Date: Nov 19, 2012 02:55 am Title: Chapter 62
I also forget to tell you to also take your time.
I understand that your busy and can't always update. Just to let you know ima always be on a look out for an update. But still always take your time I understand. :)
Author's Response: Awww thanks that means a lot 2 me I will still try 2 update this again soon. Thanks again! :) <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2012 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 62
Good things are worked out between the three of them. But Toya being scared was too funny I was laughing at that to. Hahahahaha and her reactions was priceless and let me find out she smokes??? O.o Lol I'm glad this chapter was calm. I always love how you make some chapters so emotional to just fun and loving ones. I can't wait for the next chapter and I'll be ready for what's to come.
Author's Response: Yep it's finally worked out &yeah I always love 2 switch up sometimes 2 emotional or somthing relaxing it depends per chapter tho. Lol & yea toya smokes sometimes just 4 her nerves but I knw still shocking. & thanks girl!
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2012 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 59
She better not believe those girls. She really needs to chill. And Joe please just STFU cuz nobody cares about you. I hope that Toya will not treat Emily weird now. It sucks that Rayanna has to leave. O_O michael is gonna confront Sandra? Oh this is gonna be good XD
Author's Response: Yes she should chill & ikr those girls are jealous lairs -_- they can't have sexy mikey XD. Lolz ikr who cares about joe's 2cents! Hopefully toya will come around soon & get use 2 it. I knw wish rayna could stayed longer but he parents came back from the vacation & she got school but this isn't the end of raynna being around tho..she'll pop again soon :D Yep here comes the moment. And awkardness xD &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2012 03:10 am Title: Chapter 61
Wow i cant believe Michael beat Masson that was crazy. And Sandra i hope she is ok and i guess Michael needs to try again to talk to her so maybe the 2nd time is the charm lol. But i hope the linked dream Emily & Michael are having is not going to happen any time soon. I hope Emily is not in the one that is in the caskit. Congrats on your 291 review only 9 more till you get to 300 lol. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: Ikr michael couldn't help hiself this time & yeah something seems up with sandra just can't put my finger on it yet. Shoot! I hope the second time is a charm lolz she better listen for crying out loud. XD. That's the real scary part...who's in that casket..it better not be emily omg! Michael would lose it 2 if it was here. But no time soon yet that it will be happening. It's strange cause they both have the same visons something that they both see hopfully they tell eachother this 2. I knw he's gonna tell vera first tho. & yes I can't believe I made it that far :D if it wasn't 4 you and everyone that supports this story it would not even be where it's at. I love you guys a lot <3 & thanks!! <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2012 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 61
This chapter made me happy and sad for Emily.
I was thrilled about the brutal beaten Michael gave Mason. Woo!
As for her mother I wouldn't be surprised if she had some sort of health problem. She shouldn't be so cold with the kind of condition she has. She better be careful how she treats her daughter. Looks like she will need Emily in due time. Kudos to Michael though for standing up to Sandra. *Claps*
Ah and the beach sounds relaxing to. Hehe
Author's Response: Yeah mike really gave it 2 him this time. I think this was a bit worse then the last time he beated him. Won't be hearing from anymore ;) xD &ikr sandra will end up needing her daughter one day..wait til ya see. Yep kudos and pats on the back 2 michael 4 telling her like it is. I was happy about that to. *Claps along with you* Loolzz
&yeah they need 2 go 2 the beach and realise some tensions, the beach is best place 4 that. Hopefully soon when things are calm again they could finally go on a nice vacation. & I can't wait 4 that myself. XD &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2012 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 61
AHHH I was wating for this lolololol even though he didn't get across Sandra that much. At least he got to beat Mason's ass. Victory...he wipped his ass! I'm happy Michael got that out his system. Hahaha that's what Mason gets. Now Michael and Ema can move on and get there shit together like they want. Continue soon sis!
