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Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2012 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

The plot is good and interesting.It just needs a long chapter.

Thank you!Keep going!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, it's just that this is my first story on the Internet. But no excuses! Thanks, I'll try to write more in Chapter 2.

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