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Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2012 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 65

I Just Love The Pic!!!!! But wow im starting to get worried about the misterious guy hurting Emily. Im glad that Emily talked to Vera about this and i hope that Emily will tell Michael what she told Vera very soon Rheneeger. Whenever you get a chamce can you please udate,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E

Author's Response: Ikr isn't he cute? ^_^ & yea I knw he can't be all that trusted either... yeah vera may know a few things about him but she has to dig harder on him. Ikr I hope she tells him 2 & not hold back...but I think she may stall a bit cause it's talling your bf that you know a ghost of some sort that looks like you & could be a treat to the relationship. Yep more is coming & thanks so much 4 your review! <3

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 64 Strange Encounter pt 2

Oh no..it's gonna really good down soon.

But the thought of him looking like Michael is like omg!!!! To be wanted by two MJ's oh that's a fantasy for me. Lol I'm so excited about this but at the sametime nervous for Ema cause this could be big like something serious going down and he got connections with Michael and Ema's dream. Great chapter I'm rooting for the future chapters. :D

OOOh please continue whenever you get a chance.

Author's Response:

Oh yeah it's about 2 get really crazy soon! It's getting closer & closer now. & ikr having 2 Michael's is like a fantasy. Lolz yep he may be the connection 2 there dreams but he is there 4 a purpose & ain't going nowhere no time soon:/ :P. But yeah I'm glad you enjoyed! & thanks! :)

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 05:34 am Title: Chapter 21

aWWW! Michael is so cute and Emi need to forget about Mason!

Her mom is so crazy, she needs to go on a theraphy or something. She needs some help!



Author's Response: Lmao!! Ikr her mom is does need theraphy real bad omg she needs it. Yea all she gotta do is 4get mason & choose michael cause abviously he's the better choice in the long run. &thanks! <3

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 05:05 am Title: Chapter 20

Hey i'm back! Oh that so cute they said the L world! I wonder what Mason want because i don't remeber who mentions it but it's true that Mike and Mason noticed her at the same time. And i wonder if Mason is goign to seduce Emi just to get back at Mike.

Ema needs to chill because it's getting ridiculous. Why doesn't she simply tell Michael that Mason apologized. Easy



Author's Response: Ikr it is cute! He might try 2 get back at mike if he's gonna seduce her. Yes I agree she does need 2 chill, but I guess she's just scared cause it's her first time being in love with someone. But if that was me I would of just simply told him.

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 04:23 am Title: Chapter 64 Strange Encounter pt 2

yes talk to vera, dont leave your boo for a sexy ghost man you just met.......dang this girl got two michaels in her life. im jealous as hell now lol but seriously who was that? is he older michael or her guadian angel? either way, this girl is lucky. have you seen 30 year old michael? yeah SEXY lol. great chapter, update soon hun.



Author's Response: XD ikr she needs 2 tell vera about this cause maybe she may have more info on who he really is & what he wants from her. He is somewhat of a ghost or maybe an angel with some bad intentions, & influences on emily, she shouldn't put all her trust in him either. But it's gonna get crazy with this dude around cause he may influence her 2 use her powers 4 revenge on ppl u never knw or make her dump michael 4 him :/ oh gosh picture ema dumping michael? That would be depressing cause michael would lose his damn mind over her. The problem ema can only see this dude he will only show hiself 2 her & no one else so she better be careful when she talks 2 him in public places cause he'll make it seem as if she's talking 2 herself. Bad enough ppl already thinks she's weird & crazy oh boy it's gonna get crazy soon girl lolz u may not like this dude once something crazy happens. He is older then michael like way older more like dangerious era or history era michael he's like from Is it Scary short film. He was suppose 2 be her guardian angel but he fucked up & that will be explained 2. Ikr he sexy in his 30's on up & yea coincidently he just looks like michael but he's not michael, he's a totally different person. Wait til you see soon & ikr she is lucky 2 have two michael's shoot I'm jealous too lolz & thanks girl! <3

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2012 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 64 Strange Encounter pt 2

OMG this chapter was so intense. Sorry i havent left a review in awhile, LOL i was being lazy. But dont worry im back :) But this is a wondeful chapter and i dont know where to start lol. But im glad Latoya is trying to accept Emily's gift. And im also glad that Emily is gaining weight again. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: Yes it was intense & that's not even half of it either it gonna get crazy in future chapters. Aww & it's ok gurl I understand I get lazy 2 but I dnt mean 2 lolz I'm glad latoya finally accepts ema's gift 2 cause it's not her fault she was born with it anyway. Ikr she is getting back 2 her normal stage now she needs 2 be healthy & not stress 2 much the way she does but she can't help cause so many let her down in her life. & yes more is coming soon & thanks! Much Love!