Author's Response: XD yes that was victory girl! Yay! mike finally did it ;) well maybe one day or soon sandra will learn. Let s hope 4 that...& yes he sure got that out his system. Ikr mike & ema can get there lives on track somewhat. But michael has to help emily a lot & he's a great man 2 put emily up first before hiself. &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2012 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 60
I really hope Emily gets better and dang! Michael is having a linked dream with her now? O.o who's gonna pass away? I'm so curious. Oh shit continue! I wonder what Michael will say to Sandra. Please update!!
Author's Response: Yep there both having the same visions at once. It's rare that there both having it & maybe vera can explain why she'll probably be able to give them a reading for this. &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 59
Woo gurl you've doing so much emotional chapters lately, I love it though!
I know Michael will never leave her no matter what circumstances it is. And those two girls are bitches for saying that to her they just jealous cause they don't have Sexy ass MJ. Michael will be pissed once he finds out and hope Emily works things out with Toya to And for her to get better she better start eating even if Michael have to force feed her. I hope one day people will treat Emily better...she doesn't any of this crap and her damn mother some how I hope my Michael lays it down to her to.
Anyways great chapter I can't wait read more!
Author's Response: I knw lolz I can't help it this story just runs in mind like a movie without me even thinking of idea's it just comes I don't have 2 think to hard 4 this one. Hopfully things will get better for them tho..& ikr they just mad cause they don't have fine ass mikey xD hopefully toya will work it out with her with a little help from steve & michael.
& yea mike may have 2 force feed her if she doesn't eat either. I knw it's depressing but sometimes things gets more worse in life before it gets better. That's how I look at it. Yes one day emily will get the respect that she deserves and thank goodness 4 the one's around that really cares 4 her. Heck yeah mike's about to lay it down 2 sandra & tell her like it is. You can see he had enough of this. & thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 59
Wow this chapter was so emotional. I cryed while reading it. And i hope Emily will tell Michael what those two girls said to her. And i also hope Emily starts gaining weight again before she dies or gets sick. And i wonder what Michael is going to do to Sandra. And why cant Joesph keep his mouth shut. Oh and i wonder what the dream Emily had means i hope its not someone she knows and loves dearly and i also wonder why LaToya hasnt talked to Emily since the bank robbery i hope she doesnt think that Emily is a weird freak. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: Ikr it was very emotional so much is going on & yes ema does need 2 tell michael what does girls said they was just jealous asses 4 pulling that. I hope emily starts eating to but I'm sure michael and his mother will help her along with vera & steve, that's if they ever find tho. Ikr joe always puts his 2 cent in everything smh... hopefully toya will come around soon she's still sponging this all in. She wasn't expecting to see all that. Like from the last time ema saved her it a lil differen then the the bank situation she actually saw her powers and things flying. Yeah I hope it's no one close to emily that's gonna pass away but you never know either. I just hope it won't get to bad. I think michael is ready 2 give sandra a peice of his mind now he really got tired of her & she put her daughter through hell to. & thanks girl! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 58
Emily is amazin and she really taught those guys a lesson that they will never forget lol And she got to see her father again and I cried a little bit when I read that part. Mike almost went to jail cuz he told off the cops, but he finally calmed down when they saw how worried that he was about Emily and Toya. I wonder how Toya will act when she finds out that Emily has powers. Will she still want to be her friend? Great update, girl XD
Author's Response: She sure did taught them a lesson bet they gonna sit up in jail wondering how they still got flunged out the windows lolz Ikr the moment with her father was so priceless something that rarely happens to her & it made me emotional to. Lolz omg mike couldn't handle hiself he was to hurt by knowing ema was shot. I think toya will try to understand all of this maybe she'll be freaked out a bit by this but she'll get use it & maybe find it cool since this was her first time seeing emily use her powers. & ema never ment 4 toya to see her powers either but she had no choice saving those people's was in her hands & she wanted to do a good deed with her gift. Yea but I hope toya is alright with it. & thanks girly! XD!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2012 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 58
I'm breathing in and out for this chapter..... I lost it with every scene in this chapter. Damn it I was crying like a baby :'( gosh it was so many emotions running through this chapter.
