




Date: Oct 19, 2013 10:17 am Title: Chapter 31: You Can Cry On My Shoulder
I love this story because it has two of my favorite things Michael Jackson and Titanic... you should write more this is really good :)





Date: Sep 22, 2013 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
I miss this story! <3
Author's Response:
I know you do sweety. I will try to update this soon. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Sep 07, 2013 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
Hope you update soon! :)
Author's Response:
I will try my best my dear Pocketsizedlion. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Aug 02, 2013 07:00 am Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
please keep writing-)
Author's Response:
I want to but I've just been too busy lately. And kind of short on ideas too. Le sigh...





Date: Jun 10, 2013 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 31: You Can Cry On My Shoulder
I just dropped by to let you know that this story is truly exceptional. And this is coming from an MJ fan who isn't usually into the AU fiction. I love the plot and your writing style. I truly hope you're planning to continue Sweet Deception because it's beautiful.
Much love,
Paula
Date: Apr 16, 2013 10:20 am Title: Chapter 31: You Can Cry On My Shoulder
OMG YOU'RE BACK!!! I missed this story! Pleaseeee update soon <3
Author's Response: Hee hee hee. Yeah I am! I'd be updating Three Words Unspoken and No Time For Innocence first and then I'll head back over to Sweet Deception. I promise I won't tease you Gus for too long. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!





Date: Apr 15, 2013 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 31: You Can Cry On My Shoulder
Excellent chapter :D :) I love this side to their relantionship as much as the passionate one :) The characters are believable and that's a major plus to this story :) amazing job can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Hee hee hee... Thank you Tharu. I'll be updating this as soon as I can. Lots of stories to be juggled! Thanks again for the review. Much L.O.V.E.





Date: Apr 12, 2013 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 31: You Can Cry On My Shoulder
Thanks for the update hope you continue.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review sweetheart. I would update this soon. Much L.O.V.E.





Date: Apr 12, 2013 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 31: You Can Cry On My Shoulder
Ohh, I loved this!!!
The maid was so sweet. And she knows something... hmmm I think I know what it is! It would explain the fact that she fainted and all... oh my God :D You have something in your mind and I can't wait to know what you'll do!!!!
Dr. Jackson is so flawless, the way you describe him <3 His words reassured not only Evelyn, but even us.... we don't want these two to be apart from each other... and Evelyn's father... it hurts when someone as close as him reveals to be nothing better than the others when it comes to Michael. Such a pity.
I can't believe this is going to an end! ;___; how many chapters are left hun? *sigh*
Author's Response: Maggie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant help that I'm always this excited to read your reviews! Tee hee hee. I know, Dinah's sweet but no, she does NOT know anything. And I don't have anything in my mind. Not so far anyway! Tee hee hee. I'm not sure how many chapters it would take to end it but I'm certain it won't exceed 40, or may be 45. I don't know. I feel bad too that I have to end it. But I promise I'd be returning with an even better historical romance! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaah..............!
Date: Apr 12, 2013 11:51 am Title: Chapter 31: You Can Cry On My Shoulder
Thank you my dear. This is a really beautiful story and this love is breathtaking. I was waiting so long for this update and now, when I've read it I can't wait to read more. I really hope that they won't be forced to break their relationship as this would also break my heart. I am really scared for them. This love is so real, not artificial, sincere, but the world around them is too cruel and destroys everything that is pure and innocent, like their love. Please let them go through it happily. Thank you again. Big kisses and hugs. This story is my favourite here.
Author's Response: I promise I wont disappoint you through the course of the new updates. Thank you so much for sucj a beautiful review. Thank you for letting me know that I can create relationships that feel real enough through my writing. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!





Date: Apr 11, 2013 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 30: Threatened.
Amazing chapter :) it's perfectly natural to have doubts about a happy future especially with a man as broken as Dr Jackson and you captured all that extremely well :) can complete relate to Evelyn's character :) all her reactions are natural nothing seems forced :D keep on penning sweetie <3
Author's Response: Oh..... broken Dr. Jackson.... but isn't his fragility sooooooo attractive???? Tee hee hee. Thank you again for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Apr 11, 2013 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 29: Is it scary?
Wow!!Brilliant chapter <3 loved the fight between Dr Jackson and Lucius :D Evelyn and Michael make a perfect pair :D :) also loved the protective side of Michael :) keep on writing <3
Author's Response: Thank you so much the review tharu. I'm happy you find my writing enjoyable. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Apr 05, 2013 05:37 am Title: Chapter 30: Threatened.
Really hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I would upload the new chapter as soon as I can. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Mar 18, 2013 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 22: Fall Again
This is a really beautiful story. I am going to add it to my favourites. I tried to contact you but something went wrong. Was trying to contact the administrator, in vain....
If you wish, please contact with me, ok....
I wanted to send you these two songs...you know when I read or write, music always accompanies me, it's part of my life...and I've got these 2 songs matching this beautiful story....
Doctor J told her about his dark side....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H5ArpRWcGe0
and you know I read the last chapter (30) and ...it killed me literally....and this song came to me straight away...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6FbyPDMTqGQ
thank you fot this wonderful story.
Ania
Author's Response: Hey sweetheart. Sorry I took so long to respond. Didnt check by the reviews for SD in a while. I'd be updating it soon. Thank you for your beautiful review. And thank you for the links you've sent me. I'd be sure to check it. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours.
Date: Feb 11, 2013 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 30: Threatened.
I am so so sorry i havent left a review for a while, I am a bad review i know. I have been so busy at work and also i am moving house so i havent had time to leave a reply, i have been reading your updates on my phone but its hard to comment on the phone so i do apologise but i am on the laptop tonight so i can FINALLY leave you a reply/comment!
Oh god you cannot leave it there! You have to update soon so we know Evelyn is okay!! I am hanging on the edge of my seat now! I really hope she will be okay.. I adore the love between her and Michael. They both deserve the happiness and i cannot wait to see where they both with each other.
Please update soon! and i still love how to write this story, you give every detail into it. Excited to see what happens!
x.x.x
Author's Response: Oh my Pocketsizedlion, I'm so sorry I didnt upload any new chapters these past weeks. I moved house too and I started medschool. Needless to say I hate it there. There is nothing I'd rather do than be a writer. But we all have to have some stable career to get us through. Le sigh. Thank you for the revoew darling. Much L.O.V.E.