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Reviewer: Meganjackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2011 01:53 am Title: Together..

Aww what a beautiful story.

Reviewer: soulreader123 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2011 03:59 pm Title: Together..

that was good lolz i love it u should keep writing

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2011 11:07 pm Title: Thoughts...

This is such a beautiful stroy!! I can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2011 11:30 am Title: The Beginning..and The Meeting

Nice start but its difficult to read clearly as there are no spaces. If your describing a scene and then dialogue takes place during the scene make sure the dialogue is separate so its easily read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving me some feedback...yeah i will do that now..thanks for commenting on that..ya see i write it on windows notepad and its difficult to edit when it gets posted online..More will be up soon and i will edit those in the story..:)

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2010 11:30 pm Title: Trouble...

I like your story so far.  Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

thanks..more will be up soon..x

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