Reviewer: sugacream2525 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2012 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 64 Strange Encounter pt 2

Wow damn that's creepy right there! So what is he? And he looks like Michael? O.o what a coincidence if he's her protecter or something. I'm so eager to know why all of sudden he wants to be in the picture right after she been through so much bullshit. I hope he doesn't pull anything and cause something to happen cause I will not like this dude. Continue soon!



Author's Response: Loolz ikr he is pretty creepy but sexy 2 ;) well ema gonna have 2 be careful around him cause he could be a threat to michael & bad enough no one can see him but her. Which is gonna be a major problem now. Cause he not going nowhere no time soon. He could have big plans up under his sleeves. If I was ema I wouldn't fully trust him cause of course he has intentions, & motives 4 her. & maybe could be dangerious influence so she better watch out to. You'll see when u read more future chapters. & thanks!

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2012 05:57 am Title: Chapter 63 Strange Encounter part 1

update update update, that cliffhanger ruined my life lol. it can't be her dad or could it? girl you cant have me waiting. i need to know.



Author's Response:

yes mosdefo i will have the conclusion up. oops my bad about the cliffy's lolz your in 4 a surprise!

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2012 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 63 Strange Encounter part 1

Aww they are just to cute together and I'm glad Emily is getting better. (:

And what's up with this strange dude??
O.o

Please continue I wanna know what he was to do with her life.

This is just very weird I'm anxious to know now! Why a clifthanger damn it? Lol continue really soon!

Author's Response: Yes they are! &yea I'm so glad she's better to well she's trying at least. Loolz you'll see once you read the conclusions to this. :P I knw my bad 4 the clifts more is coming. &thanks!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2012 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oh no!! Mike was so happy to drop her off and she simply shattered his hopes :(

Yeah Mason is back haha



Author's Response: Ikr I guess she needs time 2 trust him & you never know mason is back in the picture ;) oh & my bad if the grammer is messed up in these early chapters I read over my early chapters & omg I really need 2 edit I'm shocked that ppl could understand & read through my errors xD &thanks so much girl!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2012 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 11

I want to leave review believe me! I like when people comments about my work and I want to comment about yours. And I bet you like to read my emotions at every chapter haha :)

They finally kissed, how cute! God Joseph is such a douche and so disrespectful! I wonder if he is that harsh and direct in real life!

I know that stupid but i'm thinking of Mason haha



Author's Response: Awww well thanks a lot girl! Oh yes I love leaving comments always even if it takes me a long time 2 comment I come back in comment soon. Yes I feel the emotions the characters in your stories, like Bev&Mike omg they be having me over the edge. XD ikr they finally kissed :D bah ikr joe is just a grump in a half lolz well I heard he's very blunt about everything so I wouldn't put it pass him 2 be such a mouth peace. Loooolz & doesn't think of mason he took so much lead in this story.lolz

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2012 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm so eager to read the ecounter between Emi and Michael! I bet this is going to be epic!

Emi needs to learn how to control her power, she may kill someone!! And seems like Mike has the same power as aunt Vera!



Author's Response: Yes she can kill if she wants sadly because her powers aren't nothing 2 play around with either. & yes mike does have the power as vera I'm glad you pointed that out!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2012 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 9

Yeah Mason is back haha! I like the fact that Michael has some competition!!

I FREAKING LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE TRUE BLOOD! At every final season i don't know what do you with my life! Yeah, i'm that addicted!



Author's Response: Yea mason brings the dramas ;) xD me toooo girl I love true blood & tries 2 keep up with every season aswell. That's really a good show tho :D

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2012 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

He tried to kiss her again! That's so cute! Michael is a douche for acting that way toward her when he was with his friend but I knew he wasn't going to change right away. He needs time :) What is happenning with Aunt Vera. Eager to find out! And once again what about Mason? I really want another Mason-Emi moment ;)



Author's Response: & he failed again smh..but it I agree that was cute though. It maybe something urgent with vera, ya neva know another moment could be coming ;) & thanks 4 your reviw!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2012 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 7

Awwwww that's so cute. Emi must feel at ease with Michael if she is able to levetate in front of him. I can believe Steve allowed Michael to borrow her haha. What is he trying to do?



Author's Response: I guess steve was hooking them up in a way ;) xD & girl u dnt have 2 review chapter if u dnt want cause I know it's like 63 chapters now LOLz thanks you for all this feedback gosh I appreciate it :) <3

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