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Reviewer: mamaspearl Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2012 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 6

my hubby is trying to figure out why I am sitting here blushing and fanning myself!!



Author's Response:

Lmao! XD Well, I'm glad this story got that kind of reaction! ;)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2012 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Lol knowing u, I'm sure ul be able to drag this out for longer, probably 10 chapters xD wonder what he'll do now the chains are coming off ;) amazing, L.O.V.E <3



Author's Response:

Lmao! I can only drag out a sex scene for so long! Haha, but I do have an idea for another chapter, and one thing will probably lead to another so I think I'll probably get two more chapters out of it before I end it :P

Hehe, it's more like what Roxie's gunna do *hint hint* ;)

Thanks for reviewing! <3

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2012 02:25 am Title: Chapter 5

Lol pure torture for us and poor Roxie! 



Author's Response:

Haha the torture is almost over, I don't know how much longer I an drag this out for! lmao!

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2012 01:50 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh my god! It's sooo good.

If I was her, I would be dying of pleasure and frustration. I was like "Stop Michael and enter her now!" in front of my screen lol. It was like I was the one who was craving for him lol.

When she will get the chance to have him in her, it will be the best sex time of her life. What he was doing to her is so goood lol



Author's Response:

:) Thank you!

Lmao! I think a few people we're saying the same thing ;)

Oh it'll be fantastic, you'll see...

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2012 12:16 am Title: Chapter 5

haha I mean it, gurl! This is one of my favorite stories! I understand her MORE than well! To think that in the beginning, she was even thinking about rejecting him...That thought will never ever cross her mind again! LOL At least he's searching for her G-spot now to grant her immense pleasure! I hope, he's aware that once he starts now, she will soon be coming all over his fingers! I bet, he will find a way to deny her her release tho! haha

Therefore it would be mean to just let them fuck each other once now, wouldn't it? LOL

I wanna read sooo much more...:-D

Author's Response:

Haha thank you! That means a lot to me! I really appreciate all of this! Haha oh yeah, by the end she might just be more in favour of one night stands. ;)

Haha you're just hinting away for me to continue and make this a long story aren't you? I can tell haha! ;)

Thank you girl! :D

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2012 12:16 am Title: Chapter 5

You knowat, motha fu-- FUCK YOU... OKAY... WITH THE WAITIN AND SHIT, IHHT FUCK ALL DAT, MAAN... STOP PLAYIN WIT MY HORMONES, YO. JSU TGET TO THE MOTHA FUCKIN GOOD SHIT, YO.

D-';

Author's Response:

lmao I kinda thought that the whole story was the mothafuckin good shit. Haha but the mothafuckin good shit that you're thinking of is coming; I promise you that!

And as for the horomones, I can't help it! It gets the best reactions! ;)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omfj! I thought she was gona get more lol! Michaels such a tease... Which means YOU! You are such a TEASE!!!! XD lol u know we love or though uve got us crazy :)

L.O.V.E <3



Author's Response:

Haha she'll be getting more for sure, just in the next chapter ;) Lmao! I enjoy being a tease :P Thank you girl! I appreciate your reviews so much <3 :*

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh.My.God.! This is sooo sexy, I wanna scream! I can't get enough! If Michael did this to me, I'd pray, he'd just drag it a little bit longer for the sake of letting me be close to him, make love to him. lol This is intriguing! Now he even wants Roxie silent? I'd helplessly scream, cry and beg at this point! He's great, beyond amazing! When he finally let's her feel him, she'll die with pleasure...and cum all over him, without restraints! LOL This will be the best sex she ever had!

Author's Response:

XD Omg thank you soooo much! Your reviews and all of these compliments mean so much to me! Thank you thank you thank you! Haha oh trust me, once those chains are off she'll be crazy obsessed with him ;)

Reviewer: mamaspearl Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

dammit, you did it again!! Mikegasm denied....with all this teasing!



Author's Response:

Lmao! Mikegasm denied! Haha! I've never heard someone say that before but that had me laughing! If I could 5***** a review, I'd 5***** this one!

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 02:17 am Title: Chapter 4

You're killing me with this story girl!

Each chapters are perfect, the sexual tension and the sexiness are present all along and it's really great.And your Michael really drives me crazy lol.I never thought about Michael acting like this, but it's pure sexiness!

I'm stick to every words.Take it slow if you need cause you're really great doing it.



Author's Response:

Haha thank you! I'm glad! I've never thought of Michael as this kind of person in reality, so that's why I thought it would make a good fic and a nice chage of pace ;)

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2012 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 4

haha Thank you! I can't wait! I so hope, you will make this longer, cos there is potential for a love story here...He plans out a one night stand, but what if Michael wants more, wants her again or at least she does, because it was just beyond GREAT? ;-) I can clearly imagine this...Your writing style is amazing! It is driving me insane! I so feel Roxie! You just want this gorgeous, sexy man
...and he makes you wait! Minutes seem like hours!

Author's Response:

Make it longer? Hmm... I never really thoguht of making this a long story because all I wanted to do was write a sex scene because I hadn't written one in a logn time and I was going crazy! lmao! Idk, I might make it longer, but I'm not sure.

Hehe thank you! Oh my God, if a guy did this to me I think I'd cry! I'd go totally insane just beign constantly teased and tormented like that!  XD

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2012 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG I really looove this story. I would say that my mind is in the gutter but I have an apartment in the gutter so i basically live there lol. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response: Haha yay! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: mamaspearl Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2012 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

dear sweet lord, this story is soooo freaking sexy, im about to combust!!! this chapter is such a tease!



Author's Response: Haha combusting tends to happen while you experience a Mikegasm ;) Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: iGiggle Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2012 10:21 am Title: Chapter 4

You're killing me... And I love it ;)



Author's Response:

Haha killing you with Mikegasms I hope ;)

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2012 08:38 am Title: Chapter 4

this story is gorgeous take ur time if u need it its perfect

Author's Response:

Thank you! Haha oh yeah, I'll be taking my time for sure! People seem to like it better that way :)

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