can say it was a GREAT chapter but still nothing!
I'm dying here!I wanna know what she did to him!PLEASE!
I loved the chapter!Thanks!
Author's Response:
XD It's coming! I'm just making this unwravel slowly
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
I screamed so damn loud when I saw the update !
Michael all chingon! (spanish slang for badass)
I love this story! & I'm doing a story bout high school, I'm not copying or anything but it's gonna be a comedy, adult, drama type of thing. Makes me think of Mean Girls lol!
Not a spoiler but, Michael dresses like those swag boys lol.
Snapback, piercing, letterman jacket or a pullover (Y&R, LA, Bulls, Lakers, Clippers, etc.), skinnies, (skinny jeans of whatever color) or cargo shorts, Vans, Jordans, Adidias, Nikes, watch, belt, and a polo shirt, v neck or button shirt. Swag, lol.
Its gonna be awesome!
Author's Response:
XD Ah! Yay!
Ooh... I like that word. Chingon... I'm probably gunna use that someday! :)
Haha Mean Girls! Love it! And omj, I wouldn't accuse you of copying just because you're gunna do a high school story! Haha! If people could call people out on copying because of the setting and simple stuff like that people would be like "Wow YANA... your story is in a strip club; copied much", "OMJ YANA's at it again! Her story takes place in the USA! COPIER!!!" and "Holy crap... Michael is in the Bad era in this story story! Wow you sooooooooooooo copied mine!"
Lol! And that would just be ridiculous. :P
Hehe Swagg.... I wish guys here had swag. None of them have it here though :( It's sad. They all pretend they do though.
Omj dude it sounds awesome!
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2012 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved it more please :)
Author's Response:
He he, thank you! I'm so glad to hear that! I'm planning on updating later tonight! :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2012 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god, again? She's doing it again? She can't be... Really? I can't believe it! Seriously??? You're telling me that Yanagirl07 is writing ANOTHER awesome story?!?!?! How does she do it?! Lol
L.O.V.E <3
Author's Response:
lmao! I honestly write all the time. I've had this idea in my head for awhile now but I was like 'no, gotta pace myself', so I waited until I finished another one of my stories before I started this one! haha!
And hey, they're not all amazing. My first few were kinda weird :/ lol!
And hey, hey! I'm still waiting for some awesome stories from you, you know that right? Haha, love you! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2012 01:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Whaaaa.
I'm so curious you can't even imagine omggggg.
Why'd you leave it at that!!!? AGHH. XD
PLEASEE update soon, you're already killing us here and it's only been one chapter, damn! Lol.
Much love , <33
Author's Response:
Haha curiosity is a good thing! It means I'm doing this whole suspense thing right! lmao!
Haha because I find joy in torturing-- no, no, I'm kidding! I'm kidding!
It's actually because I just wanted like a little intro, kind of like a trailer, or a 'sneak peek', but a bit more developped. :D
Thanks for the review! Love! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2012 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow I can't wait 4 more! Update when ya can.
Author's Response:
XD he he thank you! I for sure will!
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2012 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH.MY.LORD.
No need to say...I loved the first chapter and girl...I'm curious!
What's happened?What did she do for god's sake???
I think another great story was born!
It will be good!I can feel it!
Please continue!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
XD Yay! I'm glad to hear! I was actually so surprised when I got so many reviews onth e first chapter I was like 'holy crap!' But I'm glad people seem to like it!
He he I'm glad to be the mother of such a great story XD
No, thank you for taking the time to review! I really appreciate it and they always make me day!
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2012 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm feelin' it, I'm feelin' it... Yeeah, definately want to sse more! Sounds like she was with Michael, did IT with him, and somehow the whole school knows. YIIIKKEES.
Wanna see how this turns out!!
Author's Response:
Hehe a little more than 'it'... you'll see, you'll see. Things will start to unfold in later chapters. But for now I'm gunnaa try and build up the suspense ;)
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2012 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Cuz I've got plans for that... ;)
haha seriously though, lmaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! When I saw I got another review I was like 'sweeet' and then I checked it and it's like that GUY! lmao! I laughed so hard. That actually made my day! Night... whatever. haha!
Sheeez.... I'm gunna be laughing about that for a long time to come! Haha!
That's probably the awesomest review I've ever seen haha! Love it!