[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2012 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wish you hadnt rushed through things so fast with Vanity and Michaels interaction. You need more detail and plot, you really could have stretched what you have so far into four chapters, if you had taken more time. Work on that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that feedback! I agree with you 100%. I did feel like I rushed it alittle bit too fast!But Vanity and Michael's interaction was suppose to be a one night thing. And it would be kinda of weird to stretch that out into four chapters! LOL! Also, I'm kind of going with the flow with the plot and letting the detail just come to me! And just to add, sex scene aren't my thing, I'm kind of akward when it comes to that. LOL! But again, thanks for the feedback. I will definitely take that in and take my time! Thanks!:)<3
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2012 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter gurl! I loved it very much! Keep up the good work because your stories are always amazing! <3
Author's Response: Thank you, Girl! That was too sweet! LOL!
Date: Aug 23, 2012 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well I'm glad finally there's michael and vanity story on here. I have a story almost with vanity and prince in it accept michael is dating the other member of vanity's group. He fell inlove with susan moonsy.I have updated that for months I'm still not sure rather I wanna continue it or not. But u can check it out if u want and let me know what u that think. Lolz cause I might delete it soon I been having major writer's block 4 that story. But pls carry on with this!
Author's Response: Really? That seems interesting! I will check it out! And I will continue! Next chapter out tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2012 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
I read both chapters and I'm hooked. I like these type of prince and michael vanity stories.I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! This story came into my head when I was listening to Prince. I was trying to avoid it (I thought I couldn't pull it off), but it kept coming back. So now the story is here! LOL! A new chapter coming out soon!
Date: Aug 23, 2012 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh snap I wonder what vanity is going to do next. Shoot she's lucky to have both of them!!
Author's Response: Well, you'll just have to find out on the next chapter! Tell me about it!:)
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2012 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Honey Bunches of oats great chapter. Continue!
Author's Response: LOL! That was funny! And thanks, chapter will be out soon!
Date: Aug 22, 2012 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting... More...
Author's Response: Thanks! More will be out soon!
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2012 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm already hooked on this story, I'm wonder what's gonna happen next! :)
Author's Response: Really? Thanks! You'll soon find out in the next chapter! LOL! ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2012 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg! This is great! Please continue! This is definitely going in my favs gurl! Update soon bunny! <3
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks, Gurl! It means alot to me that its goin in your favs! Updates will be on its way!