Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 01:24 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Ohmegod omegod omegod!! What on god's green earth made u to make a chapter like thissss? Oh please UPDATE! You shouldnt have stoped there girl! Hw am I going to sleep without knowing what happened later? The huggin thing was so cute Mike baby is in LOVE i'm damn sure and he's as well but Nita's stirring the pot now! Wonderful chapter I hope you feel better now but please update asap!!!! Nancy <33

Author's Response:

Hey Nancy :) Calm down there! Hehe ;) Don't worry, Update is on the way! I'm sorry...lol! Yeah right! They are in love. Michael finally comes out with courage about his love but will Nita? We'll see ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Oh yeah a lot better now Nancy thanks so much hun! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 12:35 am Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

WOOOWWW! This story is getting better and better with each chapter! No wonder I love this to pieces!!! You knock me off my feet with something in every chapter. Infact I read the story again and again whenever I feel bored. I will re-read this chapter for god know how many times!! Oh yeah getting to the story...

He didn’t respond by words. His hands gripped her sides and pulled her into a hug. Nita placed her head on his chest appreciatively with a relaxed sigh, closing her eyes as he buried his head into the crook of her neck and tightened his grip around her waist. “This…” he spoke silkily into her ear. “This is what I want. Just hold me tight for awhile will you?”

Aw sweet!!

I don’t want anything like that. I know you don’t too. I want something more… more permanent, special… and magical. Something that would last for a lifetime.” He licked his lips, as Nita stared at him with much expressions covered on her face but mostly confusion. Deep confusion and deep thinking that the dark green eyes darkened even more. He continued without any rush. “I have been having a bad tendency to see the worst aspect of things and believes that worst will happen lately after seeing so many things in my past. I know I’m confused. But I know one thing for sure. I want you. Hell, I need you!”

Man he almost proposed there!!!

“Bro, I like your music!” he exclaimed when he was standing next to Nita.

Michael peered at him, calmly. “I’m not your brother…” He snapped shaking his head on either side in disapproval

That was HILARIOUS!! I know if Michael was really there that's what he woulda said!!!

Bill shook his head and sighed, giving up. “Keep doing what you are doing Michael. And one day, you’ll be a lonely, miserable old man with no one to care about you and no one for you to care about. I have tried to understand the way you have chosen to live your life these past two years because I know how devastated you were by what Diana did to you! But its over. Finished. She’s somewhere happily with her husband and you are grieving here scared like a coward! Don’t hesitate in these things Michael. Girl like Nita are too rare to find and too easy to miss. And also remember she have guys lining up for her!” his voice was honestly warning. 

100 Percent TRUE! I love Bill Bray for making some sense to Michael!

Michael started to run to her house, hastily. He didn’t want to run into conclusions though what he saw was exactly what it looked like. He felt like an atom bomb waiting to explode as he entered her door, ticking, ticking and ticking. He didn’t even call out her name, he climbed the stairs and ran up to her room, and opened the door on the spot, to see her standing their without a pant and buttoning her shirt before she turned her head swiftly and gasped a loudest terrorized gasp when she saw him. The ticking had stopped as Michael looked at her, his eyes so ached, and the bomb blasted inside him as he realized that she was cheating on him!

I know this is not much promising to believe. I want to read you next update before I judge Nita. I don't think she cheated on Michael. OH excuse me she's not his girlfriend at first place! He's the one that went for Diana hag ass when they were actually 'pretending' to be in a relationship!!! Though, yes, that was a shocker indeed! But I want to read the next update! SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! <3 <3 <3

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Author's Response:

WOW! Jesus Ellah THANKS!!! SO FREAKING MUCH!!! I loved every way you read by point by point! Is there anything more rewarding for a writer more than this?!! Thanks so much sweetheart! LOVE YOU SO MUCH! Mmm... You won't judge Nita now? Okay we'll see ;) Nope you guys can get nothing out of me. *Tight lipped* Hehehe! Thanks again PYT! I don't know how could I ever say it enough! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 11:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

