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Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2012 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

your right this chapter was a little brutal i cant stand her mother she put per her in hot water omg! but i thought it was funny emily told kyla to throw her self in the trash can lmao that was funny. it's like she pushed in her there she's basically calling her kyla trash. and michael he is just to much and steve he's crazy sometimes. but i like him too. please updat more when you can. :)



Author's Response:

Yes the was funny too lolz i was laughing when i wrote that part :P i know her mother can be a true witch sometimes bah.. but im glad your enjoying and thank you dear. :)

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2012 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow, her powers are gettin stronger; omg btw I loved her aunt. ^_^ Atleast she now has some comfort and hapiness, aside from when shes with Steve ahah. :P ugh Michaels on-off behaviour is starting to annoy me. Emily should totally just trick him with her powers; he can't be wrapping his arms around her one minute then saying 'you're a weirdo' the next, lol. Gr8 chapter :))

Author's Response:

yes her aunt is is the best :D Michael confuses his own self loolz that would be nice if she tricks him with him with her powers if he ever pisses her off badly hahaha. thanks so much girl! :) lots of love to you <3

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2012 09:18 am Title: Chapter 3

Wowww! What an eventful chapter!
Ok, first off... I have a feeling Michael knows more than he is letting on. The way he knew she was tryna read his mind, and then put the shades on. Its like he already knew what she was...? Hmm, interesting!
Next- omg Im sorry but her mum is crazy!! D: I was shcoked when she slapped her.
I was so happy to read that her aunt is coming back! :)) thats just who she needs right now... This was awe-summ!! I will read the next chapter soon :)) x

Author's Response:

Michael is a smart even if he comes off as an ass sometimes. i think her mom needs the prayers instead lolz thanks so much! <3

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2012 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Sorry girl I just realised on my review for Chapter 1 I called Emily 'Alex' -_- I'm so sorry! I dont even know why I made that mistake :S Its probably because I havent ate for ages because I'm fasting lool anyways Imma read chapter 3 now. :D

Author's Response:

awwww it's ok i understand. i mess up when i don't have food in my system either i know the feeling. <3

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2012 06:07 am Title: Chapter 2

Omg; Michael is so random! I wonder if he know more than he lets on... He should start acting properly with her. The part where it was raining was sweet!!
AH those bullies! :'( That was horribleeeee.... I wanted her to work her mystic magic and beat their asses! :S
This is real good, moving on to the next chapter. :)) xx

Author's Response:

0oh yes soon she will go banana's with her powers soon u can count on that! and those bullies wait tilm they get theres ;) i love thaat moment in the rain too girl! thanks so much for rating and reviewing means so much! <3 :)

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2012 05:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow!! Emily is a really interesting character; I love the mystery around her! :D
Gosh, Michael was harsh! He's definetly messing with Alexs head lool I'm eager to read what will happen!
Awesome 1st chapter! Xx

Author's Response:

She's very intresting that's why michael is so intrigued by her. he can be a real ass and rude sometimes lolz thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2012 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

WOW this was a really great chapter. I cant believe Ema can now heal and levatate. And i cant believe she kicked someones ass lol damn she can really fight. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

I Will always stay updated on this and yes to many shocking surprises. lolz thanks so much! :D 1LOVE

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2012 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 5

Whoa that was mind blowing I love these type of different stories Please keep going....

thank you



Author's Response:

Thanks, and more is coming. :)

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2012 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 4

Love it!



Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: sugacream2525 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2012 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh sh**t! this chapter is moving on up :P gurlfriend not playing. lol matter of fact this story is moving on up. i can't wait to read more. Is Michael's sister there?? that's Gotta be her LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for enjoying and you'll be in for many surprises through out this story. yep toya is there. lolz

Reviewer: sheba93 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2012 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

Toya is Mike's sister, ain't she?



Author's Response:

YEP mike's sister lolz

Reviewer: sugacream2525 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2012 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4

very good chapter i loved it! But damn man michael has to many mood sweings with emily no wonder she don't know how to react around him. update asap haha thanks



Author's Response:

I know he sure does lolz thanks for your review!

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2012 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Damn now i know i wouldnt want to piss off Emily lol. But this was a nice chaper im happy that Emily was able to hang out with her aunt. And i hope when Emily goes to the party if she does she doesnt get picked on and then her powers will bust out when her bloob boils. Whenever you get a chance can you update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

OMG yes girl i hope they don't drive her to that point either lolz thanks so much for your support and more to come too. <3

Reviewer: sheba93 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2012 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

You know, this is kinda good...don't understand why there aren't more reviews. It's different and I like it. Maybe, if it were just a little more clear in the typing, it would be perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review this.

And i write from my phone because my laptop is so laggy and slow so that's why some of my typing could be hard to undertand sometimes but i will try to fix my errors soon. And there's alot of good stories on here that doesn't get tons of review's like they deserve. i still like to write rather i get review's or not i try not base my writing on that. it does feel good tho to get review im not even gonna lie lolz but yeah thanks for giving my story a chance. :)

 

Reviewer: sheba93 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2012 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

Uh oh, Michael knows...something! lol



Author's Response:

yeah he's good at observing lolz

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