[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 07:31 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥
I loved this chapter, wasn't crappy at all. :)
Author's Response:
Hey Autumn :) girl, Thanks so much!!! I really appreciate it hun <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 07:17 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥
It's good to read this new chapter! It's been a longtime but you're finally back! I hope you feel better. I hate the flu too but i always end catching it! I'm weak :-/
Are you kidding? This chapter is great! And I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Katherine talking about Mike's love life was awkward as hell! But I like the fact that Michael finally adit is feeling for Nita! The next step is to adit it... TO HER!
Katherine is right. She is playing hard to get but i'm sure that she is feeling the same for Mike! And the fact that Mike want to see Omer is too cuuuute! I know she didn't want that, but well it's too late know!
And Nita having a date!!!! I know Mike is going to do soething about it, right?
Great chapter like usual, much love!
xoxo Annie :)
Author's Response:
HI there Annie :)
Yeah its been really long, due to the flu. Lol me too. Thanks so much girl :) I really appreciate it! IKR? Parents talking about children's relations... smh! Right you will soon see!!! Well do u think Nita shouldn't go for the date?! We will see... Thanks again Annie :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 07:09 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥
Chapter12? Omg! I gotta go back and read...:O
Smh @ the thieves on this site. Y'all know who y'all are...
Author's Response:
HEY JOY!!!! Girl I have been trying to contact you!!! how are you and how is your problem now? I contacted the moderator... hope u r out of the problem now... did u get my mail?
Lol let me know what you think after reading, you know I like it ;) Yeah girl *sighs* I REALLY hate it when somebody takes over my ideas and stories :( <3 xx
Date: Nov 03, 2012 06:43 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥
Nita has NO reason to be guilty. Michael made his damn bed and now his narrow ass must lie in it. He is a spoiled brat who thinks that because he is who he is, that women are supposed to fall all over themselves for him and now he sees that one doesn't want anything to do with him, he has the audacity to have an attitude? Negro please! Dammit I need to be Nita cuz I'd tell his ass something! News flash: not all women are trifling like Diana Ross' big bushy weave wearin ass so he has no reason to act as jaded as the way he does. The biggest reason why Nita doesn't want him is because of HIM! That is all his doing! And now he can't even fully enjoy falling in love because he's too damn dumb and stuck in the past. He's the reason why Nita isn't with him like he'd want her to be. Ridiculous. And I'm glad she's still goin on her date but I really wish she'd grow a pair and get bold with Michael. Especially when he gets these nasty ass attitudes. He needs a reality check.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat :) I know i know... but who can control his freaky attitudinal skinny ass when its connected to a goddamn ECG and you are a doctor that supposed to heal him?!! :p Right Nita is definitely not who he thought... and he needs to understand it! LOL! Girl you hate Michael? haha i know its a lie... ;) Calm down, Kat hun lol! "News flash: not all women are trifling like Diana Ross' big bushy weave wearin ass so he has no reason to act as jaded as the way he does." Girl you cracked me up LMAO!! Well.. Poor mike haha!!! Big drama in next chapter! ;) You will soon face things, lol! Thanks so much <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 06:26 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Oh God I am so excited right now! I didn't even start to read your chapter because I want to finish a chapter on mine, but i can't take it anymore! Yes i have my own story and i want to thank you because you kind of push me to start one. I want people to be eager to read my story as much i am to read yours.
See ya in a minute with my review of your chapter
xoxo Annie :)
Author's Response:
Hi Annie :) There again! lol! WOW! That's really something! Aw, you r writting a story?! That's awesome! I would love to check it out sometimes!!! *Blushes* I'm glad I sort of encouraged u to write one :) I'm sure they will! Thanks so much Annie, I really appreciate that girl! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 01:14 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
Nita should let Michael in. He made a mistake but he is a good guy and he is what Omer needs. I really hope they sort things out and get together properly
Author's Response:
Nita's scared of her feelings towards Michael... Nita needs to know that Mike won't do anything stupid again before she would get emotionally involved to him right ? XD Thanks a billion Lisa :) Love'ya girl!!! Maddness are going to end soon... just wait! :P Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 12:36 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
What a wonderful chapter. The young child was definitely a big twist to the story and Michael realizing he loves Nita must be good thing.
Author's Response:
Aw, Thanks a lot hun!!! :D I know that everyone would be surprised by O-Bee bit, but I thought to give it a try. I wasn't sure because I thought you guys wouldn't like that! Yes, Mike needs to come out of his shell to claim Nita to himself! You will see <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 12:13 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
I knew Diana would do something to put doubts in Nita's head. Shame on her she is evil. I really hope Michael can get Nita to trust him again.
Author's Response:
Yes, Diana is a jealous hag now!! She needs to back off from them, dont ya' think? He can but it needs time, I guess. Thanks so much reading and reviewing Lisa! :) It really means a lot! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 11:38 am Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
Michael is a stupid fool for taking Diana to her room. I know she is up to something. She was a real witch towards Nita. I really hope she does not bac down and let Diana get Michael
Author's Response:
LMAO!!! I know... but she's his first love right? :p And first love can make u do crazy things! That's right! Diana's a witch... You will see! :D Thanks a lot Lisa! Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 06:29 am Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
Great chapter. I like that is softer side is coming out. I think if he keeps that way he might just have found his Miss right.
I cant believe though that he lied to karen about who he was dating.I guess he was ashamed.
Author's Response:
THANKS SO MUCH, Lisa!!! Yeah Nita must be his Ms. Right! But he needs to undestand that doesn't he? And stop being a chicken about love when he have feelings for her... do you think he will? Well, you will see ;) LMAO! Yes I guess he wasnt proud of having a relationship with Diana!! Lots of love your way!!!! <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 05:46 am Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
Wow I think his softer side is finally coming and Its nice that he is opening up to her. I cant wait to see what happens when they go to Diana's party
Author's Response:
Yeah... Mike's trusting her enough to open up himself to her. We will see where this all gonna end-up! Go ahead and read, I'm sure you would be surprised and shocked lol! Thanks so much girl, love ya!!! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:48 am Title: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥
I dont get why Mchael cant understand why Nita is so upset. He has serious issues he has to deal wth and I sure hope she stays away from him till he does
Author's Response:
Yeah you are absolutely right Lisa. Mike needs to slow down a bit and realize her pain. But he gets what he wants. ;) Thats the mike we all know. Glad to know your opinion hun! Thanks a lot!!! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:39 am Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
wow what a chapter. I did not like the beginning but Michael got softer towards the end and I am glad he did not hurt Nita
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Lisa! It really means a lot!!! Yeah, Mike needs to soften a bit dont cha' think XD Thanks again hun ;) Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:29 am Title: ♥ Chapter 3: Midnight Storms ♥
Oh my I dont like Michael here. He is very forceful and if he does anythin to hurt Nita I sure hope he gets what he deserves
Author's Response:
I know Mike is too violent! Its not completely his fault though :p You will soon see it ;) Thanks a lot!!! Lots of love your way <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:08 am Title: ♥ Chapter 2: Shadows Of Twilight ♥
Wow Michael is very sure of himself. Right now I am not really fond of his attitude towards Nita. I hope he does not force her to do anything she does not want to do
Author's Response:
LOL! Ikr? Michael is a beast! :p I hope that I didn't offen you in any way lisa, by writing Michael like this. Because that's what I thought his other side would be. Especially when he got hurt by Diana like that :) Thanks so much Reviewing hun! I really appreciate it :) <3