Date: Feb 13, 2013 11:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh Gooooooooooood, I would do it, girl without thinking!!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2013 09:39 am Title: Chapter 4
OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! I know me, I would have pass out a hundred times LMAO! I wonder if Michael ever read fanfiction about him LOL. I would have been so ashamed to read one about him too! I'm still wondering if she isn't still sleeping and dreaming on Michael's bed LOL
Oouh, I love me some nasty Michael!
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2013 07:24 am Title: Totally Unexpected
OMG her fantasy just got real :0 Damn he tasted her! So sexy! I can't wait to read the next chaoter! I knew he liked her, it was so obvious!
I wonder of she is still dreaming LOL that would be funny
Author's Response: haha Shock Right XD No She's Not dreaming It's All Real :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2013 06:30 am Title: Chapter 4
C Omg that was hot! Please continue!
Date: Feb 13, 2013 06:13 am Title: Chapter 4
omg omg this is like a dream come true
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2013 05:08 am Title: Chapter 4
Dear Jesus..............update....now.....lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2013 04:58 am Title: Chapter 4
Talking about a cliffhanger! Jesus! This is SO HOT and he's killing her! He's so sexy, so demanding! Please, please, please...I need more...like NOW! I just cannot...BREATHE! Oh, God...lol I'm sorry! Pictures are becoming pretty vivid in my head! I love this!
Date: Feb 13, 2013 04:51 am Title: Chapter 4
No you wrote my part!! It was for me to do I really wanted to write it!!
Author's Response: Im sorry but this story is just betweent the 2 authors
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2013 04:40 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow, Please Continue, While I Try To Find Some Adjectives To Describe How I'm Feeling. Lol, This Is An Incredible Story.
Author's Response: aww thank you very much!
Date: Feb 12, 2013 11:00 am Title: Totally Unexpected
why you finish in the middle why ;P please i need next part
Author's Response: To Make You Really Want To Read On haha. Next Part Will Be Up Soon :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2013 06:32 am Title: Totally Unexpected
OMFGGGGGGGGG, GIRL THIS WAS AWESOME!! DAMN, HOW COULD SHE NOT SEE THAT HE LIKED HER, HELL I WOULD'VE GOTTEN INTO THE SHOWER WITH HIM.. HAHAHHA.. DAMN, RUBBING LOTION ON HIM.. I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO RESIST!. GREAT CHAPTER GIRL
Author's Response: She Knows, She Just Can't Believe It. haha I Know Right ;) Thanks So much 4 Ur Review. We Really Appreciate It.
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2013 06:00 am Title: Totally Unexpected
Noooo you can't stop ther!! Hahah I hope you'll update sooon ;) love it!
Author's Response: haha Makes u Want To Read On Stopping There Though :P Yes Next Part Will Be Up Soon :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2013 05:07 am Title: Totally Unexpected
OMG,,, sweet baby Jesus,,,!! Please keep writing !
Author's Response: Happy You Enjoy It :) Next Part Will Be Up Soon :)
Date: Feb 12, 2013 04:02 am Title: Totally Unexpected
I am willing to add on but what happen is not expected so could no one please add to this because I am trying really hard to write this really good and it might take a week or so to write.
Author's Response: Add On? This Is Only Being Written Between Us.