Date: Nov 14, 2020 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: My Story
I love how you put Tommy Joe Ratliff into the story and I wasn't expecting Pretty Kitty to be in the book:)
Date: Oct 09, 2012 11:13 am Title: Chapter 32: Great
Oh it's the end? Yeah it was quite abrupt lol.
I didn't see it coming lol. But I'm really happy that Michael and Stephanie will be parents and that everything will be fine between them.
See you on another story girl ;)
Author's Response:
lmao! I know! Haha I suck at endings... :/ Lol! But I'll practice and hopefully get better! :D
Hopefully is the key word there ;)
:D See you! And hey! I wanna see more stories from you, you know that right? Haha I've been thinking of starting to read the 'When Memories Are Gone', while I wait for the updates to 'Forbidden Love'. it'll keep my busy! :D
Date: Oct 06, 2012 01:33 am Title: Chapter 32: Heads Or Tails
I think quitting could be a good decision for Michael.After all, even if he is a very good stripper, he won't do this all his life.
It's great for him to think about a more path and to want to be able to have his relationship with Steph as they want it to be.
I wonder what the coin revealed...Maybe Michael will stay finally...
Date: Sep 27, 2012 08:45 am Title: Chapter 31: Favouring
I can understand the reaction of the boys toward the favouritism with the paycheck. It's not because Mike is her boyfriend that she can do that.
But to ask her to stop showing affection, it's maybe too much.They're a couple.I wonder how Michael will react to her decision to stop her love demonstrations.
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 31: Favouring
Oh junk they went off on her. She has a point of him being her boyfriend but at the sametime they have a point. She gave michael a bigger pay.and in a way it's sort of favoritisum. As for the affection part if it makes the other guys unfortable then she could atleast try to tone a bit but not to much. She could maybe give michael his regular pay before they flip out again & leave lolz
Oh and my response to you,I'm writing something I never written b4. I always write the sweet,and charming,funny,mike which I love so much. I wanna do one with him a bit crazy and violent once someone broke a promise to him. He hates people letting him down. He doesn't accept no's.
Date: Sep 22, 2012 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 30: Stares
I could try the challenge and if don't work then I'll have to beg u 2 death loolz :P but whenever u get a chance and heck yeah that would be so hawt seeing him be the boss of the ladies, and then messing around with one of them that's hott! ;) aw I wish you a safe trip from there and back :)
Date: Sep 22, 2012 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 30: Stares
i mean him being an owner of a female strip club and he's a badass 2 lolz that's my request 2 u :)
Author's Response:
Haha! That sounds interesting! You should make it a challenge so that other authors can try too! :D If I do do that, I want to finish one of my stories first. I don't want to start too many because I'll be leaving the country for awhile and I don't know if I'll be able to continue and I don't want people to think that I 'abandoned' them or anything. But I'll totally keep the idea in mind because that could make for one sexy story! *-*
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2012 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 30: Stares
Yay and update! I was wondering if u could do a story another version of strip where michael owns the club..I would love to read that to :D
Date: Sep 19, 2012 11:50 am Title: Chapter 29: Tease Me
The sex scene was great and I love how they are really in love. They said beautiful things to each other.
I hope nothing won't waste their happiness.
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2012 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 29: Tease Me
AWW im glad they worked things out now got some loving too ;) lolz
Date: Sep 15, 2012 02:21 am Title: Chapter 28: Another
I'm happy that they're reconciliate for now!
And of course I'm waiting for this next chapter. Write an amazing hot scene girl lol
Date: Sep 09, 2012 01:24 am Title: Chapter 26: Crying
Poor Stephanie! I really don't understand why Michael reacted this way.
I'm sure that Michael and her are good to be together, but she needs to clear things about what Michael really thought.
Date: Sep 06, 2012 11:49 am Title: Chapter 25: Second Thoughts
Hmm no, I think that Stephanie is wrong about Michael's feelings. I think he still loves her.
Why did he react like he did?I don't know, but I don't think it's because he doesn't love her anymore.
Date: Sep 03, 2012 11:12 am Title: Chapter 24: Wow
What a really big mess!! It will be very very hard, nearly impossible for Tommy and Michael to be friends again.They hate each other so much.
And now they thought Stephanie is doing this for the business, well big drama ahead no?
Date: Aug 27, 2012 08:30 am Title: Chapter 23: Waist Deep In Trouble
I pretty understand Adam and Jason's reactions. They saw Tommy very sad and they only saw a broken friendship.
I'm not totally to blame Stephanie for everything but Jason got a point when he said that if she told Michael right at the beginning, nothing would had happened.
I'm wondering how Stephanie will bring Mike and Tommy together again.