[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:48 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Wow this is interesting so full of mystery. I like how you write and I cant wait to see what happens between Michael and his doctor
Author's Response:
Hello there, Lisa :) Welcome to Michael & Nita's world! Thanks so much for choosing to read this story, I really mean it! Thanks again hun :P
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2012 04:19 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
I just now got the time read this chapter! Thank's for the mention! You are always welcome! Nita is a very nice girl. Perfect girl for Michael!
Author's Response:
Hi girl :) That's fine! Glad that you enjoyed!!! Aw, Thanks so much! It really means a lot to me! Yes, you are right! But we got to wait to see how things might turn out! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2012 04:18 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Looks like Nita's having feelings for Michael too!!! Who wouldn't?? :p pleeeeeaaassee Update soooon!
Author's Response:
Yesss Nita's is actually falling for Michael without her knowing! That's right! WHO WOULDNT FALL FOR MICHAEL FREGGIN' JACKSON! ;P Next update is under work. Thanks a lot hon :) <3 xx
Date: Oct 21, 2012 08:39 am Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!! Great update!!!! Can't wait to read the next part!!!
What happened to Michael!!!! Please, update as soon as you can!!!
THANKS!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Nellan! :) I just red that you are an artist!? Wow I love artists!!! Keep it up girl <3 Thanks so much luv, that's really so sweet of you. Next update is under work. :) I'm actually surprised because I thought you guys would find this chapter boring haha. But you guys are just AMAZING!!! Thanks Nellan :) Michael's going through hell :p Have a nice day! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2012 06:57 am Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
I LOVED THE OMER BHATTI PART! Good job! This story makes sense in lot of ways! Plzzz continue and update soon <3 Oh did I tell you? i was bit startled when i red the final part that nita' having feelings for mike too!!
Author's Response:
Hey girl :) Aw, Thanks so much!! Gosh, That really means a lot!!! Update will be soooooon luv ;) Haha I know... some might don't even expected that right? Because we were always reading it through Michael's pov. :) More Dramas... But the madness gonna end!! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2012 06:55 am Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Awww poooorrr mikey!!! nita's being harsh but I do understand that he totally deserve it but come on..whatever happens..they both have feelings for eachother yet they are not telling out I cant wait till they get back..! update!!
Author's Response:
Hey Mittu! :) Yes Poooor poor Mikey :( I know and yes he totally deserve it. But we have to do something else before the punishment gets bad right? They will soon get back don't worry girl. Update will be soon <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2012 10:54 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Loved the update!Like always. I cant wait for the next update mike needs to realize the pain nita's feeling!!! good job :)
Author's Response:
Hey Nancy! :) Aw, Thanks so much hon :D Yes you are right! Mike needs to realize and experience her pain! Thanks again luv, <3 xx
Date: Oct 20, 2012 10:20 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
You updated ...yay. Loved it.I hope she tells Michael her true feelings and they get together soon :) Cant wait for next update already
Author's Response:
Hi Ida :) LOL! Thanks a lot hon :) I mean it! Mmmm... we will see ;) Next update is on your way sooooon!!! Stay tuned :P <3 xx
Date: Oct 20, 2012 09:51 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Wow.. I can't say I'm surprised of Nita's reaction. It's probably a defense mechanism be because she feels the exact same way he does!!!! She's in love just as much as he is but she's fighting it harder. I feel badly for both of them. Love is a blessing!!!! Smh. But this will be a real test for Michael. I like the fact that Nita is going on a date with someone else. That gives Michael's ass some competition! He needs to work for her. He did do her pretty wrong in the beginning and now she's shunning him and he can't take it. He's hurt. Now he knows how she feels! Feel the burn Michael. Nita is a good woman. She's definitely the type of woman he needs but he needs to work for her. Seriously. And I'm glad she won't make it easy for him. I wonder how the guy is that she's goin out with. Can't wait to see what happens next. Michael is showing up at the doctor so she's gonna have to see him.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! :) Yeah that's right! After all the things she went through... She's still feeling guilty over their one night stand! Mmm... yes because she's also afraid of falling in love :/ Or whatever reason... you will see in the next chapter! Indeed, love is a blessing! But it depends on the people involved right IMAO! Haha yes... Mike's gonna get jealous! Haha you guys are going to meet her arranged fiance/boyfriend whatever in the next chapter... He's an interesting character I say :P Just wait! He needs to work hard to get her... because she's not an easy women. She definitely knows what she wants and what she doesn't. Next update is under work! College is the reason for my late-updates. Before this update I had just finished exams and needed loads and loads of times of rest to compensate all my midnight studies. Yes I'm a midnight studier :P Because that's the only time I study haha! Thanks a lot luv :) See you with next chapter chicka! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2012 06:00 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Oh my, there is so much going on right now! I hope they will overcome the all this madness! And little Omer already in love with Michael! She can't just let him leave. I beleive that Omer need a father figure in his life and Michael really loves him!
