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Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2012 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 45 Give into me.

Oh no where is there relationship heading? I don't want them to breakup over dumb star and mason. I have a bad feeling michael and emily may end up hurting eachother in the long run. They have to be strong come on you two! I'm routing for them Continue soon

Author's Response: It doesn't matter they could go from bad to worse some how and still stick together some kind of way there kind of love will never fade no matter how tamper's with them I believe they could get through everything. Yeah in a way they are hurting eachother I agree but Emily has been hurt enough in her life she really don't need this as for Michael he had his little fair shares of pain in his life also but not as bad as Ema so he needs to cut her some slack on that. & thank! :)

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2012 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 45 Give into me.

Damn Michael you really need to stop hanging out with Star. He hurt Emily just liked i feared and who knows what will happen the next time Emily is hurt from Michael. It broke my heart to see Emily hurt she doesnt need all of that the only thing she needs is Love. I hope Star leaves the picture really soon cuz i dont like her. But im happy Michael & Emily Graduates next year which is my Grad year yeah C/O 2013. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

He does need to stop hanging with star but smh he is just so clueless yeah it broke my heart to see her getting hurt like that it's not fair to her either. Agreed she still needs love no matter and aww congrats to all classes of 2013!!! :) I'm proud of you and I hope all your dreams comes true to I wish you the best. I remember being the class of 2004 so I know the feeling girl! & thanks! <3

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2012 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 45 Give into me.

Very long chapter with full of drama!! I loved it lol Her cousin is sooo funny for calling star Ru-Paul :P Haha I'm glad Raynna disturbed them. Michael and Emily just has a complicaited relationship.

Ema can't be to easy on Michael though but it's like he has some type of control in a way when you think about it. but damn he so sexy how can ya resist that man? Lol I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I knw I was laughing at the raynna part she is to funny and I was glad she did that once she saw them. Lolz maybe a little control but maybe or maybe not they could work on that. Yeah there relationship is complicaited smh I guess it's just understanding both sides though. Amen 2 that he is fine lolz

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2012 05:58 am Title: Chapter 44

bad move mike. i thinks its unfair how, he knows star has a crush on him but he is going to be friends with her anyway, but when emily was friends with mason, all hell broke lose. i know something is gonna happen. i can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Very bad move of him wtf is he thinking?? What gets to me is he still wants to be her friend anyway even when she has the crush on him idk michael smh that's so true when ema and mason was friends he hated it so he should understand emily's point of and you gave me an idea too :) lolz &Thanks!

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2012 12:47 am Title: Chapter 44

Wow does michael like have any idea what the he's doing?

He's basically leading star on with out even knowing which lead to trouble and what if emily finds out?

And btw love the new characters, and the way you describe and detail them good job :) can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I dnt think he has no idea :/ he knows she has a crush in and all but I'm afraid he just don't know her intentions. Yeah in a way he's leading star on without knowing he makes it seems as if he does like her gosh michael better wake up soon. Emily would probably flip. Thanks a lot :)

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 44

I like Raynna she seem unique and crazy she's very out going to I see. Lol oh no I hope Michael's and Emily's relationship doesn't go downhill because of Star she is big trouble and I can smell it to. I hope Michael doesn't forget and breaks Emily's heart he better not. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Loolz raynna is just to hilarious whenever someone mentions her I. star to laugh & yeah I hope star doesn't mess there relationship up either and your right michael shouldn't 4get cause emily doesn't deserve 2 get her heart broken either. & thanks!

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 44

Okay.


Michael has a "crush" on this girl.

Period.


Emily...go and watch over you man!

Author's Response: I knw smh it seems as if he has an unknown crush on her without even knowing star is a master manipulater now. I totally agree emily better get her man in check. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 44

Oh my god I love Emily cousin she is too funny, she seems cool. Mike should just tell Emily where he's going, how would he feel if Emily did him like that. And star better. Ot try anything crazy cause it sure would cause war world 3 lol. Can't wait for more XD



Author's Response: I love her cousin too she's wild lolz I agree he should of told her smh but idk when he gets around star he loses his brain cells a bit nope he wouldn't like it if Ema did that to him. Heck yeah if she starts something it would cause world war 3 loolz thank girl! More is coming soon :)

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 44

I have a bad feeling that Star is going to try something with Michael. And in a way Star is hurting Emily by talking to Michael too much just saying, sorry if i didnt make sense. But i hope Emily doesnt get hurt to a point where her powers get out of controll. I like Raynne she reminds me of some of my crazy friends lol. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I don't want her 2 get hurt either I can't believe how clueless michael is about star's intentions. Yes ema's poswers can go crazy if she gets hurt to the point sadly.. raynn is cool she adds the spice,&humor lolz thanks more to come :) <3

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 43

I hope Emily doesn't go off on Michael just yet cause she might think that he has something going on with Star. I can't believe Michael is about to get hiself caught up without knowing :/ good chap I can't wait for part 2 now.

Author's Response: Yeah u never knw how emily could get at times depends how angry or upsets she gets anything is bound to happen around her but as long as michael is around he won't allow her to go to far. He should really becareful around sneaky star because she has many capabilites under her sleevs. &thanks more is coming :)

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 43

Oh shit i hope Emily doesnt go a wall on Star. And i dont like how Star is trying to get Michael and Masion trying to get Emily i just dont like this evil plan. It doesnt feel right but im happy that Michael and Emily survived 2 months together and i hope their will be many more months to come.Oh i forgot to say this in the last chapter wow Emily's mom is crazy i cant believe she threw hot tea in Emily's face thats inhuman and mean. And in a way im glad Michael didnt do anything because if he did he would of killed or hurt her mom. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: I knw me 2 I hope they always be together :) I hope not either since she has trouble controling her anger at times & yeah it horrible what mason and star is doing just couse they can't get what they want. Her mother is just insane and horrible,& needs to learn that she is not possessed but she don't wanna understand her own child that's a shame to. Oh gosh I'm glad to michael would have done something bad to her mom I could only imagine because he was very pissed. & thanks more is coming <3

Reviewer: sugacream2525 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 43

Oh no! Damn clif

Author's Response: I knw my bad... lolz more tomorrw.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2012 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 42

Oh shit. I hope Emily and Michael will get through this as a couple still. I dont like where this is going. Damn you Mason and Star. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: Yeah I know I hope they make it through too and star and mason is just no good and to bad they don't know what's gonna happen. & thanks More is coming <3

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2012 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 42

Her mother is insane and Why can't people just leave the two love birds alone? I can't wait for the next chaper :)

Author's Response: Yeah she's very insane & your right ppl do need 2 leave them alone I hope they do leave them alone oneday. & thanks 4 your review apple :)

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2012 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 42

I love these frequent updates I'm glad ema is trying to get better though. your right it is gonna get crazy damn! Mason and Star now? Oh sh**t. Please update really soon can't wait thank you.

Author's Response: Ikr it is crazy yes mason+star sorry 2 say. & thanks! More to come!

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