




Date: Oct 08, 2012 10:57 am Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
OMG! How long I've been waiting for this moment! They are finally together and they are deeply in love. It is even better than I imagined, so romantic and pure! Why do I get the feeling tho that Lucius will be Lucifer in that love game! I sooo can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Sorry I haven't updated in a while! Writer's block. Would update really soon. I'm working on my other story Three Words Unspoken these days. You can read that in the meantime if you want. Thank you so much for the review. Much L.O.V.E.





Date: Oct 07, 2012 02:14 am Title: Chapter 19: Take Me Back
OK, first of all, I want to really apologize to you again for taking so long..I hope I managed to clear things out in my previous review.
When I read the updates…I don’t think I’ve ever felt this heated and emotional! I mean WOW! At first, when Evelyn crossed paths with Dr Jackson on the deck to find him bruised and thrashed like that, I instantly knew this had to be the work of a certain jackass Lucius! Girl , can I jump through the screen, into your story and go THROTTLE that awful son of a B!TCH already…How dare he?!!
I know he’s jealous and possessive and feels intimidated by Dr Jackson and all that but he really took his envy too far! WAY too far!! And when he pounced and tried to take Evelyn by force like that, girl, my whole face turned red with fiery!! I swear that was so intense and heartbreaking! I really thought he was going to rape her
Evelyn sure told him though! When she confessed her love for Dr Jackson, I almost thought he was gonna kill her or something. I thought certainly that had to be the last straw…but right now I’m just afraid he’s only gunna take it all out on Dr Jackson and it might not be suicide or the ship crashing that’ll be the death of him…
Poor, Poor Dr Jackson! And poor Evelyn too…Where do they both go from here?
I get why Evelyn is so set on banning Dr Jackson from the Burlesque club and most importantly her life,, she’s only trying to protect him, right? But is that rlly the right way to do so? I can’t help but wonder…
If they keep all their emotions and desires bottled up like that…isn’t it kind of doomed to come erupting out soon or later? It’s only a matter of time. Surely they can’t keep avoiding each other FOREVER…They’re stuck together on the same ship, for crying out loud!
Man, I can hardly wait for that moment to come X’D Darling, I don’t even know what else to say right now…I’m still speechless from re-reading those two breath-taking chapters…
I’m really terrified of what more Lucius might be capable of and how far he’s gunna take things tho…The things Evelyn blurted out to him about her feelings for Dr Jackson can’t have done his already existing hatred for the man any good,, and if he didn’t stop at anything to go break his nose and dared making such threats…God knows what more he’s up to!!
I’m just so hooked on this story! You know I’m loving all the drama and heat and passion, gurl! Every single chapter just has my blood boiling!!! You’re brilliant!
Thanks, so much! Ash ;^)
& thank you for the tip darling!





Date: Oct 06, 2012 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
OMG 0_o Darling, I have to tell you something..
I left you this really, really long review like a whole week ago and just now realized it never got posted.. This is so weird! So I wrote it again, it was like MEGA long, and then realized it didn't get posted AGAIN!
I'm using my other computer now and will write out my long review about 18 & 19 again before reading the new updates... I'm so sorry about this! I can't believe I had no idea. I hope you're not angry with me for taking so long but if I knew I would've switched computers sooner...
Thnx, Ash ;^)
Author's Response: Aww honey I just thought you were busy with work. Don't sweat it. I can understand. This has happened to me too. And yes it happens in some computers and not so in others. Uncheck the little box with the words Use tinyMCE next to it and then type in your review. Works for me. Much L.O.V.E. and happy reading!!!





Date: Oct 05, 2012 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
I have to say, this is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my entire life, I am officially addicted to it! Its beautifully written. Thank god they are finally together now, hopefully nothing goes wrong for them. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hola amigo! I think this is the first time I'm seeing you around here. I'm always excited to see a new member from my audience opening up to me! And gee, thank you, thank you, thank you so much for your kind words. You've touched my heart. I'm so glad you like my story so much and I'm so happy to have you aboard. Thank you for the review. The new chapter would be up next week. I'm working on it. I'll try to make it as perfect as I can. Until then, happy reading! Much L.O.V.E from my heart to yours!





Date: Oct 04, 2012 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
Yay! I can't believe he explained everything and they're together now. I doubt it will be smooth sailing for them from now on, though. I wonder what the fallout will be when their relationship is revealed. In my last review, by "twisted" I meant there's some pain mixed in with the passion. I think those intimate moments perfectly reflect the underlying emotional turmoil. I love how fast you update! I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: I know. They've got lot of trouble ahead. You don't want to imagine. And I can't imagine myself writing all that! *le sigh......* And aww, thanks. I update as soon as I'm done working on a new chapter. Sometimes I get done multiple chapters at a time. So then I upload faster. But when I hit writer's block, and this tends to happen more often than not, gee, I would pass weeks without putting a single word on paper. And yeah, now I understand what you meant. I couldn't get it the first time. Sorry. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!





