Date: May 30, 2011 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 29
I love the prelude. I can't wait for you to continue the original.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. i enjoyed writing it. :)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2011 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 29
Awww its over:(
Author's Response:
Yes, unfortunately. But now you can look to the original story for updates. :)
Date: May 27, 2011 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 29
Whoo Hoo!!!! Now to the drama haha
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2011 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 24
Why did she devorced him, like I never got the real reason behind it?? Was it cuz toya said he was with some woman? Cuz if that's the reason come on now, it could of been a made up story to cover Michael.. She should of at leafs hear him out. Confront him and see what was that about.. If he did cheat then I would understand but she doesn't even know if it's true and she for no reason wants to devorce him just cuz of something someone said??
Author's Response:
Well the REAL reason was she was scared. I tried to drop hints of this. Latoya was kinda the 'fall girl', she was the person she threw the blame on. She was scared of marrying him. And i agree, she should have heard him out and let him explain but if she had then there wouldn't be a story. :)
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2011 07:20 am Title: Chapter 23
WOW love all the new updates!!! Can't wait to read more & the other story as well!!! I love your writing :)
Date: May 18, 2011 03:14 am Title: Chapter 22
I stand corrected it wasnt fucked up it was just like drama he say-she say. Wow all bad
Date: May 15, 2011 01:48 am Title: Chapter 20
awww this is the part where she divorced him that was fucked up
Author's Response:
Haha, i agree.
Date: May 15, 2011 01:41 am Title: Chapter 20
Im still mad at Alana for getting a divorce just because of Toya's words. Dang I thought she was stronger than that. Lana and Michael are two cute together. lol gigi I love this story but I need to know whats going to happen with Michael, Lisa, and Alana lol that dinner was too funny with Michael and Alana making each other jealous.
Author's Response:
It's coming, as soon as i add the last two chapters to the Prelude.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2011 01:38 am Title: Chapter 20
OMG...they broke up so soon?? I need to know what happens.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2011 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 18
OMG!!!!! thanks for all the new chapter updates!!!! they were so good!!!! I can totally feel the Love Michael has for her through this story!!! just so good!!! its a shame I know what eventually happens lol but its still interesting to read the before POV of this story!!! can't wait for an update! will you also be writing about what each did after the break up from the marriage like how michael & Alana dealt with it? how michael fell for lisa & if alana dated anyone after before running into each other again in the other story? I hope I'm making sense cuz I'm totally rambling lol anyways loved it, I love Michael & alana as a couple they are just too cute!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you can feel the love. I really wanted to make sure that it was clear that he REALLY did care for her. Yeah, And i was thinking about how I maybe should have began the story with the prelude-with more details of course lol- and used that as the main story, but i wanted to do something different from my other stories.
I was planning on leaving the story where they break up, but I guess i can give some insight into what happened in the years they were absent from each others life. That's a good idea!
Thanks. The final updates coming soon. :) As well, as the new updates for the main story.
Date: Apr 30, 2011 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 18
Love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2011 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aaaaawwwwwwww!!!!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: Apr 30, 2011 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 18
great update does this mean katherine might have known that mike had a serious relationship with lana
Author's Response:
Yes i tried to hint that Katherine was somewhat aware, although she doesn't know that Michael and Alana are THAT serious. In the story, Katherine knows that something is going on but she doesn't know all the specifics. And she doesn't know that he wants to marry Alana.
Date: Apr 30, 2011 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
im glad their are back together
Date: Apr 28, 2011 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
i honestly believe that you have one of the top 5 michael fan fic series ever written...this story is flawless. I get surprised every time that your followers aren't higher...is mjfiction the only site you upload your series to? i know most popular fan fics post to more than one site..i see this story as one of the best fan fics i've ever seen...it doesn't get it proper recongnition....hope you update soon, love.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! And no, it's not the only site that I update on. I also am on MJJBoard, but that is the only other one. I'm glad that you really enjoy the fic. Thanks for your wonderful review and reading it!! :)