Date: Jul 21, 2012 07:36 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥
Wowzers. Michael is like Jekyll and Hyde. Hot one minute, then cold the next. One thing is for sure. He is NOT letting go of Nita. He's marked his territory and that won't be the last time. I'm almost scared to think what would happen if she went on a date with another man. Michael is controlling as hell. I'm so intrigued and can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Hehe Right girlfriend! :) You have understood Mike well :P Well lets wait and see, whats scribed in her fate.... dont worry we all gonna watch the dramas and romances and eye-brows raising twist I'm planning for them ;) Hope you will like them <3 Thanks a lot kat! Working on the update hun! My internet connection havent been working properly recently and its getting my nerves. I'll fix it today though <3
Date: Jul 21, 2012 07:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
Damn that was good. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! That means so much to hear from a new reader :) And a 'HI' :P <3
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, Megan! That means so much to hear from a new reader :) And a 'HI' :P <3
Date: Jul 18, 2012 08:02 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
You just write and put things into detail and AHHH you need to publish books!! You have a REAL talent
Author's Response:
Aw, Thank YOU! Gosh girl PUBLISH?? Thats so sweeeeeeet of you!! Thanks so much hun, Really means a lot to me :)
Date: Jul 18, 2012 02:15 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
FInally got to read the mindblowing chapterrrr!!!
I love every bit of this story and your wide note, really make some sense. I understand your feelings... Dont worry. I'm certainly not a girl who read a story just for adult scenes. You have no idea how your writing captures your readers. Trust me, MikesDoggoneGal :) This story really got very much attention, and I damn sure its going to be successful... have you realized that you got almost 40 above reviews for 4 chapters??? thats in my experience is UNBELIEVABLE!! And a healthy time. Btw, I got a question... Your research... Do you really think Mike hated all females?? I'm just curious... how so?? :D
Author's Response:
AW, ELLAH!!! :)
Thanks a lot for understanding hun... I'm not an adult author at first place :P Yeah girl, I do realize... above 40 reviews. I'm so THANKFUL for my readers and reviewers. :) No, I didnt mean it that way. I was just saying about every normal human's feelings. I dont think Mike hated all females but the pain is still there right? I mean he had built walls around himself, strongly. If you notice something about Michael during OTW & Thriller Era, you could see a joyous cheerful and easy young man but when you see Mike during captain eo and after that, you could feel a constant expression of seriousness and alertness shading his face. May be thats what I'm seeing... lol! But he sure felt himself vulnerable and we all know that. Just imagine the pain of losing someone emotionally when he was seriously in Love with that someone. Thanks a lot for reviewing Ellah. Your review made my day!!! :P xx
Date: Jul 17, 2012 09:03 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
GREJTGFEWJKGHEWTGLKRLKEH LEWRGFHESLK TKJEWSDHFEWS. UPDATE RIGHT NOW
OMG WHO HAVE YOU BEEN HAVING SEX WITH?!?! BECAUSE THAT WAS JUST TRULY AMAZING!!!!!
You're now my new favorite author!
Author's Response:
Thank YOU!!! I'm currently working on the update :) Oh My, My!! Is that question is supposed to ask me?! *Blushes* I'm actually inexperienced n needless to say I'm a virgin :P I had have to go through a lot of books for this chapters you know, but as I told this is not only going to be a story only about sex it just have to initiate this way :). Anyway Thanks for your comment... Aw, A special Thanks hun! <3 xx
Date: Jul 17, 2012 07:08 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
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She brought back her hands to herself. "But, why? Why me?" her words were barely audible as her astonished eyes welled-up. "Why did you choose me? Do I look like that kind of girl? A girl that have sex for money?" her voice suddenly took high octave. "You can get bunch of them in streets Michael! Why the hell am I into this? Why the hell its me?"
He closed the distance between them. His features were still soft and controlled. "Because I trust you, Nita. Only you."
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AWESOME!!
I love how prfectly you bring out the characters feelings. Nita is just beind a normal girl who respects her diginty. My kind of girl :) And the way MICHAEL answers i bet every girl would melt. Because he rarely trust people... you're so talentd!! :P I like the way you bring out the characters and blend them to reality. And the way your short clipped lines making the necessary point!!! Keep up the good work... Because i'm always here to encourage!!! :))))
Author's Response:
GOD NANCY THANKS SO MUCH!! I cant say it enough :) Yeah right! Nita is my kind of girl too :P Aw, Thanks again pyt!! Really Appreciate it. So glad and encouraging to hear that :)))) You made my day!!!! <3 xx
Date: Jul 17, 2012 02:14 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
WOWWW. GIRLL.
