[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2012 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ooooh Rose is a BITCH!!! Can't believe she was all over Michael, yuk yuk yuk! :O
wonder what's gonna go down when Dani meets up with Michael... U always leave it on a cliffhanger haha! XD me likey though
<3
Author's Response:
Haha! Cliff hangers are fun for me... idk how you guys feel about 'em, but it's good fun for me ;)
<33
Date: Nov 07, 2012 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
That bitch betta take her a bag of bricks just in fuckin case a mofo try to pop off.
Juss sayin'.
Author's Response:
Haha! lmao! Maybe she'll have to ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 06:08 am Title: Chapter 5
Damn that sub teacher is the worst! Usually in our high school they were OK because then we could mess around, but this one is annjoying AF lol
I liked Michael's little idea of fighting as an attempt to get new partners... Though it backfired for sure because now the 2 have detention :D ahaha
(his words to her were harsh tho!)
Rose Adams walked in, oh-ohh!!
Looking forward to more, PYT :) , <33
Author's Response: Oh God, don't even get me started on bad substitue teachers! They're awful here! Not as bad as this guy, but pretty close. Thank you! I appreciate the reads and reviews! :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Cool story you got here. Looking forward to finding out what happened, although I may have an idea already.
Author's Response:
Thank you! And yeah, the hints have been dropped, I think everyone's got a bit of an idea ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 04:50 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh fuck, kill me now too. Rose Adams vs Danielle .
Pleeeeease, I wanna know what else happened, what they did!
Author's Response:
Haha it'll be the cat fight of the year! XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2012 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
oooh Rose Adams eh? Sounds like bad news. :P
<3
Author's Response:
Haha oh yeah, trouble's brewing I can tell you that!
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2012 11:58 am Title: Chapter 4
Damn they partners! AH I CAN'T WAIT FO' MORE. :D
Your writing style is amazing, I NEVER get bored reading it :)) Thankyou for sharing such a wonderful story. You've got real talent!
I hope to see an update soon, girlie ^_^
, <33
Author's Response:
Haha thanks to the sub :P
Really? Thank you! That means a lot sicne you're the writer of so many amazing stories!
Haha me too :P Idk how much writing I'll be able to get done this week though... so busy!
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2012 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
So now we get a glimps of what happened between them two? I sort of get it now but still a bit not all that close yet. And yes I do love Prada and I'm from the 718 area code. And I love the movie and Maryl Streep to, she actually met MJ to I saw an old school picture of them together back in the dayz during his bad era. Anywho can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: Haha, just a small glimpse. That's only part of the flashback. There'll be more throughout the story so that the holes will get patched up. :D Oh really? I had no idea that she met him! Haha, I need to get myself back up to date :P
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2012 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ahhhh things are getting a bit clearer now :)
thanks for posting!
<3
Author's Response:
Haha that's only part of the flashback. There'll be more throughout the story
Thanks for reviewing!
<3
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2012 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooooh shit! Oh shit!
CONTINUE ! Please!
I wonder how their gonna cope with the partnership!
Author's Response:
Haha! Loved the reaction there ;)
I'll try and update soon, but I'm super busy this week. Tomorrow I'm straightening my hair, the day after I have a friend coming over and karate class, Friday I'm going shopping for my mom for her bday, the next day I'm going to a party, and the day after that I'm throwing a goodbye party for my exchange student!
Haha, I keep myself busy :P I'll probably still find time to work on another chapter for this story though since I like, obsess over writting and write all the time
Date: Oct 18, 2012 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
You shoul watch this link of what happened to this girl. It's very sad and her life is similar to this story. Accept she commited suicide. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ej7afkypUsc&feature=youtube_gdata_player
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, Amanda Todd.. it's awful. It's all over the news here. She only lived a few hours away from where I live, so she's a hot topic right now. Everyone's talking about her. I feel so bad. It's awful what happened to her. It's sad that she ended up taking her own life over it, but after all of those years of endless bullying I mean, can you blame her? What those people did to her was awful! Bullying like that should be considered criminal. RIP Amanda Todd! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2012 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
"She speaks!"
"She also has a mouth!"
I don't understand why the jerks are popular and the nice people are left out.
This is what has been in my head the whole time. This chapter describes my school life. Haha, this chapter gives a clue of what happened with him and her. I hope we'll see more. Great job.
Author's Response:
Oh God, don't even get me started on school. Smh... it's seriously messed up, I am not going to lie here! The whole social status stuff is whack. I don't mind being not one of the super popular kids; as long as I'm nice and don't treat people like crap I don't care where I lie on that whole Popularity Pyramid.
Hehe oh yes it does XD I'll try to keep dropping hints like that and I'm going to be inserting some flashbacks too
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2012 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh shit, oh shit! Le dieron un STD! He gave her an STD! Or Is it the other way around?!
Did he?! Smh, Michael seems like a player!
Author's Response:
Haha remember the acronym that the guys made? STD = Something Transmitted by Danielle
Does that clear things up a little? Haha we'll see about Michael later... ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2012 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
I feel sorry 4 her:/ poor girl her life sucks smh. Gees I hope something gives 4 her one day. I can't wait 4 more.
Author's Response:
Her life does suck right now... it's about to get a lot worse though... ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2012 08:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow ok. Wasn't expecting this but REALLY like it! Please keep going 😀
Author's Response:
Hehe XD Unexpectedness isn't always bad though is it? Haha! And yes I will, thank you! :D