[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 11:47 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
Good Lord Nita! Finally you are talking for yourself... Keep that attitude girl. Mike is gonna come beggin' to ya! :PPP Really LOVED this chapter! What a turn!!! Michael realizing his feelings for Nita and O-Bee part is really well written, as if it's real truth behind him! Keep it up girl! Congrats in the reviewss... but you totally deserve it and more... Your most welcome! I'll be here to review at each chapter! So dont worry! And Good luck for the exams
<3 Nancy.
Author's Response:
Hey Nancy! :) Aw, Right! Nita needs to keep some attitude, atleast within Micheal's presence... :P Haha! Michael Jackson is going to come begging to her? We'll see girl... :P Thanks a lot XD Hey special thanks for appreciating 'O-Bee' s part because I thought most of you guys don't like it. Aw, how sweet of you! THANKS!!! Exams, *Sighs* finally over... Thank goodness and I did well than I thought :D Lots of love! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 11:38 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
I just read your story and im in love with it. I cant wait to read more. Hope you update soon :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Ida :) That's really nice of you to choosing to read this story :D I appreciate it! Next update is under work <3
Date: Oct 08, 2012 09:50 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
I love your story! It's great! Can't wait for more! Good luck with your exam!
Author's Response:
Thanks Olivica :) New reviewers will be added on the description as well :D Every one of you is important for me <3 Lots of love xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 07:44 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Yes please mail it to me!!! I miss my fav new story! Only 8 chapters is still showing up, but the title says 9.
Author's Response:
Hey Joy! I just mailed to you girl through the webiste... :) Sorry for the late mailing though! My irritating exams came in-between, and I didnt see your review untill now. Did you let the mod know about your problem? Or else I try to contact her XD Love, xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 07:18 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
I really loved this chapter. :3
Author's Response:
Hiya!!! :) Thanks girl :D It really means a lot to know that you are still reading it <3 Lots of love xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 06:05 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
Hey babe!I'm fine!Just a bit busy. I'm here now and loving this story!Thanks!
Like I said...You're doing a GREAT job!
Well...I think Mike will fight this feeling. He wont admit it!
It will be interesting seeing Nita and Mike playing the game "idontgiveadamnaboutyou" and pretending they dont love each other!|o|
OMG...this would be fun!
Mike getting jealous...it would be great too!hahaha
Anyway... keep going girl!You're an amazing writer!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Dri :) That's okay baby, I understand! Thanks so much, your words means a lot to me... always! :D
You are right about Michael! He's this big superstar who's very consious about relationships and how it would affect his female fans! :P Seriously Mike, this is why you haven't married for almost 34 years?
Hehe Right! I think its Nita who's going to play that now, Mike's time is up! He 'have' to go behind her when she don't even acknowledges him, if you had ask me, I would say He totally DESERVE it. Enjoy it Mike lol!
Yes, Michael needs to know how important Nita is. And no man realize their girl's importance unless there's another guy, interested in them. Haha you guys better be up to HUGE dramas LOL! :D Hope you will like it.
Thanks so much Chicka :) You are amazing! Your welcome <3 Lots of Love, xx.
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 04:00 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
I was reading the two last chapters.
You have done a wonderful job!When you said you would re-write the story I thought..."No. It cant be better than that..."
But I was wrong...so wrong!You're an amazing writer!This story is one the best of this forum in my opinion.
I loved each chapter!It's so well written!Michael (finally) is realizing who he really loves. NITA!:)
But I think Michael must work very hard to get her heart.
Thank you very much for such great story!Congrats!
