Date: Dec 04, 2012 03:28 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
I cant wait t read the next cchapter! Yes I am an Indian n I still reside in India. Its nice to see that you reply to each review. I am so sorry I couldnt give u Diwali greetings (on tym) ;) Belated wishes.... :) LOtsa luv sweet... :*
Author's Response:
Hey Vinaya :) Oh yeah next chapter is on the way trust me ;) Wow that's great! Aw, Thanks hun. Yes, I love responding to each and every review and I want every author to do that too. You know the reviewer's spend their own time to appreciate our work. And every appreciation needs to be acknowledged humbly, dont ya think? Ah that's okay hun. Thank you! I was scared at firecrackers first but I kick ass now lol! XD Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 10:43 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 14: Between The Sand And The Sky ♥
U already know I red this b4 and loved it but nw where is nita and mike plz update soon!!
Author's Response:
Mittu :) Thnx hun! LOL I'm so sorry I know it was horrible to update Mike and Riya's when you were expecting Mike and Nita. I'm sorry I'm insane most of the times. But I promise you that the update will be up soon! Real sooN! ;) lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 05:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 14: Between The Sand And The Sky ♥
This is some sweet sweet chapter!!! Loved the update and Cant wait for the date!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey girl :) Aw, Thanks hun! Yeah The date dont worry it's on the way!!! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Dec 03, 2012 01:27 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 14: Between The Sand And The Sky ♥
Thnaks a lot, I was waiting for the new update girl!! Love the way they meet!!! so cute!
Author's Response:
Hey Nellan :) Thanks so much hun... lol! They are cute arent they? ;) Mike and Nita's date chapter will be up REAL soon! Lots of love <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2012 11:38 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
So good! about to catch up
Author's Response:
Hey Joy!!! :) I'm glad you are lol! Thanks for letting me know. And drop your opinions on your way girl, You know I appreciate it!! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2012 03:49 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥
I cant believe itd they . Goinq on a real date . Its soo excitinq . Omer is too cute doinq what he see Michael doinq . :)
Author's Response:
Hi Sky :) Lol yep, they are actually! hehe! LOL Yes, beware of two year olds... they are so much like monkeys, because they do exactly what you do and end-up getting you caught! Yes, its my experience that speaking here hehe!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 07:27 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥
IMAO! Warner needs his ass kicked out and Nita did just that! So I'm happy!!! yippee! And they are going out on a real date! CANT WAIT! UPDATE!!!! Omer and Mike are sooooo cute!!! And that big speech by Michael was really moving! I'm sure any girl would have moved :) Again, UPDATE!!! HUGE UPDATE! :P
Author's Response:
LMAO! Ikr? Warner isn't the one for Nita!! She got sure of it... but does she know that Mike's the one for her? No. She's isnt sure of it yet! I'm working on the update girl :) Thanks so damn much hun:) Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 07:24 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥
Michael should stop being this chicken shit about love and be a man! Seriously! Nita's now going out a freaking date with another guy and he should do his best to stop it otherwise his girl might change hands...
Story stealers... smh! Girl I'm telling ya' don't even think when you come across them! And Ideas stealing... I know what and who you are talking about. You dont know, this is been the case since this website started. People use other people's ideas... and the real authors feel crushed and leave the website without finishing it breaking the readers!!! You are right if you are a real Michael Jackson they really wouldn't have interest in doing this, damn them! But don't let them get you! You need to face things girl... you need to continue this story no matter what!
Author's Response:
Yeah you are absolutely right Ellah! He needs to voice his feelings to her boldly!!! God, he's 26 for christ's sake not 14! Hehe I hope he manage to keep Nita to himself ;)
Ellah :) Thank you, Thank you and Thank you! Girl You are so comforting! I know about the authors that have left due to things like this! Because I have met a wonderful author in MJJE who was very successful in MJ Fiction and she told me about why she left this site after that incident. I personally prefer MJ Fiction, I feel more home here, more warm and welcoming here than other websites. But the moderator should take a look at things like this! I guess a month before I have seen an author posting about 'Violation of Copyrights' of her story since the girl had posted the same story in this very same website!! I mean WTF? I don't remember the author's name or the stealer's name but now I feel the pain and anger the author must have felt when she found out! Yeah, he was a man who was always honest and personally hated his immitators. But don't worry girl, I would never do a thing like discontinuing this story or disappearing from you guys! I would never do that, I promise! MY readers means the world to me and I will never break their hopes!!! Thanks again pyt! You made my day! Lots of love <3 xx And a Big hug!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 07:19 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥
You write so well... and the scenes are very little and normal but they are very sweet and captivating like the scenes in this chapter! Thank goodness MICHAEL finally realized his love...
Author's Response:
THANKS SO MUCH!!! I really appreciate that girl... I mean it! Yes, but will he tell it out? We'll see ;) Stay tuned! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 07:17 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥
Now Nita won't forgive him! And I'm glad that she understood his feelings better! He's the best girl for her... she even forgot about what he was there wow! why was he still waiting???? Lovely update sweetheart!!! And the O-BEE bit was AWESOME!!! Never red anything like it in a fan fic!! :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's betrayal there! NO GIRL CAN FORGIVE IT SO EASILY!!! Yeah you are right! She's the one for him but she needs to realize it!! He's scared about love!!! Thanks so much sweetheart :P Love ya' girl!!! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 07:14 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥
LOL! Their conversations at the start got me laughing as hell! Nita is too funny and Mike is such a prankster! And they make a great couple! I love the photoshopped pics too! If haven't heard about Photoshop in my life I would believe they are real! Great job!
Author's Response:
LMAO! Ikr? Mike and Nita- SMH! Aw, THANKS SO MUCH girlie! Love you! Gosh that's flattering :) Stay tuned! Next update will be sooooooon <3 Lots of love!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 07:12 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥
Nita's going to rock I just know it!!! And I kind of trust Michael now but i can't wait to read more. Sorry girl I'm back! its been really long since i red this story due to goddamn school... today I'm gonna finish it finally!!
Author's Response:
HI ELLAH!!! Girl I'm SO glad that you are back!!! How are you? lol! IKR? Mike was an ass with Diana! You will see soon!! Thanks so much hun!!! I really appreciate it! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2012 02:03 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Actually my story is inspired by Michael' song Liberian Girl :)
I should watch the first season, because everybody around me is talking about Vampires Diaries!
Author's Response:
First season is the best!
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2012 07:13 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥
Loved it please more
Author's Response:
Hi there :) Thanks so much girl, I'm working on the update! Lots of love <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2012 07:10 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥
Loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!! Cant wait to see them progress together... I hope Mike won't mess up again in their date :p I know stroy and ideas stealing things are very upsetting for a writer... I can feel ya girl but don't give up! Stupids are stupids just don't mind them. Go ahead with your story. At the end of the day, original piece is the master piece... Hope this comforts you. Eager for your next update.
Author's Response:
Hey girl :) Thank u very much! I really appreciate that you took your time in reading and reviewing :D Yeah you are absolutely right Buttonie!! NO I DONT GIVE UP! Dont worry! This story is my baby... I will never let this go! :) Wow gosh Thank really comforted me! Thanks again Pyt, have a wonderful day!!! Lots of love <3