Date: Apr 26, 2011 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
She was so mean to him....sheesh!
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2011 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awww shucks!! Gett it on!!!!Update please!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2011 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
so happy to see you update!!! Loved the new chapters & loved reading the latoya scene from a little different pov!! I can't wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's hard to write overlapping scenes, although i knew i wanted to make sure I included them. Especially the Latoya one because it's so important.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2011 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
What's her problem? Whoa!! I hope she figures it out....great job!
Author's Response:
Haha. Yeah, she's a little stupid. She has a man that completely adores her.
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2011 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 11
not blah at all!!! I loved it! I think jealous michael is so cute lol! anyways Oh no I'm not looking forward to Latoya coming and messing everything up lol! update soon I always love your stories
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: Mar 19, 2011 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
I like when Michael is jealous. Great job!
Author's Response:
Me too. I try to imagine how he would have acted.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2011 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
there are no words to describe how much i love this story lol! plz update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2011 11:53 am Title: Chapter 9
this was cute! Alana and Michael are adorable together.
Author's Response:
Thanks! i enjoy writing them. I love writing love. lol
Date: Feb 03, 2011 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hey Gigi, this was great! I like how they were all nervous around eachother and shy, that was really cute! They act so different from the original story. I can't wait to read more and find out why they are so angry later on. You could feel the love they have for eachother but later on it seems is covered up with pain and anger.
Author's Response:
They do. I really wanted to showcase the big difference between them. I wanted to make sure that it was understood how the love they had transpired so quickly. Thanks for your comments! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2011 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
I loved it!!! I love how shy they are around each other ;) so cute!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I tried really hard to make that apparent. The wonderful beginnings of love. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2011 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Good dialogue and description.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2011 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
Okay, I like the story. Where can I find the original sis?
Author's Response:
I believe you can just click on my name and all my stories should pop up.
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2011 11:59 am Title: Chapter 8
Well I started your story on this part. And I like it so I'm going to go back and read the rest. Hope it's as good as this girl. Either way, keep it coming. Oh, and where do I find the original version of the story?
Date: Jan 31, 2011 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
Alana sounds like me if I just had a night with Michael Jackson....
Author's Response:
Haha. I tried to capture the shyness and 'cuteness' of it all. lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2011 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
O___O
WOAAAHHH
can't....breathe...
Needless to say I FREAKING LOVE THISSS.
Update soooon!!