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Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2013 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Mass Confusions in My Head

Taxi, taxi

Lady cab driver, can you take me for a ride?
Don't know where I'm goin'
'Cuz I don't know where I've been
So just put your foot on the gas, let's drive

MY FEELINGS IN THIS CHAPTER!!!

 

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What I would do to be Amanda right now?! grrrrr!! This chapter brought the animal out of me lol!

Loved this one. Instantly has become one of my faves.



Author's Response:

We all would love to have been Amanda tsk tsk. She got christened by MJ and then some lol. Happy to know that the chapter is one of your faves! Drea and I aim to please *winks* Thanks for reading/reviewing~Shy

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2013 12:41 am Title: Chapter 18 - Mass Confusions in My Head

Lawwddddd I loved every bit of this and the shade Michael was throwing at Prince was classic. I loved this! Another job well done. 



Author's Response:

Lmaoooooooooo!!! You know Michael cannot pass a good time to throw shade at Prince. Anyway, thank you for the review. Glad you liked it. <333 ~ Drea

Reviewer: streetwalking_diva Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Mass Confusions in My Head

My feelings were all over the place with this chapter. The Apollo perfomance does things to me. He looked so good and it just made me wonder what Michael did do after the show in the big apple lol LOVED THIS!! *claps*



Author's Response:

lol the Apollo performance is life and then some. 

"He looked so good and it just made me wonder what Michael did do after the show in the big apple lol"<--tsk tsssssk *smirks*

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it!~Shy

Reviewer: MJsHistoryBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 08:42 am Title: Chapter 18 - Mass Confusions in My Head

OMJ! This story makes me want to go to New York and ride on one of those yellow cabs I have only seen in movies. What I would do to be Amanda. Lucky fan! Great job, ladies.



Author's Response:

Aww this review made me smile. As a New Yorker, I think it's cute how people talk about NY sometimes. I take these yellow cabs for granted. SMH. But I agree I would have done anything to have been Amanda. She was a lucky fan indeed. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. <333 - Drea

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2013 01:23 am Title: Chapter 18 - Mass Confusions in My Head

Great chapter, another new favorite of mine. Loved all the Prince references! I was kind of thinking of "Taxi Cab" that R. Kelly had written for MJ while reading this. Anyway, can't wait to see what you all do next :)



Author's Response:

"I was kind of thinking of "Taxi Cab" that R. Kelly had written for MJ while reading this."<--really? lol I forgot all about that song. I can see how it could relate. :) But anyway, thank you!~Shy

Reviewer: Girlisdangerous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2013 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Love is the Answer...

That was smexy number #2

Love me some bad era!!!!



Author's Response:

Bad era is one era of just SEXUAL MIKEGASM!! lol! Thanks for the review. <333

Reviewer: Girlisdangerous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2013 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Speed Demon....

Oh Lawd!!! Michael is extra smexy in this lol....now excuse me but I need to go take a hot shower!!!



Author's Response:

Ohhhh "Smexy" Never heard that before lol....Shy and I are glad you liked it. <3333 Bad era was a HOT era!!

Reviewer: Girlisdangerous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2013 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Speed Demon....

Oh Lawd!!! Michael is extra smexy in this lol....now excuse me but I need to go take a hot shower!!!



Author's Response:

"Smexy" lol that's a new one. Glad you enjoyed it~Shy

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2013 12:10 am Title: Chapter 17 - You're fearing me 'cause you know I'm a beast...

Wow i loved this concept! :)

lol your newspaper is amazing ;) love it. 

"Hot convict guy is at your place, isn't he?" Hahahaha!! I laughed so much at that! XD

<3



Author's Response:

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Thank you!!! I loved this concept too. Something about having Michael as the bad guy made sense to Shy and I for this chapter. Invincible era was all about attitude.

LOL, We had to include that newspaper. We thought it was a nice touch. I'm glad you thought so too.

LMAO!! I like that part too. That's something I would have said. ( .__.)

Thanks for the review <333

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 03:48 am Title: Chapter 16 - Diggin' My Ditch

Blood on the dancefloor really had to have a great story and this is IT! LOVED it! 

I loved how u included "That's some good fiiiish right thereee." That vid of Mike is so funny :D

But holy SHIT, the sex scenes in this... Wow. And when Michael was taking his 'revenge'? Fuck yes. ;)

<3



Author's Response:

Thank you!

"I loved how u included "That's some good fiiiish right thereee.""<--we just had to. lol it was a must!

And the sex scene...

Michael laid it down and then some.~Shy

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 03:18 am Title: Chapter 15 - Is It Scary?

Omg my FEELS! This was awesome! I am in LOOOVE with Maestro and this story was just perfect! :D

<3



Author's Response:

YESSSS!!! Honey, my feelings were all scrambled up in the mix of writing this chapter with Shy. Ghosts is our fave short film of Michael's. It had to be perfect!! And Michael looked so dammmmmnnnnnnnnn fine doing it. It's his fault for making us feel this way. Maestro was a hot sexy man!!

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It sure damn is!! ( .__.)  *has dirty thoughts* lol jk (not really)

Anyway, thanks for the review. -Drea

Reviewer: streetwalking_diva Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2013 11:38 am Title: Chapter 17 - You're fearing me 'cause you know I'm a beast...

Two amazing authors have come together and written the most amazing short stories on this website. You two are one of the best writers here. I love all your stories so to see you two writing together makes me really happy.

All of them were highly entertaining. I spent hours reading them last night and then I read them again today. My favorites were the circus girl from the Thriller era, the stripper girl from the dangerous era and this one. I like Michael when he's the seductor, the bad ass lol.

Can't wait to read the second short story of the invincible era.



Author's Response:

Awww

Thank you honey. Drea and I enjoy writing these stories just as much as you guys enjoy reading them! 

"I spent hours reading them last night and then I read them again today."<--did you really? lol you really are enjoying them, huh? That's a good sign.

TheThriller era genie story is one of my faves too. And I believe that EVERYONE was feeling for the stripper in the dangerous era story lol. A seductive Michael is so attractive. Of course we all know that Michael had an aggressive side anyway no matter how hard he tried to hide it tsk tsk. I'm late with this reply but the final Invincible era story is now up! Enjoy~Shy 

Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2013 08:26 am Title: Chapter 17 - You're fearing me 'cause you know I'm a beast...

I died and went to heaven!!! Michael was such a jerk but he was sexy as hell doing it. I need more!!!!!



Author's Response:

lmaoooo I guess only Michael could be a jerk in a sexy way. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review - Drea

Reviewer: MJsHistoryBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2013 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 17 - You're fearing me 'cause you know I'm a beast...

Michael was so thick in this era. The perfect weight!! He looked so good and this story satisfied my every needs.

Bad Mafia Michael - CHECK

Bossy, won't take NO for an answer Michael - CHECK

Sexy Beast Michael - CHECK

I am flying in the clouds. I loooovvvvvvvvvvveddddddddd this story. Can't wait for the next one.

 



Author's Response:

Michael was all types of thick in this era. "Thickems lol" He was a determined gangsta in this chapter.

"I am flying in the clouds. I loooovvvvvvvvvvveddddddddd this story. Can't wait for the next one."<--

lol thanks. Drea and I will try to update soon~Shy

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2013 11:10 am Title: Chapter 17 - You're fearing me 'cause you know I'm a beast...

OMJ, I LOVE these stories! Can't wait for the next one!!



Author's Response:

Yayyyy!! Shy and I are so glad you are liking them. More to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing. - Drea

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