[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 11:54 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
I just love this story!! Every bit of it! Every line, Every chapter, everything! Diana... smh! that lady needs to have some sense. She's married now for heaven's sake! I just told u girl i love this story and i believe it. u describe in a way nobody did trust me. i can understand he might not be the same michael we are seeing in tv. :)
Author's Response:
Hiya! Thanks so much girl! You are right! Wow everybody is mad at Diana! :P Oh really *Blushes* Thanks so much! Readers like U are keep me going <3 Yes! Absolutely! Who we see in TV is not at all him, i could say that! Especially a very private guy like Michael. I heard that he would rehearse his answers for the questions he would be asked and rehearse for the interview as well. HE hated interviews because he couldnt be himself. In all his interviews, he would always have shutter on his face, if you look at him and his answers close. I mean people should realize that every guy, girl as well have a different, wild side.. Trust me! He isnt this innocent man-child always. He was a testosterone charged guy after all :P Love you Michael! That's what brought me to write FF's. Thanks alot DreamingofMichael, I have always loved your penname btw ;)
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 08:11 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Jesus Diana! You are a b*tch! Leave the guy alone! Man, he's not YOUR Man! He's hers.
Damn girl, I'm ventilating here and you are asking whether this story is believable? I'm seriously thinking this must what happened! This story is the best! Go on! Stop discouraging yourself! This is one of the stories that explain Michael's characters in the best way. Now, update soon!
Author's Response:
Hey Mittu! :P Long time no see huh? lol! Haha Diana, Diana, Diana... by anychance if Diana come across this story and read the review, man what would be her face? lol! Ouch, calm down girl... I guess I did mistake in asking you guys that question :P Sorry for ventilating you. GOSH! Thanks A bunch! 'This story is the best?' NO, I know :P You are a sweetie pie <3 Thanks again luv <3 xx
Date: Sep 26, 2012 05:20 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
I love this ...plz update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Allie! :) (Can I call you that?) :P Next update is under work, must be finished soon ;) xx
Date: Sep 26, 2012 12:52 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Hey i'm a French reader living in Paris and I have just made an account so that i can review this chapter!
I like your story so much. I have the feeling that it's going to end like in the song "Dirty Diana".
Looking forward for your new chapter!
Author's Response:
WOW! Annie I'm FLATTERED!!! THANK YOU SO DAMN MUCH!!! Wow, Paris!? You are lucky bum lol! I have always wanted to go to Paris, I'll come soon ;) Girl you are a genius, this scene is Michael's inspiration for the second part of the song. To see his inspiration for the first part, check out Fools Fall In Love 'Prologue' :) Next update will be soon, luv <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 12:28 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Autumn! xx Stay Tuned!
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 07:45 am Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
I would like to see Michael and Nita be together. I feel Michael should tell Diana once and for all that he loves Nita (and inside he truly mans it.) And I do think this story is very believable indeed. Your doing a great job! Please continue :)
Author's Response:
:) Hi mywaymj83 :P You are right, but do you think Michael would stop being this chicken about love and confess it to her...? thats the main problem about most conscious Michael right? Gosh, thats what enlighten me! :D Thanks so much, pyt!!! I really appreciate it. Next update is under work xx
Date: Sep 26, 2012 07:16 am Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Nita should've told that big bug eyed, nappy weave wearing hussy off! I am LIVID at this chapter! I'm angry at Nita for running off because it made her look like a coward. She had no reason to run off cuz none of the shit Diana was saying or implying was true. If I was her, my ass woulda said "I'm sure you know all about bed hopping and things of that nature since you've fucked every man at Motown to get to where you are"! If anybody is the HO it's Diana's skinny ass!!! Smh. I was really hoping Nita would put this chick in her place. As for Michael, he has to be smart! Diana ain't shit. She don't want him but doesn't want anyone else to have him either.. It has to be all about her all the time and if its not she acts like an old jealous hag. Smh. Michael needs to drop her drunk ass off to her room and immediately LEAVE! If he does anything with her, I am done and Nita needs to be completely done with him. Nita has no reason to be played with just because Diana played with his feelings. Nita doesn't deserve this treatment. She's already given the man her virginity.. This is just too much. Poor Nita. Smh! Lastly, it seems like Michael could've almost been falling for Nita.. I sensed something in this chapter and even tho we know Mike is the master manipulator and great actor who can put on the front.. It seems like there may have been some hidden truth in there. Nita actually does treat him like a human being and not Michael Jackson. She doesn't kiss his ass or anything like that. For that reason alone, he could really fall for her. But he will not have that chance if he fucks it up with Diana's tired ass. Ain't this chick married? Smh. Hoes will be hoes!
Author's Response:
KAT! Darling! You are right! Always right! :P Calm down, I'm myself become angry with Diana when I red the chapter lol! Diana is a proof that evil takes human form! Right, she wont have Michael and she wont let anyone to have him as well ! Do you think Michael get a hold of himself and leave her or....??? We'll see. Right, Nita dont deserve this for helping him in way he could never pay her back! Nita is a coward as you may already know. That girl should organize some guts and talk for herself right? Yes, something dangerous had already formed inside them. I think that's what turned on Michael, the way Nita treated him and forgot that he was 'Michael Jackson' but just 'Michael'. Soon the secrets and twists will be unwrapped. And keep an eye on the prequel, their pasts have lots of things to do in their future :D THANK YOU SO MUCH Kat! :) Your review always bring smile to my face. LMAO 'Hoes will be hoes' Right! Next update will be soon, love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2012 08:59 am Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
Jesssssuuuusss Christ! U UPDATED! Good lord u decided to go on with the old plot. Because it is really believable... :) I cant wait to see Dianaaa lol!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Pardon me girl. I was a bit insane and a bit confused :P I can assure you it wont happen again. Thanks a lot... <3 I mean it! This story doesnt even exist without readers like you <3 <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 07:20 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
Girl are u done confusing me now! Lol I glad you have things in order. lol seriously ill take all your changes cause I love uour story.A good plot like this hasnt been done in a while.