Lawed I really thought Emily was gonna be dead and then Michael lost it once he heard she was shot. Oh gosh that was close I feel that couple Michael and Emily is so strong together.
And her father is so much better then her mother I ask myself why did her father have to leave for? He's so sweet and I know Emily would of had a better life if her father haven't died.
Oh gosh and Michael helped her heal herself he helped her to regain her strengh in that. He's a good damn boyfriend I want a man like that for real!
And poor Toya now she's confused they gonna have to explain to her. Lol. & I loved how Steve and Michael sung bad boys to the robbers I was frecking laughing at that. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Yes so much has went on in this chapter a lot but at least it ended off well with them two being tegether and near eachother. & yes I soo agree with that her father is way much better then her mother. It's a shame though but she has vera and them by her side though but her mother will regret one day. Lolz yeah toya is in for a shock once she finds out since she saw how emily flung everything around including the robbers xD &thanks for enjoying this. :) <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2012 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 58
Damn u for tugging at my heart strings lol. Im still tearing up. I cant explain this but i will try: When Emily got shot it felt like i got shot and when she died it felt like i died to and it really broke my heart. And when she was talking to her dad i lost it. And when Michael found Emily and he helped her heal herself that really touched my heart. I have a really strong connection with Emily. I may sound crazy but thats how i feel. And im really,Really glad that Emily came back and kicked some ass. And my god Michael's reaction to Emily getting shot that just tore me up inside. And i laughed when Steve and Michael sang the Bad Boys song. I really Loved this chapter because of the happy ending. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
Ikw this chapter was so touching in so many ways it cringed at my heart to lolz Wow u have a connection with emily? That's not crazy at all you can relate to her and feel her pain & she endures a lot :/ & yes her dad & michael keeps her strong & sane to. Ikr I hate seeing michael get so sad to his reaction was to much 4 me to. It's like I seem more of this story running through my mind like scenes keeps coming that I can't control. Idk where it comes from either cause I think hard 4 idea's 4 this story it just comes & now I feel bad 4 sme more future chapters it maybe calm 4 now but it will get worse again before it gets better. & loolz yeah the bad boys song just fits with those dumb robbers xD Yes ema did her thing indeed :D & thanks so much for enjoying this chapter :) <3 Much Love.
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 57
Michael was right to kick Star out of his life. she is nothing, but a trouble maker. O_O I feel so sorry for those bank robbers lol XD
Author's Response: About time he gets rid of her & I agree she is to much trouble. Ikr them robbers are in for the time or there life XD let's see where this goes. XD & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 57
Oh shit i wonder what will happen next. But i kinda figured out what will happen next. In the last chapter i still cant believe that Michael and Emily made love in his car. And i nearly laughed my self out of my seat when Michael was saying down boy down to mikey jr that was so funny. And i really loved the last chapter, It was heart warming touching and it was also steamy.. And i cant wait to read when Michael and Emily has their first kid that is if you take this story far enough for me to find out. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: I'm glad you get he drift of what's to come for he next chapter. :D & yes the last chapter was heart warming & touching. Loolz yes michael was funny when you kept trying to control hiself. But that chapter sure was steamy tho I agree on that. & most definitley I will extend this story out as much as I can of then graduating on up to collage. &skip a few years also, it would be so cool to see them have a child that's gorgous& talented like michael with ema's powers. Beautiful mix of the two! Thanks for giving me that idea too & btw they still need there vacation to lolz & thanks girl <3 Much Love!
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 57
oooh gorl i cant wait till the next chapter. i hope she doesnt get hurt though. i wonder what would happen if she got shot. will it hurt her? michael will probably have a heart attack if that happened. please update soon hun.
Author's Response: That's a good question I'm wondering will a gun shot her as well. Now you gave me something to think about to. Oh lawed yes michael would get a heart attack if he heard about her getting shot that man would lose it. XD but I hope she doesn't get hurt either will see what happens soon. & thanks girl!