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Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 04:12 am Title: Chapter 7

Kim is an annoying pest. I wondered if Michael is falling for Mariah. That be cool if Michael drop kim and get with mariah. I love ur story. Update soon. :D

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 04:04 am Title: Chapter 6

Aww how cute. He thinks her as his angel. Kim i can't stand. Never did. She mean to michael and it's sad. He just wanted comforted. Oh poor mikey.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 03:51 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh great kim is going on the trip. I hope someone teaches her an lesson.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 03:41 am Title: Chapter 4

I wondered what mischievous plan that her friend is up to. I can't wait to see what michael expression is gonna be.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 02:50 am Title: Chapter 3

Damn kim is an bitch. If i was in Mariah shoes i would kick kim sorry no good for nothing ass.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 02:36 am Title: Chapter 2

I don't like kim to be honest. I can't stand stuck up bitches. Michael deserves better. Some men attracts bad seeds and don't even know it. Just my opinion.

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2012 03:21 am Title: Chapter 6

Michael wake up and get rid of kim. She is only using you. I hope he realises that Mariah is only usng morgan to get back at him and make him jealous.

I would sugest to space out the paragraphs and leave a gapy between the dialgoue in the story and the descriptive content.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the advise I'll be sure to take it into consideration the next time I write. also thanks so much for reading my story, I'll be sure to update soon:)

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 05:46 am Title: Chapter 5

LOL Mariah mayking Michael jealous is so funny but I think she might be playing with fire there Michael might just decide to make his relationship with kim permanent

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 05:29 am Title: Chapter 4

Mariah may like Michael but she needs to tell him how cruel kim is. She cant keep pretending that everything is ok when its not.

 

I hope she gets the courage to tell him soon

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 05:25 am Title: Chapter 3

Kim is so mean. I hope Michael raelises that and dumps. Mariah is so mucb better for him.

 

 

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 03:19 am Title: Chapter 2

Nice story.

I wish kim was not in the way because they would be graet together

Reviewer: MJJLUVU Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2012 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 5

Sounds like someone's a little jealous. Upload when u can.

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2012 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

Please continue I can't wait for more.
Thank you!

Reviewer: soldieroflove Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2012 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

1 word Awesome. This is good I cant wait until your next update



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Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2012 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

great story ....cant wait to see where this goes love it cant wait for more :)

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