Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2013 08:30 am Title: Assembly

love it

Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2013 09:44 pm Title: Introductions

Nice class intro. I read that in little kid voices too lol don't judge me. But I was done at the girl talking about her legs was hurting and then ole boy going back tryna play her like that. Mr. Matthews is about to have a time on his hands. And I feel like that Ronesha chick is gonna be the worst. She sounded so ghetto lol. I was done at Leila thinking that Valerie called her a hippo too. smh Anyway, I like Michael's friendship with Marcus. Can't wait for the next update. Don't make us wait so long this time. :p

Author's Response:

lmao twinning I had no choice but to type them in kid's voices. that's part of the reason the chapter worked so well :) thanks for reading! <3 I'll try not to take so long to update xD

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2013 07:09 pm Title: Homeroom

Did you mean Eddie as in..Eddie Murphy?!

Hope you did! I love that guy so much (not in that way though, lol.)

I really cannot wait to see what happens.

PS: You portray your characters in your story really well.

 

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2013 06:59 pm Title: New Beginnings

Cute haha :)

I love how this family runs!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2012 11:27 am Title: Homeroom

Alright! This was very detailed. I like how Mike has new buddies already. He should have known that he was going to make friends. Danny and Eddie seem like clowns. I'm skeptical about this Terrance dude. Anyway, great chapter twin. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Myah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2012 10:14 pm Title: New Beginnings

XD Girl, you got a candy stash goin' for Michael! ;D Keep it up! <33 I really love the story so far. You are very vivid in detail and descriptive- a true author. In my opinion a key part of any good story is attention to details and really pulling the reader in by describing 'everything'- the way you described the school's appearance, right down to the sights and sounds is perfect. It really puts me in the story like I'm right there with Mikey and Marlon! XD I'm proud of you- I sincerely believe you have a gift for writing. Continue to share with us readers this gift God has given you Lenetta- you are talented and your stories are wonderful <33 Can't wait for Chapter 3 on Michael's first day of class! :D Much Love and hugs XXXXXXX _ya girl- you know who i am lols XD Maleah :P

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2012 11:04 am Title: Assembly

This was a really great chapter! Again, I absoultely LOVE the details. Marlon had me cutting up. That boy is a trip. And of course Mike would be the one to cheer up after Marlon mentioned a candy stash lol Can't wait for the next update.