Dri
Author's Response:
Hey DRI!!! :) Girl I MISSED you! How are you? Gosh Thanks A Lot! I'm so glad that you read it. LOL! Sorry for the re-writing confusions, yet Thanks for bearing with me :)
Wow! Girl thats so sweet of you <3 Yes, Michael's finally letting his heart to speak... but here is the main problem, what he would do? Do you think he would ignore his jumbling mind and listen to his heart? Mmm you are right! Michael needs to work VERY hard to get back Nita... Thanks hon :D You are a sweetheart! Love you <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 02:26 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Omggggg giirrrl I'm so behind on this story >.<
Ahhhhhh, I wish I had a day off especially so I can catch up to this because it's really one of the best stories I've read, thats why its in my favourites ;)
But girl, once I catch up I'll review for sure. I'm just so tied down with college and other stuff, it's gotten in the way of my reading and I hate it. :S
Anyways I wanna say I still love this story and I'm eager to find time to read it. You're one of the most gifted writers. :')
Thankyou for sharing such an amazing story to the site. ^_^
Much LOVE! , <33
Author's Response:
Hey Sabrina!! My girl, how are you? Thats okay hon, I understand! College can be pain in behind sometimes :P I'm in first year of college and it irritates me when the college works comes in between my time with writing. Wow... Thats very nice of you to put the story in fav's. I noticed it too ;) Special thanks for that! The story is always here, you can come and read it whenever you want to, dont worry! Aw, you are making me to blush... Love ya' girl. Your most welcome !!! <3 xx
Date: Oct 08, 2012 02:23 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
Yes! This is gettin so incredibly good girl! I knew it. Michael is falling in love with Nita. And it's a bittersweet punishment. He doesn't wanna fall in love again and tried everything to not make it happen, but it's happening anyway. And even better.. He can't control it! Nor does he need to. But I have a feeling Nita has put up a wall. An even bigger one than before. That Diana incident has scarred her. And with good reason. She doesn't owe Michael anything but he surely owes her everything. I'm glad she's being kinda standoffish and indifferent with him now. Nita is everything he likes in a woman. She's beautiful, smart, feisty and she has good heart and seems to love children! I wasn't expecting the Omer thing but I like it. It adds another dimension to her. She's a mommy. Lol. But she's everything he wants and yet can't have. And that's all HIS fault. He's gonna have to work his ass off now. And she saw the vitiligo and surprisingly I thought he'd freak out a lot worse than how he reacted.. He needs to stop being a coward though and realize and admit that he is falling in love again. And it's not with that haggard ass Diane this time. If he doesn't get it together he's gonna lose Nita. And how funny would it be if sole other man came along and started to show interest in her. I know he'd be über jealous. Get it together or leave it alone Michael.
Author's Response:
Kat !!! :D Thanks Chicka! Hell yes! And he knows it too, but its all denial, denial and denial :P Gosh, girl what are you... mind reader or something? Whenever you review, you almost say what I'm planning on the next chapter! You are a keen observant I see :) That's right! Nita had bend over backwards for him and he betrayed her in the drop of a hat! First love can be a trouble sometimes... Though Nita isn't surprised by his actions she was sure disappointed and every bone in her body is standing out in defence. And then there comes Lil' Omer. I know that nobody must have expected Omer here :P There are more twists for this story in future... ;) He wants Nita now, but does she want him now? Lol yes, Mommy! XD Its kind of cool right haha. Poor Mike, he needs to work his ass off not only in studio... you deserve Mike. LMAO! You thought he react much more than he did? Right! Oh well, its Michael Jackson, the gloved one, the one that covered himself all the time, the one who never wanted anyone to see the real him, both physically and mentally, his disease made him feel too low of himself, physically... how sad! Let Nita in Michael, your attitude might change. As always, you are right Kat :) Haha I always knew by the way you say Diana, that you hate her with passion... haha same here :P *Shakeshand* Thanks SO much hon... :D Next update will be soon ;) <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 01:52 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
First of all, I'm so happy you reach 100 reviews, that's so amazing for just 9 chapters. But you really deserve all of this because this story is simply amazing and so accurate! Like if tomorrow I read that all of this is real i won't even be surprised! And of course i'm so flattered that i'm in your description, i feel like i'm part of this story :).So as long as you post chapters i'll be there! And good luck for your exam! :)
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Yeah yeah I know I said that Mike deserve this treatment but I can't help feeling bad for him. I mean he came back after all!