First of all, I know I'm kinda late but this is...omg! I hate Nita now! How could she do this to Michael? What is her problem?!! Is she that desperate for sex! Oh Man, I actually want to know brief explanation of what happened in Nita's case! She must have been carried away... i guess. AWESOME Chapter Mady! Just like always! Keep up the good work!! You are my fav writer and this my MOST Fav story!!!! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Thradluvr Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 10:52 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Oh Man! I was shattered the moment I red this! Michael oh Michael. I feel for him! And oh Nita please that can't be true! Please update as soon as you can!!! You shouldn't have stopped their!!!! Pleassseeeee

Author's Response:

Hi there :) I know i know I shouldn't have stopped their but I had have to lol! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing I really appreciate that!! Oh yeah the update is on the way ;) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 10:20 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Oh no!!! I nvr in a million  years thought this would happen. Something in the pit of my stomach tells me that there has to be some misunderstanding.

I hope this sets your mood happy.

as of now, YOU ARE MY FAVVVVVVV WRITER ON THE SITE. :)

luv u sweet. :)

 

Author's Response:

HEY Vinaya :) LOL! Ikr? I know you guys wasn't expecting this but all the madness is going to stop. Next chapter must answer all your questions ;) Aha! Really? You have to wait and see :p Oh yeah your reviews always bring light to my face!! AW, Gosh! Is that real or are you just saying to light up my mood? *eyes doubtfully* Since I know I'm not a great writer at all lol You are such a sweetheart! Love you more hun :) Lots of love <3 xx 

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 03:54 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

No, there has to be more to that. But if it ain't, this gurl is a hyprocrite. Cuz she da main 1 asking if Mikey got somebody else and she da main 1 dat do, smh head. Sad, sad, sad.

Author's Response:

Hey Alley :) LOL! Guys you all are just such 'smart asses!' You almost pull the thing out of my mouth if I am not aware lol! I'm thankful for having such avid readers!!! Thanks so much for your lovely review hun. Next update will be very soon ;) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 01:13 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Wow!!!! Now this is getting good! First let me say I love Bill! He tells Michael what he needs to know and not what he wants to hear! Everything he said I completely agree with. Michael is going to grow old and alone if he keeps being a damn coward. Nita is special and a good woman. Lots of men would be lucky to have her and take Michael's place and not hesitate about it either! Now as far as men.. Nita and Stevie couldve had sex or possibly fooled around and she may have stopped him. Either way, she's NOT his girlfriend and Michael hasn't had the balls to this point to even admit how he feels for her. So technically, Nita is fair game! And have we forgotten the Diana incident? All this is, is payback for what Michael has done. So let his ass be jealous!!!!! This is what he gets for causing Nita to be an emotional ping pong ball! I do hope they end up together but Michael needs to man up NOW. 

Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) Aw, Thanks chicka! HEHE You always make me laugh with your attitudinal hilarious reviews and I just love it! I love how you always team up against Michael hehe! You are right! As always you made a point! Nita is not his GIRLFRIEND. Or not yet! They hadn't officially agreed to anything and here he is pounding on his feet like she's his dear wife of years. LMAO @ Diana part! Oh yeah he deserve it! Thanks so for your sensible review hun! You are always honest :D Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 11:24 am Title: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Okay where can I start???? First of what the F*** is Nita doing with that man?!?!?!?!? Now I will give her the benifit of the doubt and say he could have raped her?? But if that was his intention earlier Nita would have ran to Michael for protection, not to tell him to leave her alone!!! Does she need sex that bad that she'll randomaly screw a co-worker???? Poor Michael after he finally realized his love for her and now this. Its now probably going to take a while for him to rekindle those feelings for her again. I swear this story gets more interesting as you continue to write! This story is one of the best of read on this site. Plus I want to thank you for for updating today, I have a bad cold and this lifted my spirts up. This chapter was not boring at all, this was a great and shocking chapter, great job. Two thumbs up!!!!!!

Author's Response:

HEY Girl!!!! Hehe Calm down... easy there Chicka! LOL! You will see! That's all I gotta say about Nita's part :D Michael's shattered, that's for sure! The madness needs an end don't ya think? And its not too far away. In fact its real close ;) WOW Thanks SO much hun :) Gosh that's too much! I really appreciate it! Love ya' girl! Oh god, really? I know how cold is *sighs* Take care of yourself girl. Have some hot soup and more chicken with pepper and chilly. Avoid the oily ones though. Hope you feel better soon :) Ah Thanks again girlfriend! Lots of love <3 xx