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Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2017 01:20 am Title: Chapter 34

Michael better gets that straight. He loves Sara and should Jessicacin her place, right? It is disturbing to watch Michael and Sara arguing. It should not be that way. Please make it go away.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2015 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good beginning!

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 34

this girl is two seconds from being introduced to my lovely friend the bitch-slap.

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 05:52 am Title: Chapter 21

Damn it's about time they did the oral deed. I wondering when they do the real deed lol. Aww they so in love.

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Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 05:42 am Title: Chapter 20

Aww i wanted to cry. Thats so touching. They loved each other finally. :D

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Date: Dec 16, 2012 05:12 am Title: Chapter 19

I guess when he said i love u it took her by surprise.

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Date: Dec 16, 2012 04:37 am Title: Chapter 18

Aww another beautiful moment. Who writes the song? Michael seems not to get enough of her.

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 04:08 am Title: Chapter 17

I guess she ain't use to be affectionate or be loved cause she dizzy. It's aftereffect right? Or being in love has that affect.

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 12:50 am Title: Chapter 16

Im glad that she ain't afraid anymore and enjoyed being in his presence.

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Date: Dec 16, 2012 12:38 am Title: Chapter 15

Now that is funny first they fight and now they are kissing. I knew they couldn't resist each other.

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 12:25 am Title: Chapter 14

Michael and sara need to stop acting cold and talk about it like adults. She fails to see true love infront of her and she needs to go find him to make it right plus i agree with Jenny and alex.they right about it.

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 12:12 am Title: Chapter 13

Why she said it's an mistake? She should go with the flow and take an risk when it comes to love even tho it hurts for her.

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2012 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aww that is an beautiful moment when they held each other and kissed finally. It's just an beautiful moment when they talk about love and im glad they experience it. :)

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2012 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 11

Jessica is an moment ruiner. She likes Michael and i can tell by the way she talks. I was hoping Michael was going to kiss sara. I guess the moment wasn't right.

Reviewer: meggie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2012 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aww she fell in love with him. I wonder if he feel the same way that she does.

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