Date: Oct 04, 2012 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
Oh! This was a beautiful chapter. :3
Author's Response: Thank you darling. And thanks for the review too. New chapter would be uploaded next week. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Oct 04, 2012 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
Oh my dear God. Oh my DEAR GOD.
PERFECT CHAPTER, PERFECT CHAPTER! I died! I dieeeed!
Why are so good at writing this story???? WHYYYYY
This is seriously, definitely the best fan fiction I've read on this site!! Everyone here should learn from you!
Michael's speech about his feelings for Evelyn... you chose the perfect words for him to say... it was so tender, so pure, so true, I completely understood Michael and his point of view and I'm so glad Evelyn did the same! And the way you put little reminders of the real Michael like when for example you used the word "inhumanity" or the "I love you more" ahhhh... That's why your Michael is so special, because he isn't that different from the real Michael! The one we all love here!
And when towards the end he started to tease Evelyn, God it was so sexy xD She must be real strong to not have give in to him!
They're so perfect together. FINALLY THE'RE TOGETHER. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Evelyn will beat Lucious lurid ass hahah :P
Love you honeeeey!
Author's Response: Oh girl! You simply flatter me with your reviews! You make me feel all warm and fuzzy, and gee, I haven't the words to react to all your compliments. You touched my heart. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you so much. You've given me compliments of the highest order I could receive as a writer and it makes me feel so good about myself and it helps me to know that there are people out there who loves my writing so much. And yeah, I wanted to incorporate little parts of the real Michael Jackson to make this story feel connected to him even though it's based in 1912. That's the reason why I included that part about dark rumors circulating Dr. Jackson too. We know the kind of rumors Michael had to go through in real life. This is kind of like drawing parallels between two decades. The next chapter would be uploaded next week. I'm still working on it. I want it to be perfect. And hey, I was orginally planning to finish this story off from the sinking of The Titanic but with good reception I've got, I think I might want to extend it beyond that. Do you think it would be a good idea? Would you like enjoy more Michael-Evelyn drama? Tell me if you do because I've already got a plot in my mind. Words can't explain how grateful I am to you for all your wonderful words, your wonderful reviews. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Mwaaaaaaah............!
Date: Oct 04, 2012 11:10 am Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
aww their together! That was so so sweet, let's hope no one gets in there way! great updates as usual hun! x
Author's Response: Thank you darling. I'm so thankful for another review. The new chapter would be uploaded next week. Stay tuned. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 04, 2012 09:26 am Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
Oooooooooh my!!!! Awsome chapter !! We can feel the love and the passion between them!!Can't wait for the next!:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review nellan. Yeah, the new chapter would be uploaded some time next week, still working on it. Wish me luck to give you the best of entertainment. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 03, 2012 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 21: Behind The Mask
Michael's reaction was understandable. It's not easy to accept it and maybe he saw Evelyn like the purest 'thing' in the world... so finding out that she was Carmella was a bit shocking for him.
I wonder what does he have to say to her...! Omg I hope it's not something bad!!! They don't need more drama D: haha really I can't wait to know.
Absolutely great writing as always my dear! It's a pleasure to read you!!! See you in the next chapter <3
Author's Response: The new chapter is up. And don't worry. Don't you think Dr. Jackson's return to Evelyn was enough proof that he wanted to make things right with her once and for all. Stay tuned, read and enjoy. Much L.O.V.E.





Date: Oct 02, 2012 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 20: Give In To Me
I love this story! The love scenes are so intense and a bit twisted but I still love it. I'll be reading the new chapter later on. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Twisted? Ha ha ha. What do you mean? I'm not really good at writing love scenes because I've never had personal experience. This is just vicarious knowledge. I try to give it my best shot. And I'm glad you like it no matter how unnatural a projection it is on my part. The new chapter is up. Read and enjoy. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 02, 2012 11:03 am Title: Chapter 21: Behind The Mask
excellent girl!!! wish to read more soon!!!!confessions, confessions....
Author's Response: Ahoy there! You have no idea the joy it brings me to discover who is a part of the circle of my reader. It excites me every time I read a review from a reviewer I haven't come across. Yes, I remember all of you. Thank you for reading my story. I'm so glad you like it. Much L.O.V.E.





Date: Oct 02, 2012 10:59 am Title: Chapter 21: Behind The Mask
OMG! This chapter is so great! So touching, so heartwrenching! Dr. Jackson so loves Evelyn, but is simply afraid to admit it. He always tries to push her away, while he just wants to love her as much as she wants to love him. I know, it must be hard to open your heart to someone, when all you know is self-hate and prejudice! I want more...I can't wait for the next chapter. :-D
Author's Response: Girl, you put my thoughts into words better than I did in the story. It's amazing to see so many readers who have really truly connected with all the characters. It makes me really, really happy. The new chapter is up. Read and enjoy. And stay tuned for more action. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Sep 28, 2012 11:20 am Title: Chapter 20: Give In To Me
GO JACK! XD
I said, didn't I??? I'm so glad she has Rose and Jack to turn to...
Very erotic chapter by the way. You know how to describe love scenes without the need of being vulgar or to exaggerating things... I've read stories which almost seemed to be a porno movie -.- I'm so glad you're heeeeere.
I want moreee too :( I mean, chapters! xD
Love you! <3
Author's Response: Erotic? Ha ha ha. That's a great compliment considering my writing has never encompassed this degree of intimacy. And I'm writing this purely based on vicarious knowledge. I'm glad you've found it believable. And really? I've never come across stories of that kind on the site. Or maybe I can't tell them apart! Lol. Thanks for the review honey. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Sep 27, 2012 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
LOVE THE UPDATED CHAPTER!.....I really do think he knows who she really is...i mean seriously!?? how can he not lol
Great Job once Again!
Author's Response: I hope you were surprised by the turn of events in the 21st chapter. Ha ha ha. So glad to have you on board. Thank you for being a reader and thank you for your review. Much L.O.V.E.