[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2011 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Phone Call
OH MY. Don't let it be real. Please let her be alive!! She needs to be alive D: This can't happen! D: Dang, you got me hooked here :) <3
Author's Response:
The reality of what happened will be revealed soon. Let's just say that the next chapter will be...interesting? Hmm...how's that?
Date: Feb 08, 2011 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Once in a Lifetime Opportunity - This Is It
I'm a new ready....and I must say I enjoyed reading your fanfic tremendously.....it's truly refreshing and exciting......their electrifying first meeting and the second one as well....definitely they're meant to be together........and the last chapter is quite eerie and disturbing though.....the dream and it seems like its happening for real........BUT PLEASE DON'T LET ALI DIE! MJ needs her......
Author's Response:
Welcome! Thank you for reading my story. I'm so thrilled that you like it! I hope you will continue to read and enjoy. :)
Date: Feb 03, 2011 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Phone Call
OMMMGG U CANT STOP THERE!!!!
OMGGGGGG :O :O :O
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm sorry but I had to stop there. My best friend, who has been reading the story as well, was reading it on her phone and got mad at her phone because it wouldn't scroll down anymore. Then she realized that's where the chapter ended. I'm sure you can imagine the text messages I received after that. When I was writing the phone call during the dream sequence I knew then exactly how I would end the chapter and had the title of the chapter. I hope that you enjoyed it though.
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2011 03:22 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Phone Call
O my God what's going to happen?! I can't get enough of this story please update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. More to come soon.
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2011 12:46 am Title: Chapter 7 - The Phone Call
Girl, why you messing with me? What are you trying to do to me sis? Here I'm reading the story and everything. Enjoying myself. Now you're trying to kill off the lead female. And the story just started?
Alright enchantress girl. If you kill Ali off, that's foul girl. That's not right. You done hurt my feelings. And then you had the nerve to leave me with this daggone cliffhanger. You're not right girl. Not at all...
But I'm gonna keep reading cuz this update was da bomb. Keep it coming girl.
Author's Response:
You crack me up girl! I'm sorry to leave you hanging the way I did but like I told you on the other site I love cliffhangers. So get used to it cause there will be more...lol. I hope you can forgive me. I hope that I don't hurt your feelings with the next chapter.
Date: Feb 02, 2011 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Phone Call
Oh Boy!!! I hope this does turn bad!!!
Author's Response:
You will find out soon what will happen. Thank you for reading. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2011 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Phone Call
OMG I can't believe you stopped there lol,wow I hope she is ok ,I hope that he tells her who he is and they can be together,cant wait for the next update :)
Author's Response:
I'm sorry I just couldn't pass up the ending on this one. LOL. I am glad that you enjoyed it though.
Date: Feb 02, 2011 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 6 - All Good Things Must Come To An End
Gurrlll jheze please post the next part! This is fucking amazinggg!!!!!!! so amazing!! please next part!!! x
Author's Response:
LOL...wow I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2011 02:57 am Title: Chapter 6 - All Good Things Must Come To An End
Omg what's going to happen next? Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. More to come soon. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2011 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1 - Once in a Lifetime Opportunity - This Is It
Correction - that was supposed to be FIVE STAR RATING :)
Author's Response:
LOL...thank you!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2011 04:39 am Title: Chapter 6 - All Good Things Must Come To An End
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Everything was going soo perfectly i liked how everything was gong, i mean i wasnt mad that Michael was doing this, e needed to so something like this so he could see her true colors...and i was going great..Damn i was soo into it..Wow it was great..and yea at first i thought it was Michael's friend after you mentioned what he was wearing GOT IT lol i knew who it was and the way he talked yea that was a go for me..Damn this chapter was AMAZING..it had so much emotion into it..i really felt what was happening..Why would she be mad at him?? he didnt do nothing bad..Okay he lied but it was to really get to know her since he couldnt trust people..I dont think she should take it out on him..The end took a turn on me, idk what happened there.. WOW i have NO idea whats next.. AMAZING JOB!!!
Author's Response:
Everything was going great. There moments together were very sweet and they both really, really liked each other. Michael had good reasons for doing what he did. However, Alissa doesn't see that. All she saw was the lying, and the deception. She felt as though he didn't trust her enough to be himself. The thing is that he was so worried about her being someone other than who she is and yet that's exactly what he did to her. He pretended to be someone else to get close to her. He was the very thing that he feared she would be.
Alissa's car accident wasn't pretty. We will find out just how bad, or not so bad it was in the next chapter.
Thank you for reading. I'm glad that you are so into it. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Once in a Lifetime Opportunity - This Is It
I'm in suspense until the next chapter!!! Awesome job writing :))
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm very happy that you liked it. I will try not to let you sit in suspense too long. ;)
Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 6 - All Good Things Must Come To An End
this is great!! i need to know what happens next. I always had a feeling Chris was Michael
Author's Response:
Thank you! Good feeling about Chris. More to come soon. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Once in a Lifetime Opportunity - This Is It
Alissa found out the truth, and became angry .... And now with this accident? I hope nothing bad happened to her.
Gret update, as always.
Hugs
Sandra
Author's Response:
Thank you Sandra. Hugs to you.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 03:14 am Title: Chapter 6 - All Good Things Must Come To An End
Bit ups. I commented at mj.com. Keep it coming sis.
Author's Response:
Thanks girl. More coming soon. :)