[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2012 02:08 am Title: Chapter 33
WOW i cant believe Michael and Emily made love yay. Im happy Michael was Emily's first and im also happy Michael finaly gave the ring to Emily. Ok i can understand hunny buns,ice cream,chips and gummy worms when anyone has the munchies but why in the name of jesus would anyone want to eat banana's thats weard just saying cuz some of my friends somke and they tell me what they eat. And im glad Kim finaly told Emily what is going to happen to her and Emily told Michael. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
I know she got some lovin and extra plus with the ring. im glad kim hurried up told emily i totally agree on that! loolz that was randome tha banana's she tried to mix fruit with junk food which is impossible. i know ppl that eat the hunny,buns,worms,chips,cheese doodles,sometimes big mac's lolz thanks girl! :) <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2012 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 33
im glad he didn't get mad at her. lol i knew she would make something levitate. i wonder what mike is gonna do to those girls. he looks like he means business. as always...this couple is so cute. they just make you wanna blush. keep it up girl. this story is getting alot of reviews. and it's soooo worth it, cause this story is the shiznit.(Yep im bringin that word back) lol update soon.
Author's Response:
im glad he didn't get mad at her either he better not lolz with emily u neva know what she'll do xD agree wth you there love is so unique I blush at it to no lie michael is a smart guy I'm sure he'll pull something off like a smooth criminal ;) I just noticed about the review I wasn't never sure how this story would turn out because I have a none mj version of this story to. I never noticed it would get that much support and feedback for it I'm so thankful for you and everone else 4 supporting this story yall are awesome! :) girl I haven't heard that word in ages loolz the shiznit! I love a lot of old school slangs like the bomb! Lolz and thanks so much! more is definitley coming soon! <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2012 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 32
Weed! Wow Emily is trying out a lot of new things I see lol, I wonder how mike gonna feel about this one? Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
yep ema is branching out now days loolz mike's reactions lolz :D priceless. her mother would freak if she ever knew half the things emily did. thanks girl! :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2012 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 31
Man she's lucky as hell, she got engaged and got some lovin' from her boo. # Team Emily!
Author's Response:
agreed she is soo lucky to have a man like that and the extra loving was a plus ;) I'm with u on that too! go team #emily
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2012 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 32
Whoa how did Kim even get access to weed Ema is really trying a lot of new things now? Lol I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
yeah she sure is loolz i guess she been cooped up with church and her crazy mother for so long that she may needed new expirence even tho mike puts the icing on the cake 4 her. lolz
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2012 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 32
aw hell no XD now she gettin high? she gonna make the whole neighborhood levitate lol or she is gonna make the term 'getting high' a literal statement. she gonna be floating back to michael. they gonna think she a real live powerpuff girl lol.
Author's Response: LMAO!!!! You got me dying right now. Powerpuff girl. Buahahahahaaha that would be funny to see that whole neighborhood do that oh gosh that's high alright. I can't stop laughing at this. Girl u got me crying overhere! XD!
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2012 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 31
That ish was hot! Lol lol Michael put it on on Emily damn that's how ya get down. :P j/K but yeah cool chapter can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
yep he did put that lovin on her and woo i was so jealous too lolz yeah i guess that's how it goes then, and thanks :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2012 06:17 am Title: Chapter 31
thats what im talkin about Emily, you go girl lol. she engaged to Michael jackson, she got powers, and now she just got some lovin from him.......yep im jealous. great chapter. that was hot.
Author's Response:
ikr im jealous of her everytime i write a chapter to this lolz and ohh girl yes michael put that lovin on her. and thanks girl! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2012 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 31
Awesome chapters I'm glad Michael beat Mason's ass that's what he gets for messing with Michael's girl. He's the man lol and Michael is always there for her to. And I loved this chapter to and whoa they got there freak on and real good to damn! Lol girl I can't wait for more.
Thank you
Author's Response:
im glad he beat his ass too girl! lolz yeah michael and ema been really enjoying each other ;) and thank you :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2012 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 30
Aww im glad Michael was their for Emily after the comotion she caused. Im also glad that Emily is going to have a break from her mom and who know Michael and Emily might make love during thoes 2 and a half weeks that her mom is not their. And i hope Michael does not get in trouble for beating Mason's ass. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
im glad he was there for her too and yes amen she deserves a break from her mom. u never know what will happen to Michael and ema on the lovemaking part at the rate there going now it could happen anytime. more to come! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2012 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 30
wow great update...I am so glad that Michael found her I hope she will be ok He is so sweet ...they so belong together...cant wait for more :)
Author's Response:
im glad he found her too and yeah he so sweet with her. i hope she'll be ok to and yes they are great together i agree 100%. more is coming. :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2012 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 30
AWWWW you go michael. now thats how you show them who's bad. im proud of him lol. and as for emily having those thoughts about michael.......i would have them to lol dude is sex on legs. im surprised she hasn't jumped his bones yet. but i guess its better to wait (even though i wouldn't) lol. great chapter hun. im really jealous of emily right now. oh and as for mason......YOU GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!!!!!lol please update soon.
Author's Response:
yeah ikr mason got knocked the fuckout!! lmao! ema should jump michael's bone's already that would be hot girl! loolz im so jealous of her too. im proud our boy mike to he did his thing! and more to come! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2012 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 29
Awww this was such a sweet chapter. Michael is such a nice and caring person. I cant believe Mason hurt Emily like that and Michael has every right to be mad. Im hopeing Michael gives Emily the ring soon they are ment to be together forever. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: I knw I couldn't believe mason did to her to and I so much agree he does have a right to be mad he just can't let it slide and yes I can't wait for the ring moment either.I wish for them to stay together forever too. And thank you! More to come soon :) <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2012 11:54 am Title: Chapter 29
Hello New Reader to your story...and I must say I love it...Can't wait to see what happens next this awesome :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much I'm glad u really like this I apreciate that to :) more is coming soon.
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2012 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 29
awww, this couple is too cute. this chapter was so sweet..........but michael should still beat mason's ass. lol don't nobody mess with Michael jackson. he gotta show mason WHO'S BAD! lol
Author's Response:
i agree girl! he should kick mason's ass lolz they are so cute i get jealous sometimes at there moments lolz michael is bad without a shadow of doubt ;) lolz