I seriously cracked up when Mike told nita to get out so he could open the door. My husband did the same thing to me. I thought the fool was nuts but I still have him, and I cant wait till Nita has Michael.
This dinner party will be off the chain. The boss Ms Ross is going be in attendance!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Sorry Joy, forgive me! Aw, Thanks so much!!! It really means so damn much to me! ;) Haha, wow your husband did that to u? LMAO!!!! Do u mean till Nita will have Michael as her husband??? Boy, I think you should wait for a loooong time :D YAY! Diana is the reason for the party and the party is the reason for next chapter. I'm planning to give everything emotion in one chapter, let me see what I can do. :P Thanks again, PYT! Lots of love your way :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 04:36 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
Well, I have not read the chapter yet but I just wanna say I love how this story is written with the theme and all. Very professional and it draws attention. I bet this will be a wonderful chapter (:
Author's Response:
Oh my!!! Girl you are soooo sweet!!! THANKS A LOT... you are very encouraging and I love that attitude in people :) I'm grateful, hon! Thanks won't be enough for u. Love you! :D Next chapter will be up soon <3 <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 03:14 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
I Love this story
Its getting better and better every time I read!!! I often read it again when i get bored. I can't wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapter! TO TELL U THE TRUTH I NEVER LOVED ADULT STORIES BUT THIS IS SOMETHING ELSE! NOT JUST A ADULT STORY IT HAVE SO REAL PLOT WITH MICHAEL'S LIFE AND THATS WHAT MAKING UR REAL! kEEP IT UP <3 <3 <3
Author's Response:
GOSH!!! I'm flattered! Thanks so much girl. I cant say it enough!!! Love you! :P I really appreciate it :) Yeah, I like stories that coincide with Michael's real life. And yes this story itself is inspired by his real life... Stay tuned for the next chapter <3 Lots of love your way!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 02:43 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
HEY i absolutely love this story, i re-read it on MJJ eternal. Definately looking forward to more chapters. Quick question: How do you get your font to look like that instead of arial. :)
Author's Response:
THANKS SO MUCH, Maria! I really appreciate it!!! Oh, Font. I do by Using this in HTML.
Click on 'Edit HTML Source' icon in the botton of your text box, Paste this <p style="font: 11pt/15pt Garamond, Georgia, serif;color:000000;"> before pasting your chapter on the HTML window. But you have to paste this for every paragraph.
Like this: <p style="font: 11pt/15pt Garamond, Georgia, serif;color:000000;"> He blinked. </p>
You have to close it by pasting the </p> in the end of each paragraph.
And also, you need to paste this in between paragraphs to leave some space otherwise the entire chapter would produce as a single paragraph: <p style="font: 11pt/15pt Garamond, Georgia, serif;color:000000;"> </p>
EG:
He blinked.
(Here I pasted the above code to leave some space in between the lines. Or you can produce it as a single paragraph and then you can break it into many paragraphs in the 'Story text' text box)
He blinked.
So this is how this works :) Hope I helped. I dont know if anyone is using this in a much simpler way but this how I do it. If this isn't working or you want more informations please let me know, Maria. :D
Date: Sep 23, 2012 01:21 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
:) Hey Allison!!! Girl Thanks so much! Next update will be soon, I mean it. :P
Date: Sep 23, 2012 12:53 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
Sounds like Nita will have the eye of many men that night! I can't wait to see what happens. And he basically concocted a whole story about him and Nita to Karen huh? Wow.. Interesting. I can't help but notice that him and Nita have a certain chemistry that lasts outside the bedroom as well. I've said it before but I really think once be heals from the heartbreak from that hag Diane, he really could fall for Nita. She's pretty, smart, feisty.. Everything he needs in a woman. I just hope she won't get hurt. I know Michael is gonna do everything in his power at this party to make Diana jealous and I don't want Nita to just be a pawn in him doing that. And if Nita feels disrespected, she needs to speak up for herself immediately! To whomever it is.
Author's Response:
Kat!!! :P :P Haha, you are right, Karen is been mercilessly fooled by her boss lol! You think? Well, we will see where they are going to end up! You have almost predicted a scene in next chapter lol! Thanks a lot girlfriend. It really means so much to me!!! Love ya' girl! I hope you checked out 'Fools Fall In Love' its prequel. Though its about different characters, this story later have a lot of continuation to that story. So please read it and let me know what you are thinking. And stay tuned! :P Lots of Love! <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2012 09:32 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
If i was in riya shoes i would kick his ass regardless if he gave good sex or not. Lol plus i couldn't handle michael sexiness like riya can heehee. This chapter is so good. Continue when u get the chance.
Author's Response:
Haha!!! Ikr?! Thanks so much... I'm working on the update. And meanwhile I have to update its prequel... :) Have an eye for it, Megan. Thanks again :)