Date: Oct 01, 2012 11:08 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
this story is slowly becoming my favorite. i love it so far. hope you update soon, love :) <3
Author's Response:
Hi Valeria :) Welcome to Michael and Nita's world :P Really?! Thats so sweet of u... Thanks a lot for your lovely review luv :) Update is under work. Lots of love your way! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 08:26 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
O-H M-A-N! Michael you gave in? I hate you! :P of course I can't hate him but what he did still confuses me!!!! Why would he be like that with Diana? get a hold of yourself already!!!! I love this story to death! i love how it moves without any rush, making every detail perfect!!! You Go girl!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Mitu :) LMAO! Right we could never hate that guy! I agree :P Thanks a looooot Mittu... love you girl!! Thanks girl :P <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 08:02 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
LOVED IT! Michael needs to know the worth of Nita. She needs to ignore him to make him to admit his feelings!!! thank you for giving us this story! Its been a long time to see a hooking up story like this!!! :PPPP
Author's Response:
Hey girl :) Thanks a lot!!! That's right, Nita deserves some respect! Michael needs to learn his lesson... You will soon see how :P Gosh Thanks so damn much!!! I've been receiving flattering reviews today... Yupiee lucky day ;) <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 07:54 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
Great Job sweetheart!! Really this story mesmerize me that I have to remember that this is a story... you make it sound SO real! Esp. The Dirty Diana Part!
Author's Response:
Geez Ellah! :) Thanks so much!!!! <3 This lightens my mood! Thanks a lot, I mean it!! LOL! I'm so glad that you liked 'Dirty Diana' part :P Lots of Love!! :D
Date: Oct 01, 2012 05:24 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
It says it is 9 chapters but only 8 is showing for me...ohhhh man. I was ready to get my read on.
Author's Response:
Ah Man Really? Sorry Joy! Do you want me to mail u the chapter hun? <3
Date: Oct 01, 2012 04:23 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
Yes I knew how it would end up! I'm still a little bit disappointed by Nita behavior, i wish she was stronger and didnt cry in front of Diana and obviously didnt gave in to Michael that easily. But she is so stubborn that she probably not going to forgive him anytime soon.
Love this chapter! So eager for the next chapters!
Author's Response:
Hey Annie! :) Wow! You knew? :P Yes she should have but she's a coward lol! Yeah girl but Michael deserve it for what he had done! You are right! ;) Thanks sooo much Annie! It really means a lot to me! Next update is under work but let me have my tea now lol! Lots of Love <3 xx
Date: Oct 01, 2012 02:12 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
Good job....update soon plz.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot hun!!! :) Next update will be soon <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 01:19 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
Oh wow, I loved this chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey Autumn, long time no see? :P Anyway Thanks so much luv <3 Glad to know that :D xx
Date: Oct 01, 2012 11:39 am Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
love it!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Nellan :) Seeing you after long time I guess :P <3 xx
Date: Oct 01, 2012 10:46 am Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
Excuse the typos, typing from this iPhone can be irritating at times. Lol
Author's Response:
LOL! Typos always happens! Thats Okay, girl! Wow I got an iphone too... but mostly I don't use Internet in it. You know, it will be mind-numbing :P
Date: Oct 01, 2012 10:43 am Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
Wow... Michael is a coward. Although I'm glad he fought that trifling ass hag off him, he's a coward because he doesn't wanna admit the inevitable. He is starting to fall in love with Nita but his conscious wont let him admit it. She feels it too but I'm not gonna fault her for not saying it because Michael needs to be a damn man and fess up. I hate that her feelings are hurt and I think she should make him suffer. But he's gonna suffer a cruel punishment I think. He's falling in love when he doesn't want to, when he's not expecting it. Michael is a control freak so the fact that this is somethin he came control, is really bittersweet. Nita basically holds the cards now.. She can either play them or pass them. Michael needs to do everything in his power to make things right. He has treated her poorly all because of how that trifling old HO treated him. And that's not right! I think Nita should be away from him for awhile and see how he does with that. Without her presence and comfort, Michael will surely suffer. He wil realize then exactly how much she means to him. He's falling in love again whether he wants to admit it or not. Nita is special and not like other girls. He's gonna have to lose her in order to really see and admit that.