And the storyline with Omer Bhatti! That's was so unexpect and touching! Nita is definitely the one for Mike. I hope they both realize that and move forward. But everything is going to be so hectic! I mean with the realease of BAD, the BAD World Tour. So much going on. I wonder if they will stick together
Hahah, and the way he had the idea for the intro of IJCSLY it's just hilarious!
Author's Response:
Hey Annie!! :) Thanks so much girl... Wow how sweet of you :) BINGO! I'm SO glad that you find this story believable hon... :P After all, that's where the story heads ;) Of course, You are a part of this story!!! Without your love and support... I don't know... This story might not exist. I think I should put that on the note! Thanks a bunch, I really appreciate it!!! Oh the exams, :( lol Thanks girl... I have biochemistry and then Physiology following up *Sighs* I will work on the story the next moment I finishes those goddamn exams *_*
LOL! Mike got it bad >.< What do you think Nita's going to do next ? About Omer Bhatti, I always thought some strong connection was between Michael and Omer. You can see that he almost raised Omer as his own son... You will soon face another unexpected twist, be ready for it girlfriend XD Yeah you are right! Things are going to be really hectic for them as the times move on, especially bad tour and all. They gonna have lots of time testing and will they survive after all the chaos? We will see :D LMAO Did you like it? I'm glad you fing it Hilarious hon :) Thanks again... Love you <3 xx
Date: Oct 08, 2012 01:38 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
Me being the stupid air head that I am wrote in my first rewiew for this chapter put "Not saying he love her" I mean saying he loves her. Okay I'm glad I got that said now.
Author's Response:
Haha, I dont know but I know one thing for certain, you are not an airhead :P Oh! Yes, his heart's saying he love her but his lips never utter those words out easily :D We'll wait and watch how it turn out... *.* xx
Date: Oct 08, 2012 01:37 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
I forgot, I love the new banner by the way :)
Author's Response:
Heehee (MJ Style) *blushes* Thanks! Thats very sweet of you to review to appreciate about the banner :P Love ya xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 01:36 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe this! Nita has been raising a son this whole time! Then Michael not saying he loves her, God my brain can't process all of this! You seriously floored me, truly, this is getting sooo good. I just hope Nita can forgive Michael. Great job! I love this so much, I am so excited to see the next part. P.S. Good luck with your exam :)
Author's Response:
Hey girl, mywaymj83 (cool name btw.) Hell yes! She's a mommy! Lol! Thanks so damn much girl :) You think she's going to forgive him ? Mmmm.... Me thinks... NO! But anything can happen, keep an eye on them ;) Thanks again Pretty Young Thang! :D I get my behind back to work right after the exams *winks* Aw, Thank you hon :) I'm preparing for it and hoping it would turn out fine! Love you <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2012 08:06 am Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
I have been reading this story for a long time... I must say, I'm pretty much hooked up! I don't review in all stories... if I review that means its the best! There are few stories that addict the readers and create a comfort whenever you read it! This story is definitely one of them. The way you take the story into Michael's life, his demeanor changes, the way you take the readers away from their seat and into Michael and Nita's world and make them believe like it's some kind of his biography! That's pure intelligence! I appreciate you for giving this wonderful story! Continue I'm loving this to death!!!
Author's Response:
Jesus Christ!!! Thanks so much, Michaeallova :) I'm stunned and grateful beyond words!!! You brought light to my face. Thanks so so much for being so kind :) I really appreciate that you chose to read this story and went on to review as well. The story exists only because the reviewers and readers here, I would readily say that! I'm lucky to have you guys, all of you!! :P Thanks so much girl, you shook me up!!! haha! Thats really hair-raising to read! Stay tuned for the next chapter ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2012 08:44 am Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
HEYYYY!!!! WOw you reached 100 reviews for 10 Chapters!! That's AM-FREGGIN'-ZING!!! You deserve it though... :))) Please continue! I cant wait to know what will happen in the future for Michael and NIta! I just know that this story is going to be one of the successful stories here!!! :P
Author's Response:
Hey Nancy!! :) Thanks sooo much Love! I'm working on the update! I want to make it a little special... ;) Next update might be soon loL! GOSH Thanks so effin' much!!! Really mean it! Your words keep me going :D Stay tuned! xx <3