[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2012 09:57 am Title: Chapter 27: The Way You Make Me Feel
Oh, Evelyn! Don't you see that you just played with fire? He might kill you for not loving him, but Michael and make it look like a fatal accident! You sure should think twice about that duel! Lucius is the devil personified. What an amazing chapter and story!
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, yeah, things are going to get pretty dangerous after this. But don't worry. Love always finds a way. Thanks for the review. Thank you for reading my story. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2012 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Way You Make Me Feel
Oh my God! I love their chemistry together. It's so intense that it's almost too much for me to handle. I love it! It worries me that Lucius knows about them and is so angry. That man is trouble. Can't wait for a new chapter!
Author's Response: Hee hee hee. Thanks darling. It took me a lot of work and a HELL lot of time to get those two chapter done. Guess that finally paid off! :) I'm so happy with the positive feedback I'm recieving! Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Nov 22, 2012 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Way You Make Me Feel
oh wow! I need a cold shower after this chapter.. Intense and incredibly hot, i loved how you described it! absolutely amazing, I just hope Lucius will keep his distance and won't ruin it for them.
I love how strong they seem to becoming and as always you bring another great, fantastic chapter! I know i have said this before but well done! <3
and another thing: I need we could all do with a Dr Jackson in our lives!
Author's Response: Hahahahahhahahahahahahaha. Really???? My writing got into you that bad?????? Hahahahhahahahahahaha. And yeah any girl would love a Dr. Jackson! Isnt" that why we keep lingering on this site on a daily basis? Lol lol lol His magic continues even in death. His L.O.V.E. lives forever. I'm really truly happy that you and so many others enjoy my work. I've publishes a new story by the way. It's called Ruins of my heart. I dont know if you'll like it but do give it a try and tell me what you think of it. I would really appreciate it. Sending out much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2012 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 26: Loving You
Wow. wow. wow...
Can i just say your writing in this is incredible, i have never read a story in so much detail, i wished i had the confidence to write my stories in such detail like you do. Tis is one of the best stories i have ever read and i truly mean that!
I didn't realize you updated with Chapter 25 so i apologize i have not left a review for it! I literally checked my email today and it showed me that you updated with new chapters. Each chapter just gets better and better and i smile at how amazing Evelyn and Michael are together! they are the perfect couple. Just finished reading this Chapter so will go onto reading Chapter 27! Love. x.x.x
Author's Response: Hello my pocketsizerlion! Its been a while since I last saw you around! Thank you thank you so much for your kind words! You've made my heart swell! I'm a sucker for details so yeah I end up adding long paragraphs of it anyway for everything I write. And thats okay you missed out on just one. It happens. You dont have to apologize love. I personally dont think Evelyn and Michael are the perfect couple. Rather they are an intense couple and they've got good couple dynamics. For the moment. Lol I dont mean to scare you. Thanks once again for the review! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Nov 21, 2012 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Way You Make Me Feel
I know, every fan has heard that too xDDDD You can see it from the way he works those hips... x__x My God. My Looooord. HAHA At first I didn't like roleplay, but when I thought about how it would have been if done with someone you love... I actually loved it! OMG you're gonna put roleplay in TWU? I can't waaait to read it!! XD Maybe that's what Krystal and Michael were doing in Africa on Valentine's Day. HAHA!
I didn't know about this jewelry thing though! It's sexy and classy at the same time! I like it... *-* If all this is true, we can say you'd never be bored with Michael... he was creative even in bed! XD
Do you have an idea on how long will you make TWU? Number of chapters?
Can't wait to read the next update honey. It's truly GREAT chatting with you too! <333
Author's Response: Well... let me tell you, I've just started warming things up between Wendy and Michael. Meaning this is going to stretch beyond 100 chapters!!!! Yay yay yay yay!!!! Well I dont really know how role play works so I guess I shoukd read up on that. But gee, that sounds sooo freaking weird!!! I would never try it even with someone I love! It sounds sooo creepy!!! Guess I wouldnt have been the best of partner for Michael! Lol lol lol lol Jewelry I dont mind though. ;) Sorry I couldnt reply to your tweets on time. I was asleep then. It was past three in the morning when I got your tweets! *sigh....* If you want, you can talk to me about the teacher issue lol by dropping a mail to cerinekyrahsands@yahoo.com I was thinking of using that scene too on TWU!!! And rest assured it wouldnt be Professor Alvarez! Cant wait to heqr from you! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2012 10:14 am Title: Chapter 27: The Way You Make Me Feel
Oh no no sweetie, the position was absolutely clear is just that I had some trouble understanding it because, well, english is not my mother language and I still have some difficulties I guess, when it comes to more specifical parts xD Don't worry! <3
Omg yes, I dislike cursing during love scenes... it's terrible, 'cause you're all in the mood lol and then they make Michael go "oh fuck" ò_ò It's such a turn off LOL And I personally don't think Michael was the type... I mean, I might be perfectly wrong but still, that's the impression I've got :D Yes, we're definitely soul sisters!! Hahaha <333
I wish you luck in finishing Sweet Deception! I know what you mean, I'm also determined in finishing that instagram challange lol! It's not exactly the same thing but still...!
