Date: Oct 27, 2012 04:36 am Title: Chapter 24: The Lady In My Life
I know i say this all the time but each chapter just gets better and better and better! I love Michael and Evelyn together, they are so so adorable! i loved this part as well: Dr Jackson laughed lightly at her innocence, and stroked her cheek affectionately. < that made my heart flutter! every chapter is beautifully written, fantastic job hun, looking forward to see what happens next with them both, as well as Rose and Jack!
Author's Response: That sentence was a spontaneous addition! Glad you like this chapter because I found it so hard to write it and I wasn't really happy with the outcome because it felt like a filler. What matters is that you have enjoyed it. It gives me contentment. That's why reviews are so important for writers. Thank you my dear. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 24: The Lady In My Life
How do you know so many words?! do you look them up on google or do you know them? great story :)
Author's Response: Oh honey... I think it's enough proof for you that I've lived many years to own a vocabulary. Lol I'm 20. But I have a passion for language. Not google though. I read a lot. And my brain gets stuffed with the words I come across. Thanks for the review love. You've touched my heart. Glad you like my story. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Xoxo Hope you enjoy my other stories too - Three words unspoken and Ruins of my heart.
Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 24: The Lady In My Life
Omgggggg you always make me fangirlize so much! *w*
I LOVE how you portraited Jack! He's such a lovely guy. Oh how much I've cried for him and Rose... :'( In this chapter you gave us another bit of the real Michael and I appreciate this so much.
I'm really curious to know what Michael has to show to Evelyn *w* She shouldn't be dubious... she should trust him! Haha :')
Love you honey! <3 You're great as always!!
Author's Response: It took me really a lot to be done with this chapter. I wasn't really happy with it. It felt like a filler. Felt like I wasn't doing justice to my readers. But glad to know you've taken a liking to it anyway!!! Phew... that's a relief. Thanks for the review Ankhsunamun! ;-) Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2012 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 23: Can't Let Her Get Away
Awww, they're so cute when they're playful. It's nice to read about them having fun together before things get serious. You already know how much I love this story.
Author's Response: I know right! It's so easy to picture Michael being like that! He would have been the perfect lover. Thanks for the review darling. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2012 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 23: Can't Let Her Get Away
Aw, cute. I love this story. :3
Author's Response: Thanks darling. And thank you for another review. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 23, 2012 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 23: Can't Let Her Get Away
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THIS WAS SO CUTE!!
And I'm happy to let you know this chapter came right as a birthday present for me, yeah! :P I'm turning 17 today! ^_^ so, thank you dear!!
I adore how now they have a little time for being happy together... first time I see them laughing and playing <3 It's so refreshing. And your Michael makes me wanna break into the story and do nasty things to him LOL he's such a tease!
As always, perfectly written. <3
Can't wait to see Evelyn beat Lucious's ass...! Oh, I almost forgot! You told me you'll like to make a sequel of SD... well, you know I love Evelyn and Michael and I can't get enough of them. But, maybe a sequel would ruin the "mistery"...? Then again, it's all up to you! Just make sure they'll survive and everything will be alright XDDDD
Lots of love for you!! :*
Author's Response: Awww.... Happy Birthday darling! I hope you have a fantabulous year and may you be blessed with nothing but joy and the best of luck for the future. And may hope reach you in times of sorrow to see the silver lining in the darkest of clouds! And what I meant by a sequel is that I want to write what happens in Evelyn's life after the sinking of the Titanic. But I guess I should finish up to then first and call for a vote from my readers. Hopefully you'll like the angst I've planned for the subsequent plot! Thanks for another beautiful review! Your words always make me smile. Anticipate the next chapter before this weekend. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2012 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 23: Can't Let Her Get Away
Ruth is no better than Beatrice. Both of them are two peas in a pod, bitchy, cold, and snobbish. Lol! Mike and Evelyn are too cute. I love how you made them secret lovers and hopefully that will change. Loved it and can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: I know! Women from the same generation. Same conservative ideas. And the sad part is the 1900's weren't short of this type of women and martyred young girls like Evelyn and Rose. Yeah I would upload another chapter before the weekend hits. Thanks for the review! Much L.O.V.E. xoxo
Date: Oct 21, 2012 05:09 am Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
Honey where are you? I miss your story :(
Author's Response: Hey girl, sorry about that. I was working on my other story Three Words Unspoken and honestly speeaking I had run out of ideas for Sweet Deception. Will get back to writing today. Sorry for keeping you all hanging. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
XD I'm finally caught up. Yayyy they are finally together. Great job, girl!! And now I patiently wait for your next update XD
Author's Response: Awww girl!!! You gave me 22 REVIEWS!!! Thank you thank you thank you so so much! I'm really touched! It was really interesting to listen to your opinions on every single chapter! Doll, I owe you big time! Mwaaaaaaah! So glad I have a friend in you! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Happy writing to you! <3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 21: Behind The Mask
XD She has been exposed. Mike was angry and he had a right to be. But I think that he's more angry w/himself for not knowin that it was her. I wonder what he has to tell her now. Will he hurt her again? I hope not. XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 20: Give In To Me
Oooo...the lovemakin scenes get even more hotter and steamier. O_O Did he say that he loved her? Wooooww...I wonder what she will do now XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 19: Take Me Back
LMAO She really wounded Lucius's pride. Not that he didn't deserve it. He is a cerito. Michael wants her again. Oh I forgot I mean that he wants Carmella again. He will figure out who she really is. He is not stupid. And its only a matter of time before he puts two and two together. Rose and Jack are so cute together. I love Leonardo DiCaprio XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 18: Smooth Criminal
I knew that Lucius was not to be trusted. Mike was wrong for what he said to Evelyn. He's lucky that she didn't slap him. Beatrice has some nerve! How dare she promise her niece to Lucius. She is a horrid woman. Can't wait to read more XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 17: Girl Don't Take Your Love From Me
I would say that I feel sorry for Evelyn. But I don't because she pursued Michael first. And now that he's finally showing interest, she can't handle it. *rolls eyes* lol She knows that she wants him just as he wants her XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2012 10:38 am Title: Chapter 16: Don't Walk Away
She really needs to stop playin cuz she knows that she wants him. What if she gets pregnant? What will she do then? How will she cover up what happened between her and Mike? I can't wait until she is exposed XD