[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 20: Give In To Me
First of all, I wanna tell you once again how wonderfully this story is written! It always leaves you craving for more...:-)
Why only do I get the feeling that Dr. Jackson knows exactly, who she is as he just gotta have a look at Evelyn's full name? And...He said, I love you and I truly believe, he would only these three meaningful words to Evelyn! I already wanna read more...damn! LOL
Author's Response: Hahahahahahaa. So I guess the new update blew your expectations to bits, huh? Sorry about that. Yeah, I've got really good reception for this story and I wish I could make my other story Three words, unspoken, just as interesting as this one because this story seems to be taking all the spotlight away from it. I wish I could come up with another story as exciting as this which would go beyond the four days it takes to drown a ship. Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 19: Take Me Back
I love this story so much! I just caught up on about 10 chapters and now I can't wait for the next update. I love the complexity of the plot and the characters as well as the dramatic turns I never see coming. This is just so well-written. I'll try my best not to fall behind again and review every chapter because you deserve that much. Please update soon!
Author's Response: And hello to you new reviewer! It gives me great joy to find out who all my readers are! Thank you for all your compliments! I'm so touched and humbled. And it means a lot to me when you say you'd review all my chapters. Words can't tell you enough how much I appreciate it. Thank you thank you thank you so much. The new chapter is up. Read and enjoy. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2012 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
HI THERE! NEW READER: I love your story OMG------ITS TOO MUCH TO HANDLE...but hey im not complaining its soo full of surprises..I love your writing...its superb..perfect...well written...detailed to a T...
I cant stand her AUNT..she makes me wanna throttle her lol...and I REALLY CANT STAND LUCIUS--he crossed the line that one chapter..First Hurting Dr. Jackson and then forcing himself on Evelyn?? oh i was just waiting for her to kick his tail in the groin and was so happy when she did :)..I love Evelyn shes strong-willed and i love that...
Now that I've finished reading, im paitently waiting on the next chapter...
Love this Story so much,..keep up the good work!
Bree :)
Author's Response: AND HELLO TO YOU TOO NEW READER!!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY TO HAVE YOU ON BOARD!!! WELCOME, WELCOME, and thank you for being a reader. I'm glad you like this story. I'm so touched by your compliments. I'm glad you like the drama the action the characters and all that's between! The new chapter is updated. Read and enjoy. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours. Mwaaaaaah! :*
Date: Sep 25, 2012 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
oh wow we saw Jack in this! I am liking! Great chapter as always! Cannot wait to see where this goes :) keep up the good work hun x
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Date: Sep 23, 2012 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth
You're a great writer! Keep it up :)
Author's Response: Thank you darling. And thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad you like my story. Thanks for being a reader. The new chapter is up. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Sep 21, 2012 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 19: Take Me Back
Oh my. <3
Lovely chapter. Finally we got to know Jack ;) Maybe after seeing him and Rose living their love against it all will make Evelyn think further and try to be more understandable towards Michael...
In the chapter's begin I was willing for Michael to come and save her XD I know it's too much cliché but I couldn't help it x'
Also I want to reply to you by saying that YOU telling me I'm one of your best reviewers really elightened my day! :') You're very welcome dear, for everything! I'm so glad you're here, posting your writings... because I think you're one of the very few people who can actually write GOOD here.
Always ove love love you <3
Author's Response: Hello again Megs! Thank you so much for your kind words. It really makes my heart soar to read all these compliments. Yeah, Dr. Jackson the rescuer, I knew some of you would expect that but what are the circumstance that would bring him barging in to another man's room? Happens only in movies. Not my stories! lol ;) And besides, Evelyn is a strong girl, way ahead her time. I should give her some space to show her true colors. Thank you for another fantastic review. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Sep 17, 2012 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 18: Smooth Criminal
wow, i really don't like Lucius, how dare he beat Michael up! and threaten to kill him, what an asshole, i hope Michael will be okay! It was so nice to hear Evelyn say she loves Michael so Lucius better stay away from them both! I really liked this chapter, more drama seems to be happening and i love it.
great update! Cannot wait to see what happens..
Author's Response: Thank you for another wonderful review darling. I'm so grateful. Update coming up this weekend. See ya with more of Michael and Evelyn drama then. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Sep 17, 2012 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 18: Smooth Criminal
wow, i really don't like Lucius, how dare he beat Michael up! and threaten to kill him, what an asshole, i hope Michael will be okay! It was so nice to hear Evelyn say she loves Michael so Lucius better stay away from them both! I really liked this chapter, more drama seems to be happening and i love it.
great update! Cannot wait to see what happens..
Author's Response: Thank you darling for another review. You wouldn't expect what's to come next. The new chapater is updated. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2012 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 18: Smooth Criminal
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks darling. Update coming up this weekend. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2012 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 18: Smooth Criminal
That fucking son of a bitch! That's not how you win the heart of a lady, Lucius! If I remember correctly,you already let Dr. Jackson fuck you, girl?! :-P What an awesome chapter! I cannot wait for the next one! Finally, you admit your feelings, Evelyn! You can't escape them! Michael can't either! You are in love. How cruel Lucius is...
Author's Response: Whoa!!! Whoa there sister!!! Get a hold of yourself!!! You seem pretty involved with this story!!! Lol And I'm glad you do!!! I know it was an unexpected confession but hey, you can't plan things like this in life. Now it's just a matter of getting the message across to Dr. Jackson. As much as you're excited to read that bit, I'm excited to write it!!! See you with an update this weekend. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Sep 16, 2012 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 18: Smooth Criminal
OMFG.
