Reviewer: mranda213 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2012 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

great

 

Reviewer: HIS Darling Dear Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2011 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1

;D amazing, simply breathtaking!

Reviewer: DAngERouS2200 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2010 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sad at the end when he had to leave. Wonderful story.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2010 04:33 am Title: Chapter 1

WOW One of the BEST short story i read.. amazing very well put together, it had soo many emotions for a short story like no other..SOOO much passion and true love..You could tell they really loved each other and how much they missed each other..I love the taste of it, how that it wasnt only for sex and cuz they where 'horny/needy'..a lot of sex did happen, yes and it was amazing all the different scenarios that it was in, but the mixed between passion, love and sex there was more going into it.. I don't know if ya get what i mean.. Great Job!!! Love IT!!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, it means alot :) I do understand what you mean :)

Thanks again :) xxx

Reviewer: tiaclari Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2010 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dang this short had pretty much every emotion i could think of.

the ending was sad, but everything else

was WHOA!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Haha yeah.. I wanted it to be a bit more than just sex.. :L

Glad you enjoyed it hun :) xx