[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2012 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg, I feel sorry for her....
Author's Response:
i do too. way to much on her plate. thanks your review
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2012 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is interesting!
Author's Response:
Thanks again :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2012 11:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Really this keeps getting better and better. But her moma needs to stop foreal and i see some real tension going on between emily and michael there tensions are stong i bet he does likes her to but cant admit it guys smh. please update whenever you can thanks.
Author's Response:
I know her mother is a kind of crazy. and yeah michael and emily are like peanut butter and jelly lolz thanks for your review <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2012 05:03 am Title: Chapter 3
this is off the chain! i can't wait for the next chapter :D!
Author's Response:
Thank you more is coming soon. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2012 03:48 am Title: Chapter 3
WOW Emily's mom is phsyco jeez why would anyone shake someone like that after they got iinto a fight. Well im glad Emily will spend some much needed time with her aunt she needs it and needs to get away from her mom. I really think Michael cares for Emily but doesnt really know how to show her or tell her. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
If physco is the best word to describe to her mother she's way beyond at times.
emily has a good relationship with her aunt forsure.
michael just needs to learn how to comunicaite better with her and your right he i believe he does he just being a stubborn.
And thank you :) more will come. <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2012 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is so well written...The plot is very interesting and intrigued. I like that!
There's something about Michael and Eva...especially Michael toward Eva. I think he has something especial...seem he's hiding something...
The sexual tension is...ohhhh...great!They're falling in love for each other but they're very stubborn!
Please...update asap!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Yes Michael and Emily does have a thing for each other but denials they choose instead. i agree this maybe my most intresting story out my other's. i actually like this one my self lolz and thanks so much for your review. More is coming <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2012 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg! this story! pls update as soon as you can.
Author's Response:
I will be updating this alot :) and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2012 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this story!Please keep going!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review :) im glad your enjoying this. more will come soon <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2012 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW this is a powerful story. This reminds me of a movie called Carrie and it was based off the book written by Stephen King and the movie came out in 1976. Its about a girl who has telekinesis and its a really scary movie. It has a really yong John Travoltia in it. You can read more about the movie on wikipedia but if you dont want to ruin the ending then i suggest you should watch the original not the remake of the movie. You can find it on dvd almost anywhere but if you cant find it you can watch it on netflix's if you have it but i suggest that you never watch it when its night time. For me i dislike the movie when i 1st saw it it scared the crap out of me lol. But this is a great story i really enjoyed it. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
Thanks soo much for liking this story this means a lot to me. :D and yes this sort of based off of carrie it has the influnces from it with it's own twists. Emily has a bit more confidence then carrie but don't let it fool you though deep down inside she is hurting a lot. I saw all the carrie movies but must I say the orginal carrie was the best. I also got some influences from other superneral movies and shows, and kind of combined it all in one. i like alot of supernateral stuff. and yeah michael may make fun of her sometimes but deep down he has a thing for her of course he feels something different about her but mostly whenever he's around his friends he's rude to her but if they are ever alone he'll change a bit. yes and more to come soon i got so many idea's and plans for this story :D thnks for your rate and review <3