Nita, Nita, Nita! Get it together and admit your feelings! I understand that she must be a little confuse about her relationship with Michael because since they had sex it's not very cleat but after that outburst of jealousy from Michael it's clear that she is for him more than just a 'Sex Friends". What's the matter with her??
Destiny is trying to bring the back together like usual! I'm so eager to find out what will happen next. I wonder if Michael will really leave her alone and if it's the case and wonder is Nita will do something and be a little more passive.
Much love, keep on going hun!
(I didn't really get the title tho, I've try to translate it but I didn't understand the meaning)
Author's Response:
Annie!!! Hey girl :) Yes! Just when Nita's thinking it can't get any bad Omer is creating an emotional bond with Michael. Yes, that's where its heading ;) Right that girl needs to grab some guts... Nita's more guilty and pained over the way their relationship started. Things need to change.. mm... That's right! More than what they thought they were.... madness gonna stop in next chapter and I'd already started working on it. It will be up soon <3 Yes its the fate that brings them back again and again! Lets wait and see where they are all gonna end-up! :P Even if Michael leave her alone I don't think fate will leave them... Thanks a lot luv :) It really means a lot! Your words! They keep me going! Love 'ya! Aw, the title 'Shroud is a length of cloth or an enveloping garment in which a dead person is wrapped for burial.' So shrouding means wrapping that burial cloth around. Here Nita is shrouding Michael when he's alive. :P Pretty complicated and confusing for this chapter... I know... I'm weird Heehee. See you soon luv ;) <3 xx
Date: Oct 20, 2012 05:53 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Omq . Im so ready for Michael &&Nita to be toqetdha . Im so happy yhew udated .
Author's Response:
Hi Sky :) Yes but its denial, denial and denial *sighs* Aw, I'm so happy 'yhew' reviewed and enjoyed! :P Thank ya' girl!!! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2012 03:56 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
I've been reading this story in MJJEternal 4 a long time now and I really like it! The plot is very intriguing and the way you take the story really takes me into Michael and Nita's world and make me believe everything. That's something I love in a writer. And God, wow you got 100 reviews for nine chapters thats great isnt it?! but your story totally deserves it!
Author's Response:
Hey girl! Thanks a lot!!! Wow! In MJJEternal?! In the same name? I'll check it out :) Though I like MJ Fiction a lot better... I don't like that forum for some reason. MJ Fiction has a lot of respect and good welcome for writers. So I prefer my home here :D Thanks again Pretty Young Thang! Right?! :P Yes, girl I agree its great and I'm SO thankful for all my readers and reviewers... I didn't think the story would go this far trust me! Next update will be soon <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2012 03:51 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
I just got time to read. man i luv this story its really unique from anyother story i ve red here.. and more than 100 reviews wow thats amazing! Banner is freggin'amazing! I love it!! update soon i cant wait to see what happens next <3 <3 Mittu
Author's Response:
Hey Mittu!! :) How are ya' girl? Thank you SO much!!! It REALLY means a loooot to me!!! Next chapter is under work :) It will be up soon! Lots of love your way, Mittu :) <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 11:51 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
And oh, did I tell ya' the banner is outstanding!!! Really describes the story plot! Amazing creativity you are having!! <333
Author's Response:
Aw, Thanks girl! Yes, that was what my goal is... I didn't think my last banner is 'accurate' for the story ;) Hah, gosh girl Thanks again! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 11:50 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
Aw, Nita... how sweet of her to do something like that !! michael needs to tell out his feelings and stop being this coward ! OMJ I just LOVE this story!! Continue continue and continue :P
Author's Response:
Yes, Nita's a sweet girl *.* Mike needs to grab himself from Diana and let his feelings go in Nita. Apparently, I don't think he's going to be a 'Macho' man in this 'Love' thing :P We'll see <3 Thanks a lot girl!!! I mean it.... <3 xx