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Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2012 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 8

aww they about to get it on now loolz gurl! there very into each other more now *thumbs up* please continue when u can. ;) and ur welcome 4 the tip.



Author's Response: LMFAO!!!!! Yeah, they are this is when the story is gonna get really good! (I think LOL!) More out soon! :)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2012 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

cute chapter! im glad they finally went on a date about time loolz they are just so cute togther i can't wait for more. hope you feel better i think i been picking up a cold to maybe an allergy i think. Peach tea is good I been drinking that and having caugh drops along with some nyquil, maybe you can try that tho depending what type of cold you have. But feel better.

Author's Response: Thanks =)!Yeah it is about time, I don't know why I didn't do it sooner! LOL Thanks! I feel better now, sorry I didn't respond to this review faster. I would definitely try that next time I get sick. I hope you get better! <3

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2012 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 7

Whoa! Michael really decked her out on that date that was sweet of him. And he told her she was special :D oh I'm jealous now.

Lol that was a nice romantic treat. I can't wait for the next chapter and you feel better drink hot peppermint tea & lemon dear if you have.

Author's Response: Yeah, he did! Oh, don't be jealous, it's just Michael being Michael.LOL! More will be out soon! And I'm feeling alittle better, I'm getting my engery and laughter back! LOL! Thanks for the tip!

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2012 04:49 am Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter girl, but I really think you should read over your chapters sometimes before you post them. But please don't feel left out because I do that alllllll the time and me being your friend it takes a BEST friend to tell you something like that. But let me tell you, even though there were many mistakes in there, your writing style is still amazing!!! So don't feel bad about this chapter because that still doesn't change the fact that I absolutely loved it!! So I really hope you're not mad at me for saying that, lol, but I just wanted to let you know. :) You know I love you and you're my friend and I'll definetly tell you something that's needed to be told. But insane chapter gurl!!! I sooooooo can't wait until your next update! <3



Author's Response: Alright! Will do! I just wanted to hurry up and upload it, so I won't feel like I left you guys hanging! I read over the very being and just stopped! LOL! I'll take the great advice. Thanks! <3 More out soon!

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2012 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 6

You never fail to amaze me. Smh. Never. LOL! Your stories are always interesting and I'm soooooo loving this story! Please keep going! You got me hooked girl! <3



Author's Response: Thank you! LOL! I'm glad that you liked it! <3

Reviewer: belovd2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2012 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Alright now...I'm liking this story, looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response: LOL! Thanks! More chapters coming out soon!:)

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Woooooo they did it again :P Van better want his ass for real or I'll snatch him up before she does clock is set off tic toc. Lovely chapy keep it up!

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, they did! Vanity is smart, I think she will do the right thing, by Michael!;)

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG! OMG! OMFG!!!!! I'm sorry but gurl I'm not saying this just because I'm your friend, but you got some fucking skills!!!!! This is no joke!! You're an awesome writer and everybody knows that! I loved this chapter so fucking much that I can't stand you right now! (jk) LOL!! But no matter what anyone says, continue this story forever because I'll still read it and review even if I am the only person doing it! You have massive talent and you just took it to a whole 'nother level gurl! Keep up the good work cause you're doing insanely awesome right now!!! <3



Author's Response: LMAO!!!! Thanks, Gurl! I'm glad you liked it! That's good to hear that you and everyone else supports me and this story! More will be out soon!:)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

awesome chapter it was good! and aww i feel bad for michael because he feels used and lonley i hope vanity isn't giving off the wrong impression to him. she should be foward to him and not lead him on. i know she wants him to and everything but she going about it the wrong way. And thanks 4 the encouragement I will try 2 carry on with it. lolz i can't wait for more! :)



Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Vanity is kind of confused when it comes to love. She'll end up making a decision soon, don't worry! And your welcome! I would love to see where it goes! Plus, you have alot of fans for that story, you don't wanna leave them hanging! LOL!<3

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 07:19 am Title: Chapter 4

OMG! Thanks for the props girl! I was blushing the whole time I was reading the chapter note! Haha. But great chapter bunny! I just love this story sooooooo much! Update soon!! <3



Author's Response: LOL! Your welcome girl! You deserved it, your awsome at banners! I hope that gets you more customers! Aww, thanks! More will be on it's way!;)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awesome chapter I loved it loolz :D Thanks for sharing the vid too wow Michael got so excited there. I hope him and Vanity meet again. They actually look cute togethere. Oh and I 4got to tell u the name of my story where he dated the other member Susan Moonsie from Vanity6 my story called "The way we met." U can find it on my bio if u want tho. But anyways keep the good work up!



Author's Response: Thanks and your welcome! The video is from the site AllisVanity.us, so the credit goes to them! I hope it wasn't annoying because everytime you clicked on the chapter, it plays automatically! LOL! And yes Michael got excited, the video explains why! Yeah, they do look cute together, but they have never crossed paths (well until now! LOL!). Oh and I saw the story! It was pretty good! I see others liked it as well! You should continue! And I will keep up the good work! Next chapter will be up soon! :) <3

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Holy Mash&Gravy! She was not even thinking about Prince. Haha she needs another dose of Mikejr.

Author's Response: LOL! That was good one! You are super funny! Yeah, she does need Mike Jr. But don't worry, she'll get sometime soon!:)

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 07:30 am Title: Chapter 3

First off, wow. LOL! Just, wow. I don't have any words for this chapter! It was so good, I had to take a 2 minute break and pinch myself to make sure I was awake because I just woke up so reading this right when I opened my eyes would make me see things but now I know this is real. LOL! I loved this chapter soooooo much and no offense to the person that made this comment but I certainly don't think you're taking this too fast. If anything, it's going at the right speed. So keep doing what you do and make history with this story because I have a great feeling with this story! No joke. :) But anyways, great chapter bunny and keep up the awesome work! <3



Author's Response: LOL! Maybe I should put a warning that saids, "WARNING:Dont read when you first get up!":). Thank you so much! But I really think I should take my time and slow down. Even it's just a tad bit. More will be out soon!

Reviewer: nalwenda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 03:34 am Title: Chapter 1

I love it! But i have still one question.. Why exactly did Prince want Vanity to sleep with Mike? 



Author's Response: LOL! Thanks, Girl! Prince wanted Vanity to sleep with Michael, because he wanted Michael to be thrown off his game alittle. But soon it's gonna blow up in face. Thanks for reading!<3

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 12:24 am Title: Chapter 3

No wonder she was enjoying it so much like that loolz wow! She was imagining him as michael. :p
Can't wait 4 more!

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, Michael has been heavily on her brain lately! More will be on the way.

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