[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 05:34 am Title: Chapter 25
She has really gone through a lot in her life. Idkw she was not taken away from her bitch of a mother. Its so comforting for her to know that Mike will always be there and love her no matter what. And she is ready to open up to him about everything XD
Author's Response:
indeed she has endured so much pain what shame...and her mother doesn't help one bit she suppose to be her best friend. i love michael is sweet towards her to she deserves so much love from him. & it's about time she opens up 2 him :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 05:27 am Title: Chapter 15
Michael has idiots for friends lmao but awwwe finally Michael stood up for her! So happy! :3
This is brilliant, on to the next chapter xD , <33
Author's Response:
His friends are just so dumb and immature lolz mike put them in there place :D &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 05:15 am Title: Chapter 24
She should have told told him. Ik that I kept saying that. But its true. I wonder where they stand now too. And Tatiana is a hater. She just mad cuz he don't want her XD
Author's Response:
i agree she should..that's why good 2 never hold things back hope she learns her lesson from this. bah tat will never mike :P xD
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 04:45 am Title: Chapter 14
LOL The way coach Mitchelle handled Kyla XD The bitch deserved it haha.
Great chapterr! ^_^
Author's Response: Ikr couch don't play she handled that Bitch! Lmao! &Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 04:37 am Title: Chapter 23
I knew that she should have told him! Now if somethin pops off it will be all of her fault.
Author's Response:
ikr that's what heppens whenever a person takes to long smh bah
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 04:32 am Title: Chapter 13
HAI Falisha :D Finally imma read some chapters now XD YAY :3
OMG did she really just stab Chantel!? Damn, Emily dont play! Lmao.
Omg daaaamn, her mother... Ugh, I think SHE'S the one whose possessed. I like how calm and sweet Michael was during his time at her house. Its like he was understanding which is sweet :')
Ahh she just lied to him, she clearly likes him which is the only reason she did it ahah. Mason needs to get out of the picture, Ema and MJ are starting to get a strong connection! , <3
Author's Response:
oh yeah she really loolz ema couldn't hold it anymore :P yeah he mom seems to be the possessed on instead she dnt knw what she doing. idk how michael is staying so calm like this &yeah he soo sweet :) yes mason does need to get his ass erased out now. yes im loving there connection too <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 04:30 am Title: Chapter 22
I agree w/Janet and Toya. I still think that Emily should tell Mike about Mason before its too. Loved the way that you added Tatiana and Brooke to the story. O_O is he gonna propose? XD
Author's Response: Yeah she better yo! Tat&brook totally fits this story lolz but only for michael not wanting them XD &yeah mikey could be full of surprises ;)
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 03:47 am Title: Chapter 21
Her mother is a fucking psycho lol I can't believe that she slapped Emily right in front of Michael. I'm surprised that he didn't go off on her ass lol Aww..he was so sweet for comforting her like that. Something is gonna happen to her mother. I can sense it XD
Author's Response: Hell yeah she loolz idk her mother is the one that needs help smh..some nerves she has 2 slap her own daughter in front of her bf wtf? Right Ikr he really does try his best with ema and oh yes if he mom don't watch out ema may give her the scare one day ;)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 20
Lol! Can I please slap her mom? Ugh! She is such a bitch! Not to mention crazy at that lol! I hope that Mason won't try to ruin her relationship w/ Michael. But I have a feeling that he will try. Aww... they said that they loved each other. I'm really hooked on this story and I don't want to stop reading it. But I'm getting sleepy now and I will read some more tomorrow XD
Author's Response:
You should slap her lmao! She goes to church wow ikw that makes her a hypocrite smh the way she treats her child. Yess:) they finally love eachother and build up enough confidence to say it...& oh boy mason could be trouble. I'm so frecking glad you liked this story it makes me so happy :D I wasn't expecting this <3 Thank you very much 4 supporting this I appreciate every support anyone gives my stories. Sleep tight & I hope you enjoy the rest. Much love!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 19
LMAO! the food fight was too funny! But I think that she should talk to her bf about Mason XD
Author's Response:
i knw that's my favorite part of this chapter loolz she should talk to mike about mason before things goes out of hand. &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 50
Wow man everything is out now. I think Michael should act on this quick. Erase Star's dumbass and then Mason. And wow now Raynna knows what's up with her cousin? She should of lashed out. But maybe it was just to much to take it. I wonder how Raynna will get along with Sandra now?
And Michael better think smart now so can earn Emily's trust again. I'm glad she's stay with him though... that's what's up! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Ikr finally everything is out in the open. All they gotta do is work around it now&yes hopfully mason&star will be iliminated soon. I think raynna was just trying to be calm but I believe nextime she'll lash out if she witnesses something from sandra. Oh heck she needs to be away from her mother after what just happened emily seems content at michaels house. &yeah michael may earn emily's trust again little by little if he just leave star alone she is trouble smh. &Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 18
I almost cried when she was saying that she was a mistake. She was never meant to be. That part was so sad. But Michael comforted her and took her to his place. Katherine, reebie, Toya, and janet practically pushed her towards Mike lol. Yesssssss!!!!! They are finally together *moonwalks* lol XD
Author's Response: It was sad :/ no one should low of them selves like that but with being considerd a freak and having a crazy mother could make u feel that way sometimes. Thank goodness 4 michael being there. Ikr they all routed 4 her to be with mikey :D I was so happy when they finally became a couple. Like u said *moonwalks" I like that lolz
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 17
I agree with Vera. Emily does need to learn to control her power. And I wonder how she would feel if she knew that mike used to torment Emily. Mike and Emily should be together. They are too cute XD
Author's Response: yeah if she can't control them then were all doomed she could destroy a lot from her anger. Wow I wonder what she would think to if she know that michael did pick on before? I agree they r soo cute together :) lolz
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ooo... this story is like Carrie and Firestarter! i love it! XD
Author's Response: Yes it's most definitley like carrie and firestarter those are actually my favorits they were my influnces 4 this. :) I'm glad your enjoying this and thanks again.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh that was so sweet how he just stood up for her ^_^ And his friends are stupid lol. Hmmm..could Mike and Emily be on the path to a relationship? I hope so XD
Author's Response: Yea that was big of mike to be taking up 4 her like that & his friends, I agree there just stupid lolz Hey this could be a new beganing 4 them. ;)