Author's Response:
KAT! There U are :P Haha Right! Michael is a coward around Diana! Thats right his much consious mind wont let him to fall again but Love is magical... it won't come after proclaiming 'I'm comming' ;) That's what happening in Michael's case... Do you think he won't chicken out atleast this time? Or he would pat his chest and say 'Be a man' and go for it. Girl, I love how you predict whatever I plan for the story :P Dont worry Mike's gonna suffer A LOT! Nita's is going to continue her 'Silent' treatment on him. Yes, Nita have all the power in world in her hand now. Michael needs to learn his lesson for making her poor soul to suffer all this time though she didn't do anything that would hurt him even an ounce. Remember girlfriend 'Ho's will be ho's' XD Yes, keep your eye on Michael, he'll realize the worth of her only when she distances herself from him! I know, but its Michael Freggin' Jackson, the one that escapes from woman who wants relationship. Only her absence can make his feelings towards her stronger. I have something in my head for them but I would just have to let the story picture out itself. I will start working on the next chapter soon... cant find the time to work, school is killing me :/ Thank you hon :) I appreciate your love and support, Always! Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2012 08:01 am Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
Wow, just wow! I can't believe Michael would fall for Diana's trap again. But at the same time i'm glad he got himself together before anything else happened :) (But the way I liked the Dirty Diana part ) That was way cool! Anyway I hope they can try and take things slow and easy and hopefully build up to a true long lasting relationship. Great job Two thumbs up!
Author's Response:
Hey ya' girl! :) Lol! Yes, its a shock that he did. You know first love is first love ;) Yeah right! At least then, he gathereed his senses right :P Aw, hon Thanks so much!!! XD I have been having 'Dirty Diana' for a long time in mind and built up this scene. So glad to know that U like this! I really appreciate it! Mmm... I guess so. I don't think Michael could chicken out of his feelings this time... but hey we can't be sure, this is Michael who we are talking about. The one that run away to escape from any kind of 'Relationships' lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing, all this time! Love ya'! :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 03:11 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Nita.... poor girl. Diana, if u before me right now i would give that drunk ass face a punch! please michael dont do anything stupid. I'm scared nita wont have anything to do with you after that! leave the heifer and get back to your girl michael!!!I like how you give humor with the sensitive story that's adorable and unique! i like Nita's caharacter! the perfect girl michael searched all his life; feisty, smart, educated, beautiful, hating make-ups and kinds of girly things! and i can believe it that he would fall for her.
For the Author! Girl I WILL KILL YOU! Yes, this story is believable... i mean whenever michael talks i seriously feel like michael talking. that's very important in a fan fic. his persona. and if you think about chanding the story or deleting it, I mean it I WILL KILL YOU LOL!
Author's Response:
Hey Nancy! You are reviewing after a long time right? :p Haha you are right! All of You guys are pissed off Diana and ready to break her face! LOL! You are right! Right when she gets to know about him, she will close his chapter in her life. Nita might be a coward but not a girl that would give execuses, she is a stuborn! She do what her mind orders her to do. Thanks so much Nancy! That really means a lot to me :) OMG! Right when the second I saw the 'For the Author' my heart stopped at 'I WILL KILL YOU' :P Thanks girl. lol *blushes* dont worry I wont do anything stupid. Not this time :D Wow! that's the best review! I'm describing his persona. No no, I won't do it. :) Thanks again Pyt! xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 05:57 am Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
I would be really surprised if Michael doesnt sleep with Diana. This is very believable. Its like in his song dirty diana, hes in so much pain. He doesnt want to sleep with Diana he wants to be faithful, but he can't. He isn't strong enough yet.
I'm proud of Nita. She held her own against Mrs.Ross. Diana had to pull out the big guns to insult her. Diana is a mature strong woman who knows what she's doing,Nita isnt mentally prepared to sparr with her yet.
I do think Nita will still stick around and stay with Michael, even if she feels like she shouldnt. Michael wont let her leave, he can almost make her do anything. He's the Diana in that relationship for now, the difference is I think over time Nita can reach his heart.
Awesome update
Author's Response:
Hey Joy! :) LOL! Me too! That guy is insanely in love with that hag! Well what can I say?! Thanks so much Joy, 'This is very believable' that one line alone bright up my mood. Thats what I'm trying to get :P As for Michael, we'll see ;)
Yes, you are right! I'm very proud of her as well! :) For the first time, she had brought out some words from her mouth :) Diana... she gonna get it... soon!!! You think? We'll see. You are right about that!
Thanks so much Joy! You always leave honest comments and that's what I love about you! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 11:57 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Oh I forgot to tell :L, the way Nita forgot who he was and what he was while speaking just show the meaning of the entire story!!! he should have fell for her already knowing that she is unique And UPDATE!
Author's Response:
Haha! Yeah, that's alone shows her entire persona right? Fall for her already! Next update will be soon luv <3 xx