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O_O Girl you can't leave us this way! OMG I'm thrilled! I really am! It was like I was seeing a movie, especially towards the end of the chapter I had the whole scenary pictured into my head... I-I-I could even hear their voice! YOU DID A GREAT JOB MY DEAR!! I love this story!
I knew from the begin it was Lucius who did that to Michael. He finally showed who he really is, nothing less than Rose's fiancé.
Oh I want these two to be together! Evelyn stop acting like this! ç_ç In the heat of the moment she understood her real feelings. Even if she feels hurt she can't deny her love for him! AAAAAAAAAA
Ok ok now I need to calm down! A new chapter very soon would help!
Kisses honey!! <33
Author's Response: Aww Megs!!! I've got to tell you you're one of THE BEST reviewers I've ever had aboard this site!!! Thank you, thank you so much for these heartfelt reviews. You have no idea how happy it makes me feel that the projection of my mental image has been so clearly captured by you with my writing. This is one of the best compliment I could have recieved for my writing and I'm so very grateful for all your kind words. And yeah, that was an unexpected confession for Evelyn but you can't really plan these things in life now, can you? They'll be together soon. Just keep waiting for more updates!!! New chapter coming up this weekend. Hasta la vista, amigo. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! Mwaaaaaaah........!
Date: Sep 16, 2012 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 18: Smooth Criminal
YAAAOW!
I KNEW IT WAS THAT BITCH ASS BASTARD, oh my God, PLEASE update soon, my Lord.... I honestly think thatnI'd rather have you write a story based on Titanic than anyone else that I know, my God, I love this.... Please let there be more interaction between Michael and Evelyn soo! EEEP!
And I dont know why she was trippin because of what he said, she was kinda over reacting to me, but other wise, I love it! Oh, please update soon, girl!
Author's Response: Awwww....... thanks darling! I'm really touched! And as far as overreaction is concerned, well, she was having a bad day you know. Drama with Dr. Jackson, more drama with Beatrice, even more drama with Dr. Jackson, there's a limit your heart could take right. And when you skip that boundary, you don't know what you do or what comes out of your mouth. You just want to let it all out and cry, cry, cry. Well... at least most of the time. Thanks for another fab review. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2012 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 17: Girl Don't Take Your Love From Me
Fabulous update, as usual! And what a touching title, darling!!
I’m gunna have to agree with MichaelsBillieJean1981 here; I think Evelyn is being a bit too hostile. Dr Jackson was finally starting to rlly open up to her about his wife and such and now she keeps pushing him away..
I know she’s only trying to do the right thing but can’t they like meet up in secret or something? XD No one has to find out….She could sneak inside his suite at night and return to her room early, I dunno .LOL
They both obviously want it. There’s something going on between them that’ll keep drawing ‘em to each other and it’s useless to even fight it
I do love how Dr Jackson’s being all sly and suave and giving her a hard time. Ooh, he’s gunna drive her insane with lust and want isn’t he XD He knows she wants it just as much as she does
And if he keeps seing her scars eventually he's just bound to find out the truth about Evelyn & Carmella, isn't he?
Oh man;, I’m scared now after you said that about Lucius. I should’ve known he wouldn’t wear the angelic mask forever Smh. I had a feeling things werent gunna end well between them!
I wonder what’s gunna happen in the bar tonight. Will Evelyn keep up with the Burlesque-thing or is she just gunna erase Dr Jackson from her life forever? Aaah, I'm just dying to find out!!
Darling, you know I wish I could make it longer but I don’t have alotta time tonight. Just wanted to leave you a comment and tell you how much I enjoyed the read anyway ;D
You’re brilliant girl and I’m wishing, hoping, begging for another fabulous installment soon?!?!?!
Thnx, Ash ;^)
Author's Response: I AM Soooooooo Sorry for this delayed reply. But I was kind of out of these days. Lol. The good news is that THERE'S A NEW UPDATE!!! Boy, are you gonna love it or what. Yeah, I know it's wrong for Evelyn to keep pushing him away but people don't always do the right thing, do they? Imperfections are what that keeps the world running. And if you were in her shoes and just found out that you were in love with a suicidal man still grieving for his dead wife, what would you do. There aren't really any happy endings in life. It's just a matter of survival. I hope you'll like the new chapter as much as you've enjoyed reading the rest of the story. I'm so happy that I have an audience as loyal as connected as you are. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours.
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2012 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 17: Girl Don't Take Your Love From Me
I can't wait for the next chapter! He loves her! That is crystal clear! Evelyn, don't be so hostile. He's letting you in, deeper than he wants to. Open up to Dr. Jackson! You're such a gifted writer! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for another wonderful review. You girls just keep making my life worth living! New chapter updated. Happy reading and stay tuned for more! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours.
Date: Sep 10, 2012 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 17: Girl Don't Take Your Love From Me
Oh my gosh i just love Michael in this, my heart fluttered for them when he checked her out to see if she was okay, they seem to be getting closer and closer each time they meet, i love it! Please update soon. x
Author's Response: Ooooooooh, which is to say you like the personality I've created for Michael in this??? o.O Girl, I'm flattered. You guys make my life interesting. New chapter is up. Waiting to hear your opinion. Just a hint. The progress might scare. Happy reading. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!