Date: Jul 18, 2012 12:18 am Title: Chapter 10-Part 2
EWP. TRUBBEL EN PAIR'O'DICE. So...Lisa is still around. Ugh. Somebody get rid of that slut. Lol Joseph is funny. Old ass man. And look at Michael gettin all mad and punchin mirrors. The scene with Paris and Jazz was too cute! It's a good thing the kids like her though. People don't realize how important that actually is in a marriage where there are already children present. Personally, I think that Michael should tell Jazz the whole truth because it's not like they're getting married months from now. Then again, if he tells her...she might not even marry him. I wanna see how this goes.
Date: Jul 17, 2012 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 10-Part 1
Awww, I feel kinda bad for Jazz in this chapter. I mean, I get where she's coming from...and I would hate for her to feel like she's the cause of further media scrutiny. Lmfao I couldn't help but laugh when she was getting all angry about her weight. Welp. Poor Michael...5 months left to deal with her. I WANTED THEM TO HAVE ACTUAL SEX THOUGH. UGH, SARRABI. Oh...and Joe. Wonder what he got going on.
Date: Jul 17, 2012 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 10-Part 1
Awww, I feel kinda bad for Jazz in this chapter. I mean, I get where she's coming from...and I would hate for her to feel like she's the cause of further media scrutiny. Lmfao I couldn't help but laugh when she was getting all angry about her weight. Welp. Poor Michael...5 months left to deal with her. I WANTED THEM TO HAVE ACTUAL SEX THOUGH. UGH, SARRABI.
Date: Jul 17, 2012 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10-Intro
I HATE YOU FOR STOPPING HIS DREAM!!! UGH. And Michael is so cute with Jazz and how he treats her because of her pregnancy. It's simply adorable ^_^ I hope Jazz is okay. I've had about enough of her spazzing out -____-
Date: Jul 16, 2012 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 10-Part 2
And then he found her in the house.. and he did something mischivious between her legs right? LoL.
I kid. I kid. :P
Date: Jul 15, 2012 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 10-Part 1
Wait. I feel like you flash forward past some good stuff. Where's the Busted Trick? And what about Mike G's niece's necklace? Surely her birthday has passed by now.
Still though. Can't wait to read about the wedding. And the babies.
Date: Jul 11, 2012 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 10-Intro
It's a trick Michael!! She wants the dxck bad!! *shoves popcorn in mouth*
She'll gonna seduce you w/ her eyes and babies... *sips slurpee*
Author's Response:
Lawd, you so shady!
Date: Jul 11, 2012 09:14 am Title: Chapter 9
Not done reading.. but I skimmed down to look at all the lovely pictures.. lawd the hand porn... and his thighs are just.. I can't go on..
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[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2012 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Have you posted this anywhere else? I feel like I've read it before. I love this fanfic. :)
Author's Response:
Yes, I have it posted to crazyovermj.com and on my tumblr. ;)