This was... INCREDIBLE! Like, do you even know how talented you are?!!?! asdfghjkl xD
I love how nothing is rushed, the amount of detail about what is going on and the emotion you put in is mind blowing. I am so glad you kept this story. Evidently, so many people like it!! ;D
I cannot wait to see how the relationship develops between the two characters!! ^_^
Update required ;D
And by the way I just followed you on Twitter; my name is SabrinaMjjlove on there :D
Much love! <3
Author's Response:
AWWW SABRINA!! Thats so flattering :) THANK YOU, THANK YOU, AND THANK YOU! *Bows* Do you even know how sweet you are?! :P
I'm planning it all and kind of have imaginary vision of their relationship processing...mmm. Hope you will like it :') Working on the update. *_*
Thats great! Thanks... Will follow back ;) Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Jul 17, 2012 12:20 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
God Nita is soooo LUCKY! :PP Girl listen to me for a second, I love this story with every ounce of me. I dont actually read all stories... and If i review on it, it means its the best. Now I'm telling you, this is the BEST! Dont ever try to delete this again! God I cant miss this story! Your information is brilliant! So dont ever think about giving for some 'people' I totally understand! And I hate that kind of people!!!! Please work on your next update loL! I want it asappppp.....:)
Author's Response:
Hehe ikr? I envy her :P GOSH!!! Gal that was so sweet of you!! You are so sweet..... But I definitely dont agree that this is the best! I know! But thats so encouraging thanks! I totally understand and agree with you... and thanks for taking your time to keep me sane lol! I'm working on the next update <3 xx
Date: Jul 17, 2012 12:13 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
That was HOTTT!!! I love this story girllll!! Its very capturing and more real..... And about what you said, things like those discourages happens to lot of people here out of others jealous but dont be bothered by that! I LOVE this story and I'm not finding it offending in any way!!!!! Please Update ssooooon!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Hey gal!! :) Thanks a lot! Glad ya' think so... <3 AW, Your words are like medicine!!! Thank you SO much for your concern hun!! <3 xx
Date: Jul 16, 2012 03:32 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
Wow.. Michael sure has a way of gettin what he wants. It's wry intriguing and sexy. But I really like this story. I find it very interesting and for the most part I agree with what you said. I definitely think Michael was having a fair share of sex during the Bad era. But.. I don't think he'dbe hurt enough to fear the entire female race/gender because he had his heartbroken. If anything, I think it may have made him more cautious and make him want to be more in control of the relationship. Maybe not fall as freely as he once did. But he was such a lovable man and full of love, I have no doubt in my mind that he wouldn't love or let himself fall in love again. Shoot, Michael was love personified. But this is an excellent story so far.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat!! :) Thanks so much :) Really appreciate it! Mmm... I see your point. But I meant it for a short time. You know you should have heard about girls who becomes man-hater after their horrible past, just like Nita. And guys are not exception in that case right? They do get crushed and hate every women for 'some time'. Because the hatred wont last longer, I guess. And exactly, you are right! He had became cautious! And made himself an untouchable figure. And yes, if what we are hearing are true, he had fell in love with Lisa Marie Presley later, but how immune he had became towards opposite sex is undeniable. I AGREE!! :) HE WAS A MAN MADE OF LOVE AND I DO BELIEVE HE WAS LOVE PERSONIFIED! :) After all, that guy made us to fall in love with love right? :D Thanks for sharing your thoughts and as always your encouraging sweet words :) Thanks again pyt! <3 xx
Date: Jul 16, 2012 12:35 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
Great update girl!
I was dying for the next part!! Very hot
Hope to read some MOre soon!
Thanks again for sharing your stories
Author's Response:
Aw, Thanks a lot chicka! :) I'll try to update ASAP <3 I finally finished all functions and got some time but I'm tired! haha :P Thanks again pyt! <3 xx
Date: Jul 16, 2012 11:28 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
Hi dear!
I want you to know that I have been reading this perfect story since the very beginning and I am so in love with it.Because it reflects the human character and situations that happen nowadays.
You are doing a G.R.E.A.T job on this.
But,um...I have read the side not and quite a little didn't understand what you meant when you wrote :
,,And we all know Michael screwed 'a lot' during BAD tour. "
Will you please explain to me?I didn't find ANYTHING OFFENSIVE on this story.At.All.
NOT.ONE.BIT.
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Author's Response:
Hello there, Alina :)
Thanks for taking your time and reading it.. and most importantly for kindly reviewing :) I really appreciate that!
LOL! I kind of started to read lot of Michael's life during this critical time of his life. You know, at the age of 27 I dont think Michael was too innocent like he was portrayed. He had experienced love, broken from a serious relationship, faced emotional conflicts and the girl he was in love with was Diana Ross, he definitely should have experienced more than love from a sexual-relationship-oriented women like Diana. His bodyguards said in a interview that he screwed random girls during BAD Tour. And Frank Dileo know that!!! I dont know if he was having an affair with Tatiana, but though if he had, according to human psychology; he should have just lusted for her. And no offense, but I also read that Mike fired Tatiana, because he heard that she used to sleep with lot of men in her past. If a guy fall in love with a girl, does he really care about her past? Certainly Not. I guess Michael was scared that she might transform any disease she had to him. He had became quit vulnerable after what happened to him earlier by a girl. So since its a girl, any sensitive human would create a hatered within himself to hate all the female that exists. Just like a child, unexpectedly burns his finger after trying to touch the fire innocently and the child never intends to do that again for a long time. Hope I explained better :) Though sorry it was boring... but this is what my research :) LOL! Thank you so much again pyt!
<3 xx
Date: Jul 16, 2012 11:04 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
I love this story! Please update soon :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :) I'll try to update ASAP <3 xx
Date: Jul 16, 2012 10:38 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
Great chapter. :). And I'm pretty sure I'm following you on twitter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks A Lot Autumn :) Woww... Thats great! 'll follow you back <3 xx
Date: Jul 14, 2012 12:21 am Title: ♥ Chapter 3: Midnight Storms ♥
This is so good please continue? :)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot Sammy :) I'll definitely continue but my tight schedule wont let me to lol! <333