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Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2012 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 29

I'm happy you did double chapter's. I'm so glad Michael can help her out anyway he can. That's my favorite couple. They strong through everything I'm so glad Emily told him about her issue. I can't wait for more. Update soon when you can.

Thank you

Author's Response:

yes they are great for eachother to agree! im glad she did also. and thanks so much more will come soon so stay tuned girl!

lolz :)

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2012 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 28

I love how she's keepin it real with him and not holding back that equals a healthy relationship. She should also tell him about the issue she's having with her anger. Can't wait for more update when you can.

Thank you

Author's Response:

i agree with you to i like how she's keepin it real with him every couple should be straight up with eachother tho. thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2012 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 28

great chapter. im glad she told him. but she also needs to tell him about the cutting as well. she should find another way to control her anger other than harming herself. please update tonight. i can't wait until tomorrow, thats too long of a wait lol. also please update breath again. i miss that story.



Author's Response:

Im glad she finally told him to it was about time girl. oh i most definitley have update that i had a major writer's block with that story but my cretive juices are coming back again lolz  i will surely add the rest of this to night no problem girl. thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 27 Future Plotting and Scheming.

This story is so good girl! It maybe a fantasy and all with powers and stuff like that but I like how you add the realites of life in this at the sametime it makes it seem more realistic sounding.
Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Aww thanks alot i try to make it make it as realistic as possible. :) im glad you enjoying. thanks for your review

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 27 Future Plotting and Scheming.

These girls don't know what their getting themselves into and if I was Kimberly I would be quick on my feet to tell Emily and Michael about their plan.. Can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

i most definitley agree with you on that they don't know what there getting there selves into. there very cluless about emily. little do they know about her. your right kim does need to act quick on this. Thank you for enjoying. :)

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 27 Future Plotting and Scheming.

yeah she needs to tell michael. oh my gosh this is getting good. please update quick, fast, and in a hurry.



Author's Response:

yeah she needs to hurry on up and just tell him already i agree. thank you girl! more is definitley coming to :)

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2012 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 27 Future Plotting and Scheming.

Yo something wrong with all of them. I hope Michael and Emily finds out soon before they do that to her. That's just horrible of them to do that and those girls pathetic and poor Kimberly to. Omg! I can't believe Mason hit her he's pathetic to. I hope she tells Michael what he did to her. And she shouldn't be cutting herself either. Damn she better open up more to him. I hope you update soon. Thank you



Author's Response:

i know i hope to. it is wrong of what there trying to do to her. mason is wrong to. and thank you more is coming :)

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 26

Ohhh god...this chapter was so intense...poor Emily...
Michael crying for Emily was so touching and beautiful...and ooohhh gosh...the sexual tension...WOW!!|o|


ps:Emily...please...

JUST FORGET MASON!!!!

Thank u!

Author's Response:

oh yes it definitley touched michael that was a beautiful moment the way how he cried for her. and yeah the sexual tension is there loolz there getting this close loolz im with you on that too forget mason. thank you for enjoying this i apreciate it. :)

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 26

that was horrible how her dad died. and for her mom to blame her for it is down right terrible. her mom is just crazy. Emily watched her dad die and now she has to get beaten and put down? that terrible. im glad she finally found her happiness with Michael. she will be happier. him and steve are her main men in her life. i hope she takes mason out of the equation. all he wants is one thing. i hope she realizes that before its too late. bravo on this chapter hun. you did a damn good job. you never fail to amaze me.



Author's Response:

i agree with you girl amen to that! she needs to get rid of mason already and your right michael and steve is the best men in her life they treat so good. and her mom is seriously nuts after she lost her husband she lost her head. thank you so much girl! i really apreciate this a lot. im so happy you really enjoy this <3 :)

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 26

Ugh :/ depressing and shocking...
That's so messed up how could her own mom blame her for that? Wtf? Her story really touched Michael I see I hope she be ok though that's tough righ there and deep.
Loved the chapter can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: My bad about the depressing stuff. But Ema's life just didn't come easy. Yeah Michael really reached out to her that was sweet of him too! I almost got sad for writing this chapter lolz Thank you for enjoying girl! More to come :)

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 26

Awe poor Emily it must to see her own father die in front of her, and her mom blame her for it rough. great update can't wait for the next one :)



Author's Response: I knw.. she suffers to much. Thanks for enjoying and more to come! :)

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2012 06:42 am Title: Chapter 25

I want to say few things...

You has been one of the best writers from this forum. You're very creative and talented.
I've read so many MJ's fics and believe me...I can say if it is GOOD or not good...and your story is not good...your story is EXCELLENT!

Thank you for sharing this with us!Thank you!!

Dri

Author's Response:

Aww thank you very much :) that means a lot. and your welome to im glad to share with yall to. <3

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2012 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 25

oh and thank you for the shout out. i already told you i think you are a great writer. your stories seem to pull me in. this one just caught my eye and now im hooked. i get excited when i see that you've updated. don't ever think less of yourself. when you have people begging you to update, then you know you have talent. keep up the good work girlie. 



Author's Response: Aww thank you for the encouragment girl! I'll try harder not to think that way anymore. I think I'm progressing better now. I always look back on my very first story love&life and I'm like wow I did get better. I was all over the place with that story loolz And thanks again so much for the support girl! :) <3

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2012 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh I forgot to say thanks for the shoutout, trust me I love this story a lot, i had to add it to my favs :)



Author's Response: Your welcome and thank you too :) I apreciate this a lot. <3

Reviewer: sugacream2525 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2012 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 25

I had to catch up again with your chapters and wow...there off the hook! So many problems to. That was big of Michael to be there for her like that instead of going on about Mason. Michael mademe mad bac in the earlier chapters though but now he is so sweet and loving with Emily. Michael should understand her pain if he went through something with his pops to. Anyways your welcome :) keep it up!



Author's Response: Lolz it's ok and yeah a lot has gone on. I knw Michael was a little bad but he's coming a long way now it's that Emily effect lolz I'm sure he will understand her. He has to if he figured he could relate to her. Thanks so much! <3

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