I love you very muuuch! :***
Author's Response: I know right??? I dont think he ever was the type! Or maybe even if he did say it out loud I dont think he would screamed it out loud like how they portray in most these stories! Like I said, I think he too gave it value the most totalitarian expression of the love you feel for someone. I've heard he's AMAZING in bed!!! And that he liked roleplay although I have no idea how you can bring it on to love making lol and he liked to wear jewelry for bed! You know like a fetish or something. But I looked it up and there is no technical reference to jewelry being a fetish. May it was just a turn on! Lol why are we headed this way really? I have a sick mind!!! And honestly speaking everytime I see that gold chain of his dangling around his neck in the Give In To Me video, I literally start hyperventilating! He's right to be turned on by a touch of gold! Sure makes me! Maybe I should bring in a little role play love making when TWU reaches that level of development! Its great chatting with you Megs! Much L.O.V.E. Currently writing chapter 42 of TWU. Expect Michael!!!!
Date: Nov 21, 2012 09:54 am Title: Chapter 26: Loving You
If TWYMMF was REALLY GOOD, now with this chapter to complete it is BEYOND REALLY GOOD! XD
I already said it in my other review... I love how your write intimate scenes! And mind me if I'm wrong, but I think I read somewhere in one of your responses that you actually never "practiced" XD And still, look how well you can create love scenes! Just like in Ruins Of My Heart... you're not really fond of horror genre but still you can recreate a scary, credible story for us (and for youself) to enjoy. This is amazing.
<333333333333333 LOVE, LOVE, LOVEEE! *the Beatles singing*
Author's Response: Awww.... darling.... I'm so flattered!!! I just read some off the site and got some ideas. Thats as far as my experience go! Lol thanks for another touching review! You are such a great reader and a reviewer and a friend!!! Sending out much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!
Date: Nov 21, 2012 09:17 am Title: Chapter 27: The Way You Make Me Feel
Oh, I wasn't expecting this!
I had almost forgot how good and passional your writing is when it comes to love scenes! I adored it. No curses, just tender yet sensual love making... <3
I had some trouble understanding their position though LOL My fault, my fault! I had to read the same part a few times to catch it lol
It's funny 'cause yesterday I had my "The Way You Make Me Feel" moment, I couldn't stop listening to that song! haha :D
"He had helped her back into her attire – he had drawn up the same stocking that he had pulled from her legs, he had tightened his corset for her, he had helped her slide into her dress, all so tenderly than when he loved her."
Ohh this was so sweet!
Lucius, ya betta go find another chick, maaan! xD I hope Evelyn will beat him, I hate when he calls Michael that way...
Welcome back, Sweet Deception!! We missed you!! <333
Author's Response: Hey, was the position unclear??? o.O I didnt proof read it! I should have!!! I'm soooo sorry!!!! Yeah I just hate cursing in intimate scenes! Isnt making love the most totalitarian expression of what you feel for someone? Its suppsed to be romantic! I totally agree with you! Gee we are like soul sisters girl!!! Hopefully I'll get this story over with soon. For once I want to finish a project I started! There are so many stories I've got to be done with!!!! *sigh.....* and wouldnt Evelyn beat his sorry ass or what! You dont have to worry about that. What you have to worry about are the consequences! Dun dun dun dun...... lol thanks for another motivating review! Much L.O.V.E. rrom my heart to yours!!! Mwaaah....!
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2012 07:49 am Title: Chapter 27: The Way You Make Me Feel
Sooooo good!! Please keep writing, honey. Much love (:
Author's Response: Aww... thank you so much sweetheart! Gee you finished reading it in one day??? I cant even proof read it in one day!!! Lol thank you so much for your kind words. They mean a lot to me! They help me keep motivated! I'm so glad you like my story! And I really appreciate your reviews. Thank you so much once again. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2012 07:48 am Title: Chapter 26: Loving You
I started reading this story and finished it in one day. It's soooo amazingly good!! Seriously, I love everything about it. E-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g. Your writing style is impeccable as well (: please keep writing. Much love <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2012 07:48 am Title: Chapter 26: Loving You
I started reading this story and finished it in one day. It's soooo amazingly good!! Seriously, I love everything about it. E-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g. Your writing style is impeccable as well (: please keep writing. Much love <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 07:05 am Title: Chapter 25: For All Time
Oh I adore this story.
Author's Response: Thank you darling. And thank you so much for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Nov 01, 2012 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 25: For All Time
You did great!! Don't worry bout it! I love this <33
Author's Response: Thank you girl. It's a real relief to get to know that in person. The next chapter would be updated next week. Stay tuned! Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Nov 01, 2012 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 25: For All Time
Awwww they go so well together!! :3
Honey, why are you saying you're not satisfied with this chapter? o.O I honestly found this chapter enjoyable as the previous ones! Mh, don't worry.
I understand Evelyn's doubts. Not that she should really doubt Michael but it's understandable... I often have so many insignificant doubts about everything and it gets so frustrating, trust me <.< luckily che understood well she shouldn't be worried!
I just can't stop loving you :) Another hint of "our" Michael... incredibly sweet scene!
So............ in the next chapter? >:D AHAH shit is about to go down? ahahah! *--*
Now I can say I'm completely satisfied and can go to bed! lol!
Other kisses for you! Lovee! <33
Author's Response: Oh thank you darling. It's a real relief to know that this was interesting enough. But don't be too sure of what to expect in the next chapter. Now don't freak out, I'll make it as interesting as it could go! Thank you for another wonderful review. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Oct 28, 2012 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 24: The Lady In My Life
OMG more!! I love this!
Author's Response: The new chapter would be uploaded mid week. Until then, hang in there my darlings. I'm just halfway through writing it! Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.