[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2012 08:31 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥
I love how u rewritten the chapters and changed things around. I still like it either way its much better tho. I love ur story its beautiful,mindblowing and amazing. That right there ain't an lie its the Gods honest truth. Another Wonderful Beautiful chapter dear.
Author's Response:
THANK SO MUCH!!!! That's so Sweet of you, Megan! Love ya' girl... Thanks again pyt :) <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2012 07:40 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Sorry that i hadn't read ur story lately. I been to trying to keep up with everyone updates its hard i be catch up soon. Great chapter
Author's Response:
Girl That's fine I'm SO glad that you decided to read it now :) Thanks a lot hon, it really means a lot to me. <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2012 04:26 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
"If you are in Nita's shoes, what would you do?"
Michael is using Nita and with a sole purpose: to make Diana jealous. Michael did not move on ... He still has feelings for Diana ... or he still thinks he has but has no more ...
Maybe I could even accept the invitation but then I would say "Okay. Done. Diana saw that you have a girlfriend but we both know that's a lie. Hopefully you're better now. Consider it a payment for the wonderful nights of sex you gave me. Now leave me alone!"
I would treat him coldly. Michael would realize who he really likes and he did wrong with Nita.
Thank u!I love this story!
Author's Response:
Hi Dri :) I can assure you that you are in right mind! :) I know I know thats what a girl think when she knows that she being used. And this is why I think I should revamp Nita's character.HAHA!!! Girl you really cracked me up at this,"Okay. Done. Diana saw that you have a girlfriend but we both know that's a lie. Hopefully you're better now. Consider it a payment for the wonderful nights of sex you gave me. Now leave me alone!" LOL!! Just imagine Michael's expression after hearing this, I'm sure it would be damn cute lol! Thanks for your review, really lit-up my face with laughter :P <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 10:11 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
I hate to say it Michael, but your having sex with a girl you barely know, crying over your ex, and wants to go to a party to prove your not in love with her anymore. As for right now Diana still has power over you. I believe you can get rid of the bitch though, if you pay attention to the girl in front of you.
I think Nita should go. She would only beat herself up and think about Michael if she doesn't.
I cant wait till this lil gathering, I hope Michael doesnt act up! But then again, I hope he does. Diana is such a damn maneater.
Author's Response:
You're Right Joy... :) Lets wait and see. There's whole big drama waiting for us in the next chapter. Mike might think he is over her but... we will see ;) You made a good point about Nita. If she had denied, she would probably end up in blaming herself. Haha, You will see soon Joy... the drama slowly unfold. Haha like ur comment about Diana. Thanks for lovely review hun. <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 09:05 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
when I logged in and saw it is updated I was jumping lol! And this was an intense chapter... Cant wait to see what you have planned for them :) Nita is so sweet and so innocent. My type of girl. I love her already <3 I would have made Michael to leave me haha but who knows... if he really come and stand and say these things i might fall in love with him ;)
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks A lot Nancy! You are wonderful :) Nita is my type of girl too. I guess thats how most normal girls would be :P Haha.. Point! No girl in this universe can resist him! I copletely agree with you. Thanks a lot Nancy. Stay tuned. <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 09:00 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
Lovely Chapter :) if I were Nita... I would have never even started it :P I know i'M LYING. Seriously if Mike talk like that and do things like that... god is there any girl here who would fall for him?????
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Ellah :) Haha, girl u're funny! :P Right... I agree it with all my heart lol! <3 xx
Date: Aug 05, 2012 01:45 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
Oh I love this...if I was Nita I would jus go for dat 1 party then try to end it...TRY ! Haha .
Author's Response:
Mmm... Good Decision Allison! Haha... Try??! I understand girlfriend :P Thanks a lot for your lovely review hun... Means a lot! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 09:33 am Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
So sad... Poor Mike. Sharing his personal life would intrigue any girl and Nita is not the only one who would agree to it. I like the way you capture feelings in such a way... within two or three lines. BTW, If I'm Nita I would go on with it. After all, if he opened up to me like that I would definitely go for it :)
Author's Response:
Yeah girl... *Sighs!* Right. We all know he barely said anything about his personal life. He valued his privacy more than any of us. And hearing him open up like that... even a stony heart would melt. Thanks so much hun. That means so much to me! More to come... Stay tuned! <3 xx
Date: Aug 05, 2012 08:26 am Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
Wow.. This chapter was intense. Well, even though the affair they have is kinda starting off wrong because it began on the basis of sex, I can actually see at some point Michael develop real feelings for Nita. I still think he's too broken right now but once he heals, they could potentially have something. It's obvious that he trusts we because he just told her a very big part of his life that very few people know. I have no comments on Diana. We all know she used Michael to get her rocks off. Unless you are a rich white man, or just a rich man period, Diana won't have anything to do with you. That woman was forever on the come up. Smh. Michael was too good for her. But as far as what Nita should do, I think she should go with him. Get herself all pretty and dolled up, and she should go with Michael and be his girl for the night. We all know he wants to save face, but hey, this might be good for Nita too. Plus it would be funny to see that hag Diane jealous. Nita is younger, prettier, and she would have Mike on her arm and his attention. Spuds like some goodness to me. Lol
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! :) Thanks A lot! Girl you are easily structuring the story. Genius :) Diana...? God I have no idea what to say about her! Only god knows what happened b/w them. I have always wondered why Michael had fallen to her out of all girls in this world LOL! Seriously?! What he found in her? Must have been her warmness and sweetness and her one rare good habit of loving children... Yes Diana was a selfish. She was always after rich men. Especially the white one. Have no idea why!? SMDH :( But I do think that she must have regreted for turning Michael down. Nita is going to do just what you wish :) Haha yeah... lots of Drama and Funny scenes will be in next chapter. I'll try to update soon. Thanks again hun :D <3 xx Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2012 07:09 am Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
If it was me in Nita's shoes I'd probably end it tbh. But then again, I'm not Nta so. Great chapter, as per usual.
Author's Response:
You End it Autumn?! Mmm... Thats understandable. But I really doubt that haha... kidding :P Yeah right we are not really Nita so thats not a problem. I asked he question just for fun lol! And I got so many different answers. Interesting. Thanks so much hun... :) Really means a lot <3 xx
Date: Aug 01, 2012 05:22 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥
If u dnt update there's gonna be problems...haha plz continue with this story I LOVE THIS !
Author's Response:
Ah Sorry, Sorry Allison... I can understand. This is really very late... but it had been hard for me find time lastly. I'm working on the update right now. Will be up soon :) Thanks a lot hun <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2012 05:11 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥
Woowww!! Michael on your door step!!! you certainly know how to keep your readers in a desperate need for an update :P! I freggin' love this story plzzzzz update!! I cant wait to know where they are going tomorrow :))))
Author's Response:
Hehe IKR??? :P Thanks a lot Ellah :) Really means a lot to me hun... <3 I guess you gotta wait to know that lol :D Stay Tuned, next update is almost ready... hope you will like it. xx
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2012 11:50 am Title: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥
omg loved it cant wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank You So much Delena :) An update will be up soon <3
Date: Jul 21, 2012 10:18 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥
Whoa,I'm scared FOR her! I love this!
Author's Response:
She must be scared as well... lets see what future had decided for her :) Thank You!!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2012 10:04 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
LOVED IT WANT MORE :)
Author's Response:
Thanks A Lot Delena :) Working on it! <3